mere dil ke tukde itne hue

by saahill on February 18, 2011, 05:26:42 PM
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kab se palkieyn nam thi meri ansuon ke sailaab rok na paaya
chupa tha gham jo dil mein mere is sailaab mein behkar aaya ,

ghumnaami ke andhere mein maine khud ko apne app se hi ,
bewaafi ke gham ke peeche apna chehra tha cchupaaya ,

chot thi dil par kuch aisi lagi ke ab tak main behosh tha
hui dard jab pyar ke zakham par to main tha hosh mein aaya ,

darta hoon mehfil se ab to na jaane yeh kya haal hai ,
tanhayee mein bhi darta hoon dekh loon jo khud ka saaya ,

bikhra bikhra sa lagta hai jaise khilona kaanch ka tha ,
mere dil ke tukde itne hue ke ab tak main samet na paaya
mere dil ke tukde itne hue ke ab tak main samet na paaya
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2011, 06:01:44 PM »
KALAM KO DARD ME DUBOKAR KAR LIKHA HAI KYA SAAHIL JI

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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2011, 01:29:36 AM »
Sahil Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab aapke dard bhare ahsaas O khayaal khoob rahe..
Aur aapne bayaaN bhi achcha kiya hai daad ....

Aur aakhri ashaar jo kaha hai aapne waqai lajawaab raha..
SekdoN daad us ashar par kabol kijiye..

Likhate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: February 19, 2011, 11:12:32 AM »
shukrya kamal ji parwaaz ji apka sath dete rahiyee
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«Reply #4 on: February 19, 2011, 11:25:55 AM »
nice lines sahil ji...
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2011, 11:27:55 AM »
bahut khub saahilji....

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2011, 11:43:04 AM »
kab se palkieyn nam thi meri ansuon ke sailaab rok na paaya
chupa tha gham jo dil mein mere is sailaab mein behkar aaya ,

ghumnaami ke andhere mein maine khud ko apne app se hi ,
bewaafi ke gham ke peeche apna chehra tha cchupaaya ,

chot thi dil par kuch aisi lagi ke ab tak main behosh tha
hui dard jab pyar ke zakham par to main tha hosh mein aaya ,

darta hoon mehfil se ab to na jaane yeh kya haal hai ,
tanhayee mein bhi darta hoon dekh loon jo khud ka saaya ,

bikhra bikhra sa lagta hai jaise khilona kaanch ka tha ,
mere dil ke tukde itne hue ke ab tak main samet na paaya
mere dil ke tukde itne hue ke ab tak main samet na paaya

Nice one ... saahill Ji !

very touching .............. !
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2011, 12:51:50 PM »
bahut khoob saaahil jiii,

bahutt achha likha apne..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2011, 01:06:23 PM »
shukyra abhi ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2011, 03:47:44 PM »
shukrya anshu ji manjil ji manjum ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 20, 2011, 06:59:12 PM »
Bahut Khub Sahill Ji
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«Reply #11 on: February 20, 2011, 08:22:34 PM »
thx rishi bhai
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