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«Reply #30 on: September 15, 2010, 09:01:55 PM » |
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hmm bht khub sajid ji..ab ye aaj ka aakhri sher aapke naam...
mahobbat me yunhi ruthne ka bhi mazaa alag hai
wo manaye hume pyaar se iska bhi maza alag hai
nakhre dikhayen unhe itraake aur satayen jii bharke
yaar tum kya jano unhe tadpaane ka mazaa bhi alag hai...!!!
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«Reply #31 on: September 15, 2010, 09:15:30 PM » |
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Ab to guzregi raat aakho me
Aur intezar sehar ka hoga
Tum chale jao yeh tumko haq hai
Intezaar humko tumhara har pehar hoga... |
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ANAAM
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«Reply #32 on: September 16, 2010, 04:44:04 AM » |
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Ay mere khuda unse kehdo ab aur na miss karenge hum unko
Kay dil me mere quaid kar liya hai aksh unka ab humne.......
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«Reply #33 on: September 16, 2010, 04:59:21 AM » |
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Ab to guzregi raat aakho me
Aur intezar sehar ka hoga
Tum chale jao yeh tumko haq hai
Intezaar humko tumhara har pehar hoga... yunhi intezar me din katega
isi intezar me fir raat dhalegi
tum na aaoge ye jaante hain hum
par fir bhi intezar me ye umr bitegi |
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«Reply #34 on: September 16, 2010, 05:01:01 AM » |
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Ay mere khuda unse kehdo ab aur na miss karenge hum unko
Kay dil me mere quid kar liya hai aksh unka ab humne.......
na chahte hue bhi karoge tum
har pal sirf mera intezar
k hum wo khumaar hain jo
chadh jaye to fir kabhi utarta nahin |
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«Reply #35 on: September 16, 2010, 05:07:41 AM » |
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Ye tune sach keh diya..khumaar ka nasha hai
Uttare nahi utaare ye aysa he nasha hai....
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«Reply #36 on: September 16, 2010, 05:11:17 AM » |
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to ab utaarne ki tum koshish na karna
bematlab khudko pareshan na karna
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«Reply #37 on: September 16, 2010, 07:16:42 AM » |
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Good going Anaam and Kasak Jee........Keep going.
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«Reply #38 on: September 16, 2010, 07:19:21 AM » |
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v gm sajid ji.......aapka reply kahan hai.......
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«Reply #39 on: September 16, 2010, 07:19:39 AM » |
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soone soone he taare
sooni si lagti he shaam
tere bin na lage jiya
nahi karti dhadkan araam
apni to bas yahi kahani
tujhse shuru or tujhpe khatam
itni si baat ek duje se sanam
NA keh sake tum NA keh sake ham~
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«Reply #40 on: September 16, 2010, 07:24:00 AM » |
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<>*Mere Khuda*<>
Mere Khuda ye kya sitam kiya tune dil pe mere
Tere kahe ko pura kiya fir saza kyun ye pai maine
Jisko apna sab kuch maana use bhi na khush rakh saki
Tu hi bata aisi bhi kya khata ki hai maine
Kyun ye dard ye judaai ye taklif sahe har pal wo
Kyun iss tarah ki zindagi de di use maine
Na pyaar na wafaa na hi khushi ka ek bhi pal
Jab diya sirf dard hi diya hai use maine
Aaj sharm saar hun khudse hi main ee Khuda
Tabhi apni maut k badle uski zindagi mangi maine
Na kar ye sitam k ghut k reh jaun main yun
Apni naadani me ye kya gunaah kar diya maine
Ek hasti khelti bharpur zindagi dede khuda ab use
Barsa de khuda noor apna us par bas yehi manga hai maine
Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Anamika Ji |
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«Reply #41 on: September 16, 2010, 07:38:06 AM » |
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soone soone he taare
sooni si lagti he shaam
tere bin na lage jiya
nahi karti dhadkan araam
apni to bas yahi kahani
tujhse shuru or tujhpe khatam
itni si baat ek duje se sanam
NA keh sake tum NA keh sake ham~
shukriya abhi ji hamari baat rakhne ka......
thnx(wo bhi bhari wala) for these beautiful lines.......
kehti rahi aankhein meri
jo na samjh sake kyun tum
ab nahin kuch ho sakta hai
jab tumse dur ho gaye hum
dhundh dhundh k haar gai main
talash me meri tum bhi hue guum
keh dete kaash usi pal hum
nahin jee sakte ekduje bin hum-tum
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«Reply #42 on: September 16, 2010, 07:38:36 AM » |
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Bahut umda likha hai aap ne Anamika Ji
thnku sir ji...aapne pasnd kiya iss dua ko... |
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«Reply #43 on: September 16, 2010, 09:31:02 AM » |
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shukriya abhi ji hamari baat rakhne ka......
thnx(wo bhi bhari wala) for these beautiful lines.......
kehti rahi aankhein meri
jo na samjh sake kyun tum
ab nahin kuch ho sakta hai
jab tumse dur ho gaye hum
dhundh dhundh k haar gai main
talash me meri tum bhi hue guum
keh dete kaash usi pal hum
nahin jee sakte ekduje bin hum-tum
meri kahani suna rahe ho kyaa~ |
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«Reply #44 on: September 16, 2010, 09:34:56 AM » |
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meri kahani suna rahe ho kyaa~
ji abhi ji...aapki kahani hamari zubani... |
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