maut~~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 07, 2009, 07:02:28 AM
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ek ooljhe huye deemaag ka fitoor kaho ya uska dard.....ek ajeeb si kasamkash jo hamesha chalti rehti hai oosi ko keh raha hoon


maut jo humko chahe toh hum yeh bataye
kii khwahish toh ab bas wahi hai

na yeh zindgi hai , na woh zindgi hai
meri mohabbat to ab bas wahi hai

mujhe maut de do. ootha lo yeh khanjar
haan cheero, haan phado, sukha do samandar

is behti hawa k paron ko bhi katro
in panchhiyon ko chumwa do darakhto k andar

mujhe maut hi chahiye ab is jahan se
nahin jaanta main kissii k RAHEM ko

mujhe tum mita do , haan haan mita do
diya kya hai mujhko , haan aa kar bata do

jahan bhi hai dekha haan dikhti hai laashen
kissii kii mohabbat main bikti hai laashen

jo karta mohabbat woh tadpa bahut
woh reh gaya ban k dil k tamashe

kissii ki nazar main dekho agar tum
khoon ootar k hai aaya ab is kadar hai

jo tum kahoge kissii se haan "Saahil'
mohabbat hai tumse, woh roya bahut hai
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2009, 08:08:06 AM »
bahut khoob salil ji.
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salma786
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2009, 08:17:46 AM »
Very different and nicely described Salil ji...  Applause Applause Applause
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2009, 09:12:14 AM »
ek ooljhe huye deemaag ka fitoor kaho ya uska dard.....ek ajeeb si kasamkash jo hamesha chalti rehti hai oosi ko keh raha hoon


maut jo humko chahe toh hum yeh bataye
kii khwahish toh ab bas wahi hai

na yeh zindgi hai , na woh zindgi hai
meri mohabbat to ab bas wahi hai

mujhe maut de do. ootha lo yeh khanjar
haan cheero, haan phado, sukha do samandar

is behti hawa k paron ko bhi katro
in panchhiyon ko chumwa do darakhto k andar

mujhe maut hi chahiye ab is jahan se
nahin jaanta main kissii k RAHEM ko

mujhe tum mita do , haan haan mita do
diya kya hai mujhko , haan aa kar bata do

jahan bhi hai dekha haan dikhti hai laashen
kissii kii mohabbat main bikti hai laashen

jo karta mohabbat woh tadpa bahut
woh reh gaya ban k dil k tamashe

kissii ki nazar main dekho agar tum
khoon ootar k hai aaya ab is kadar hai

jo tum kahoge kissii se haan "Saahil'
mohabbat hai tumse, woh roya bahut hai

GUD WORK....S2002
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salil2002
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2009, 09:21:34 AM »
bahut khoob salil ji.
Very different and nicely described Salil ji...  Applause Applause Applause
GUD WORK....S2002


shukriya madhuwesh ji, salma ji, and K_A ji

maut se kya parda karna yeh roohon pe dastak deti hai
surat pe mitte aur honge, yeh seerat par nazar rakhti hai
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dead heart
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2009, 09:33:44 AM »
ek ooljhe huye deemaag ka fitoor kaho ya uska dard.....ek ajeeb si kasamkash jo hamesha chalti rehti hai oosi ko keh raha hoon


maut jo humko chahe toh hum yeh bataye
kii khwahish toh ab bas wahi hai

na yeh zindgi hai , na woh zindgi hai
meri mohabbat to ab bas wahi hai

mujhe maut de do. ootha lo yeh khanjar
haan cheero, haan phado, sukha do samandar

is behti hawa k paron ko bhi katro
in panchhiyon ko chumwa do darakhto k andar

mujhe maut hi chahiye ab is jahan se
nahin jaanta main kissii k RAHEM ko

mujhe tum mita do , haan haan mita do
diya kya hai mujhko , haan aa kar bata do

jahan bhi hai dekha haan dikhti hai laashen
kissii kii mohabbat main bikti hai laashen

jo karta mohabbat woh tadpa bahut
woh reh gaya ban k dil k tamashe

kissii ki nazar main dekho agar tum
khoon ootar k hai aaya ab is kadar hai

jo tum kahoge kissii se haan "Saahil'
mohabbat hai tumse, woh roya bahut hai
Applause Applause Mashallah Mashallah Salil bhaijan...Bahaut khubsoorat...
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2009, 10:44:26 AM »


shukriya madhuwesh ji, salma ji, and K_A ji

maut se kya parda karna yeh roohon pe dastak deti hai
surat pe mitte aur honge, yeh seerat par nazar rakhti hai
Very nice Dear......

Maut to aani hai aa jayegi ek din
jab tak jinda hai mohabbat ki baat kar
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honeyrose
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2009, 12:36:18 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob salil bhai..
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2009, 02:06:18 PM »
bahot dard hai yaar! bahot ahchche!
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2009, 05:39:13 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot khoob Salil
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2009, 05:44:17 PM »
Bahut Alag Hatt Ke... Umda Peshkash Hai aapki SALIL Bhai.. waqai aapki Qalam Ka Jawab Nahi.. Bahut khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2009, 02:45:11 AM »
ek ooljhe huye deemaag ka fitoor kaho ya uska dard.....ek ajeeb si kasamkash jo hamesha chalti rehti hai oosi ko keh raha hoon


maut jo humko chahe toh hum yeh bataye
kii khwahish toh ab bas wahi hai

na yeh zindgi hai , na woh zindgi hai
meri mohabbat to ab bas wahi hai

mujhe maut de do. ootha lo yeh khanjar
haan cheero, haan phado, sukha do samandar

is behti hawa k paron ko bhi katro
in panchhiyon ko chumwa do darakhto k andar

mujhe maut hi chahiye ab is jahan se
nahin jaanta main kissii k RAHEM ko

mujhe tum mita do , haan haan mita do
diya kya hai mujhko , haan aa kar bata do

jahan bhi hai dekha haan dikhti hai laashen
kissii kii mohabbat main bikti hai laashen

jo karta mohabbat woh tadpa bahut
woh reh gaya ban k dil k tamashe

kissii ki nazar main dekho agar tum
khoon ootar k hai aaya ab is kadar hai

jo tum kahoge kissii se haan "Saahil'
mohabbat hai tumse, woh roya bahut hai

Bahut khoob salil... Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: May 08, 2009, 05:52:39 AM »
bahoot khoob salil
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salil2002
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«Reply #13 on: May 08, 2009, 01:33:54 PM »
Applause Applause Mashallah Mashallah Salil bhaijan...Bahaut khubsoorat...
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob salil bhai..
bahot dard hai yaar! bahot ahchche!
Applause Applause Applause

Bohot bohot khoob Salil
Bahut Alag Hatt Ke... Umda Peshkash Hai aapki SALIL Bhai.. waqai aapki Qalam Ka Jawab Nahi.. Bahut khooooooooob.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
Behad dard bhari kavita likhi hai aapne Salil ji..har lafz gahre gham se sarabor hai      
Bahut khoob salil... Applause
bahoot khoob salil
shukriya jaya di, talat di, pooja di angel dear, kaash, vicky bhai aur sidra ji
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salil2002
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«Reply #14 on: May 08, 2009, 01:35:28 PM »
Very nice Dear......

Maut to aani hai aa jayegi ek din
jab tak jinda hai mohabbat ki baat kar
thanks shwetha

mohabbat ho tumse yeh khwahish bhi hai magar
na jaane kyun apni dosti ka khyal karta hoon
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