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Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

by soudagar on July 31, 2012, 08:02:13 AM

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Ek bahut hi ajeeb qalaam likh rha hun jo mujhse juda hai....... Haan shayd is ajeebogareeb qalaam ko samjhne mein thodi pareshani ho aapko...........

Bda dukh hua yeh jaankar mera dushman mera bhai mar gaya
apna nahi tha wo phir bhi na jane kaise dil mein ghar karr gaya

jab bhi vaar karta tha wo mere jism par vaar karta thaa
na jane kaise is baar wo apno ki tarah dil par chot kar gaya

use dekh yahi sochta tha main kash aise dusman mere apne hote
aastin mein nahi raha wo khule hi dusmani ka iqrar tha kar gaya

apne to roz ho mujhe chhup chhup kar ek nayi mout marte hain
ek wo hee to tha jo mujhe sare aam marne ki lalkar kar gayya

nahi hoti thi aankhtab bhi nam jab apne zakhm par namak chhidkate the
naa jaane kaise dusman ke chhod chale jane gam meri aankh nam kar gaya


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Re: Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

«Reply #1 on: July 31, 2012, 08:13:45 AM »

Quote from: soudagar on July 31, 2012, 08:02:13 AM

Ek bahut hi ajeeb qalaam likh rha hun jo mujhse juda hai....... Haan shayd is ajeebogareeb qalaam ko samjhne mein thodi pareshani ho aapko...........

Bda dukh hua yeh jaankar mera dushman mera bhai mar gaya
apna nahi tha wo phir bhi na jane kaise dil mein ghar karr gaya

jab bhi vaar karta tha wo mere jism par vaar karta thaa
na jane kaise is baar wo apno ki tarah dil par chot kar gaya

use dekh yahi sochta tha main kash aise dusman mere apne hote
aastin mein nahi raha wo khule hi dusmani ka iqrar tha kar gaya

apne to roz ho mujhe chhup chhup kar ek nayi mout marte hain
ek wo hee to tha jo mujhe sare aam marne ki lalkar kar gayya

nahi hoti thi aankhtab bhi nam jab apne zakhm par namak chhidkate the
naa jaane kaise dusman ke chhod chale jane gam meri aankh nam kar gaya

chupa hua dushman khule hue dushman se zada khatrnaak hota hai.main buss itna hii samajh payaa aap ke kalaam se


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Re: Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

«Reply #2 on: July 31, 2012, 08:56:36 AM »

Bohut khoob saudagar jee, isi baat par ek shair yaad aa raha hai,

Faqat ye badhta hua dast E dosti hi nahiN,

HameN qubool hai wo bhi jo aastin meN hai.... N/M


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masoom shahjada

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Re: Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

«Reply #3 on: July 31, 2012, 08:58:50 AM »

Wow,
bahoot alag see kalam hai ye.
Bilkul alag Theme.
Teen chaar baar es kalaam ko padaa tab jaakar kuch samajh aayaa.
Khair apne kalaamo se Yoindia Shayariadab ko gulzaar karte rahe.


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Re: Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

«Reply #4 on: July 31, 2012, 10:07:59 AM »

bahut samvedansheel


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Re: Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

«Reply #5 on: July 31, 2012, 10:26:40 AM »

bahut bahut khoob Soudagar ji...!!! Bahut khoob likha hai aapne...!!!


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Re: Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2012, 04:07:55 PM »

heart touching Saudagar jee


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Re: Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

«Reply #7 on: July 31, 2012, 04:30:20 PM »

bahut sahi pehchana K_A aawaj ji........ bas ek baat aur khule dushman achha lagne lag jata hai jab humein pata ho ki apne humein kaise chhup chhup kar chot pahuncha rahe hai..


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«Reply #8 on: July 31, 2012, 04:30:49 PM »

Nice,soudagar ji.


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Re: Mera dushman mera bhai mar gya..........soudagar

«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2012, 05:13:51 PM »

wwaaaahhh aapka khayab bohot he khob tha saudagar bhai

behad khoob likha apne Applause

mai apke us dushman bhai ki or se kehna chahunga

ye to is maut ne mujhe masroof kar dia

varna hum to unmai se hain
jo apne duhmano ko bhi akela hone nahi dete