' Mere Baad Phool Na Rakhna Mere Mazaar Par...! '

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Kal kehte rahe hein vahii kal kehte raheinge
Har daur main unn pe Ghazal kehte raheinge


By Kaleem Aajiz Ji

Istefsaar kiya na karo mujhse mere haal par
Tanhaa Ghaur karne bhi do apne malaal par

Jab jab chehra apna dikhaata houn aaine ko
ThappaR lagaata hai mera aks apne gaal par

Ansoo khoon ke rulaaya zindagi ne mujh ko
Kuch daag paDe hein mere kissi rumaal par

Bastaa houn ab talak unn ke khayaalon main
Hansi bahout hi aati hai apne iss khayaal par

Ji chahataa hai puuch hi lun unn se woh baat
Shaayad woh ruuth jaayegi mere sawaal par

Saare asmaan se behtar apna do gaz zameen
Aaz kabhi kiya nahin karte paraaye maal par

Jo bhi aata hai jaana paDega usse  ‘Amanush ’
Khudaa ke siwaa zabt kissi ka nahin kaal par

Mere baad phool na rakhna mere mazaar par
Phool jyaadaa acche lagte hein apne Daal par


Istefsaar : sawaal
Ghaur karma : to meditate
Aaz : laalach
Zabt : control


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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2009, 04:57:34 PM »
Nice Lines Gud Work  icon_salut icon_salut  icon_salut
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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2009, 11:33:29 PM »
Thanks so much for appreciating

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«Reply #3 on: September 10, 2009, 12:47:18 AM »
Wah wah bahut khoob Amanush ji very beautiful creation. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2009, 05:46:58 PM »
Pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa, Madhuvesh Ji...!

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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2009, 06:40:00 PM »
Waah Amanush ji bahut hi acha likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2009, 06:58:45 PM »
Nice   Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 04, 2009, 12:13:32 AM »
Waah Amanush ji bahut hi acha likha hai

Shukriyaa, Vikk Ji...!

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«Reply #8 on: October 04, 2009, 12:15:18 AM »
Nice NaNaNa NaNaNa NaNaNa

Thanks for comments, Rishi Ji...!

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«Reply #9 on: July 01, 2011, 06:55:34 PM »
lajawaab ghazal amanush ji…
kya ghazab ke lines hain …
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«Reply #10 on: July 03, 2011, 07:00:18 PM »
Isse pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriya, Sarfira Ji...!

Keep yourself well, ok...?

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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2011, 08:18:56 PM »
haha  ok boss Usual Smile
aap kbhi kbhi aa jaya karo……:-)
nd ya keep urself fit too … ok !!!!!!
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