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Mujhe na uljhaao tum is tarah bhi apni saanso me
Ki dard ban kar nazar aane lagu tumhari ankho me,
Kabhi jo mehsus karna chaho tum tanhaai me mujhe
Dhoond lena mil jayega mera wajood teri baahon me
Is gujarte wakt mein abhi to bahut kuch hona tha
Chhupa kar sar apna tere phelu me bahut rona tha,
Main ho gaya khaak kuch adhoori si khwaahish liye
Abhi to rokar tera ye daaman ansuo se bhigona tha
kabi to sun is mitti se siskiyan meri ab bhi aati hai
tu anjane me hi sahi jab is raah se gujar jati hai,
Tu qaid hai apni had mein maine ye bhi maana magar
Phir meri kabra dekh kar kyo teri ankh bhar aati hai
Kuch is tarah main teri yaadon se huaa be- zaar hoon
bas kisi ki duaaon ke beech mein dafan ek mazaar hoon,
Jisme tamaam sadiyan gujaar di raah takte takte tune
Jo karte karte tu guzar gayaa main wahi 'Intezar' hoon… !
Shukriya
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«Reply #1 on: December 01, 2010, 08:00:14 AM » |
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wah wah
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«Reply #2 on: December 01, 2010, 09:09:35 AM » |
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«Reply #3 on: December 01, 2010, 03:41:04 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Killbill ji bas yun hi saath rahiye humesha... Intezar ! wah wah
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«Reply #4 on: December 01, 2010, 03:57:38 PM » |
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mera wajood teri baahon me meri zindagi teri panaon me dil ka sukoon teri nigahon me bas ja iss kadar ruh me mere jaise basta hai tu meri duwaon me!!!! hehehe lo ab tumhara poem bigaad dia mene  aisa saath dunga to tum nikal padoge dande lekar meri galiyon me ... mujhe marne ke liye.. khus rahiye Intezaar ji |
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«Reply #5 on: December 01, 2010, 04:02:35 PM » |
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Shukriya Madhuwesh ji aapko hamaara likhna aur hamaara dard pasand aaya... bahut bahut shukriya aapka... aur dard to har dil mein hota hai madhuwesh ji... aapke regular comments ke liye bhi shukriya... Intezar ! |
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«Reply #6 on: December 01, 2010, 04:04:33 PM » |
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kaise bhi rehiye bas saath rehiye... phir koi dard de ya de sitam kisi se kya shikwa killbill ji bas wo hamesha mere saath rahe... Intezar ! mera wajood teri baahon me meri zindagi teri panaon me dil ka sukoon teri nigahon me bas ja iss kadar ruh me mere jaise basta hai tu meri duwaon me!!!! hehehe lo ab tumhara poem bigaad dia mene aisa saath dunga to tum nikal padoge dande lekar meri galiyon me ... mujhe marne ke liye.. khus rahiye Intezaar ji |
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«Reply #7 on: December 01, 2010, 04:32:14 PM » |
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Mujhe na uljhaao tum is tarah bhi apni saanso me
Ki dard ban kar nazar aane lagu tumhari ankho me,
Kabhi jo mehsus karna chaho tum tanhaai me mujhe
Dhoond lena mil jayega mera wajood teri baahon me
Is gujarte wakt mein abhi to bahut kuch hona tha
Chhupa kar sar apna tere phelu me bahut rona tha,
Main ho gaya khaak kuch adhoori si khwaahish liye
Abhi to rokar tera ye daaman ansuo se bhigona tha
kabi to sun is mitti se siskiyan meri ab bhi aati hai
tu anjane me hi sahi jab is raah se gujar jati hai,
Tu qaid hai apni had mein maine ye bhi maana magar
Phir meri kabra dekh kar kyo teri ankh bhar aati hai
Kuch is tarah main teri yaadon se huaa be- zaar hoon
bas kisi ki duaaon ke beech mein dafan ek mazaar hoon,
Jisme tamaam sadiyan gujaar di raah takte takte tune
Jo karte karte tu guzar gayaa main wahi 'Intezar' hoon… !
Shukriya
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«Reply #8 on: December 01, 2010, 04:34:52 PM » |
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shukriya brokenbyluv ji... bahut bahut shukriya aapka ki aap ne idhar ka rukh kiya... kayi arse ho gaye the aap ke comments ko... yun hi aate rehiye... muskuraate rahiye aur phir se ek baar aap ka tahe dil se shukriya...
Intezar !
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«Reply #9 on: December 01, 2010, 04:42:47 PM » |
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shukriya brokenbyluv ji... bahut bahut shukriya aapka ki aap ne idhar ka rukh kiya... kayi arse ho gaye the aap ke comments ko... yun hi aate rehiye... muskuraate rahiye aur phir se ek baar aap ka tahe dil se shukriya...
Intezar !
Maafi chahungi intezar ji aage se zarur apki threads per commment karne ki koshish karungi..take care.. |
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«Reply #10 on: December 01, 2010, 04:46:23 PM » |
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aap to dil se laga baithe hamaari baaton ko... comments ki jaroorat nahin hai aap ne ek nazar bhar dekh liya yahan wahi kaafi hai... hume logo ka haal pataa chal jaata hai unke ek baar yaha se guzar bhar jaane se... ! Intezar !
Maafi chahungi intezar ji aage se zarur apki threads per commment karne ki koshish karungi..take care..
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«Reply #11 on: December 01, 2010, 04:47:24 PM » |
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aap to dil se laga baithe hamaari baaton ko... comments ki jaroorat nahin hai aap ne ek nazar bhar dekh liya yahan wahi kaafi hai...
hume logo ka haal pataa chal jaata hai
unke ek baar yaha se guzar bhar jaane se... !
Intezar !
Bahut khoob...shukriya.. |
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«Reply #12 on: December 05, 2010, 05:14:18 PM » |
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Good one Intezar Ji
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«Reply #13 on: December 06, 2010, 12:26:27 AM » |
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Shukriya Rajesh ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka... Intezar ! Good one Intezar Ji
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