Mera Hi Dil Kyun......

by Aryaan on September 10, 2005, 06:23:46 AM
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #15 on: September 12, 2005, 10:43:53 AM »
Quote from: "nikki"
once again very very nice Aryaan...

iss layak hote hum to kya gum tha
humein bhi koi itni chahat dene wala milta
yeh kya hamare liye kum tha

hum kissi ke raaste ka diya ban paate
humara bhi koi intzaar karta

kissi ke gum hum baant lete
koi hamare zakhmon ki dawa karta

aisi kismat hum khuda se likhwa nahi paye
issi liye to kissi ki duniya basa nahi paye


sath tera paker tab bhi khush hua tah mai,....

khush hua hu mai aab bhi,........

gam hai to is batt ka ,.......

na hasa saka tumjhe tab bhi ......

na hasa saka tujhe aab bhi,..............
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Aryaan
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«Reply #16 on: September 12, 2005, 06:36:17 PM »
Nice Reply Tushar.....
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nikki
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«Reply #17 on: September 13, 2005, 12:02:40 AM »
wow very nice reply Tushar.............sachiii mein bahut acha laga......
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Aryaan
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«Reply #18 on: September 15, 2005, 03:24:02 AM »


Meri bad-naseebi yaad rakhne ki fursat kahan kisi ko
Wafaa pal do pal ki mehmaan hoti hai
Palkon taley aansoo chupa kar, naQaab orhey khushi ka
Harr baar muskurahat ki yehi dastaan hoti hai
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jalpari
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«Reply #19 on: September 19, 2005, 06:29:15 AM »
wowww Aryaan, shaeri karna to koi aap se seekhe.. bohat hi acha likha hai as usual..
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #20 on: September 19, 2005, 10:55:03 AM »
aryaan ji...achha lagta hai jab aapki shayari ke sang kutchh shabd hum bhi aapkey saath share karein...phursat toh khoob milti hai sabhi ko..per kis raah se guzarti hai...sab apna apna aasmaan hai our sabki apni apni zamee hai..


Jab kabhi duniya se hai phursat mujhe mili
Woh khaas pal sharaab main yuin hi nikal gaye.

pee chuka hoon main, aur ab bacha hai kya
raat din hisaab main yuin hi nikal gaye.

Gamon pe tha bharosa us 'harsh' ko ai dil,
Rafta-rafta unko magar, woh khud hi chhal gaye.
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Aryaan
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«Reply #21 on: September 21, 2005, 05:10:49 AM »
Bohat khoob Harash... keep wrinting...
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Pooja
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«Reply #22 on: September 21, 2005, 10:06:36 PM »
wah bahoot khoob Harsh ji!!
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bond
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«Reply #23 on: September 21, 2005, 11:53:24 PM »
bahut sunder harsh
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harashmahajan
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«Reply #24 on: September 22, 2005, 12:40:44 AM »
bahoot bahoot shukriya aryan ji puja ji our Bond ji..I love to be there in your ink...
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Aryaan
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«Reply #25 on: October 24, 2005, 08:08:31 PM »
Kal tak woh sath thi mere ab door hai mujh se
Uss ke sath jo hai guzra mujhe woh waQt la do

Jab se uss se bichra hoon waqt tham sa gaya hai
Uss ke sath jo guzrey hain mujhe woh pal la do

Hoti thi woh jab sath rehta tha darr bicharney ka
Uss ke sath yeh bichra huwa mujhe darr la do

Hoti thi sath tau umeedein thi bohat zindagi se
Uss ke sath hi chali gayi zindagi tau mujhe maut la do

Hoti jab thi woh sath mere tau duniya meri thi
Aryaan uss ke sath gaya mera wajood mujhe la do
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Pooja
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«Reply #26 on: October 24, 2005, 09:36:00 PM »
Wah kaya Zazbaat hai!!! bahoot khoobsoorat!!! Good work Aryaan!!!

Kho gai her Umind, bhir bhi Na-Umind hua nahi jaata
le gaya jo sab kuch mera, usse dil ka tha naata!!

Paakar usse jo kho diya, yah ahsaas ab dil se nahi jaata
ho chuka yah fansalla, bhir bhi yakeen nahi iss per atta!!

Kaise maan jaau mai, yah ab tak samajh main nahi atta
kayun in sooni sooni ankho mai, koi ashaq abhi nahi atta!!!
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waheed_rose2004
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«Reply #27 on: October 24, 2005, 11:58:30 PM »
wonderfull  Harsh........ Pooja...........Aryan........

kaise kahein ke jaan se pyara nahi raha
yeh aur baat ab wo hamara nahi raha
ansoo tere bhi khushk hue aur meray bhi
nam ab kisi nadi ka kinara nahi raha
kuch din tumharay laut ke anay ki aas thi
ab is umeed ka bhi sahara nahi raha
rastay me wo najoom ke tabdil ho gaye
in khirkion me ik bhi tara nahi raha
samjhay thay dusro se bohat mukhtafleef tujhe
kya maan lein ke to bhi hamara nahi raha
haaton pe bujh gai hai mukadar ki kehkashan
ya rakh hogaya wo sitara nahi raha
tum aetbar us ke liye kion udas ho
ik shaks jo kabhi bhi tumhara nahi raha.............nm
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Pooja
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«Reply #28 on: October 25, 2005, 12:35:40 AM »
wah kaya baat hai, Good one Waheed!!
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Aryaan
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«Reply #29 on: October 25, 2005, 01:01:56 AM »
Bohat shukriya Waheed & Pooja...

Bohat khoob Pooja & Waheed....kya baat hai..
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