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<>*Mere Khuda*<>
Mere Khuda ye kya sitam kiya tune dil pe mere
Tere kahe ko pura kiya fir saza kyun ye pai maine
Jisko apna sab kuch maana use bhi na khush rakh saki
Tu hi bata aisi bhi kya khata ki hai maine
Kyun ye dard ye judaai ye taklif sahe har pal wo
Kyun iss tarah ki zindagi de di use maine
Na pyaar na wafaa na hi khushi ka ek bhi pal
Jab diya sirf dard hi diya hai use maine
Aaj sharm saar hun khudse hi main ee Khuda
Tabhi apni maut k badle uski zindagi mangi maine
Na kar ye sitam k ghut k reh jaun main yun
Apni naadani me ye kya gunaah kar diya maine
Ek hasti khelti bharpur zindagi dede khuda ab use
Barsa de khuda noor apna us par bas yehi manga hai maine
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Rancho-D-Idiot
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«Reply #1 on: September 15, 2010, 12:24:00 PM » |
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bahot hi dard bhara paigam hai yeh aapka...
kuchh hum bhi arz karenge aapke iss dard ko seene se laga ke..
Patha nahi ki zindagi ka safar me kya likha hai,
Kisika milna aur kisika bichhadna likha hai..
Imhtahan lethi hai zindagi har rishte ka,
Kisika juddna to kisika tutna likha hai..
Afsos kabhi na karna youn tut-te rishto ka,
Kunki tumhari kismat me un rishto se behtar,
Sayad kuchh aur likha hai.. |
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«Reply #2 on: September 15, 2010, 12:28:56 PM » |
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thnx rancho ji for these lines..aapne is dar ko mehsus kiya to dua kijiye k bhagwanji hamari sun lein..
kuch rishte zindagi bhar tutte nahin
paas na hone se wo dil se dur hote nahin
unke sath ruuh se ruuh ka bndhan hota hai
unke dard se aap aachchute rehte nahin
unki tadap aapko har pal tadpati hai
bhale hi aap unse kuch bhi kehte nahin
ye rishte zindagi jine ki wajah hote hain
bhale hi zindagi aap unke sath bitaate nahin........ |
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«Reply #3 on: September 15, 2010, 12:31:28 PM » |
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Hmmmmmmm.........Aapne dil se likha hai, hum bhi dil se jawab dege.
Apne aap par na itni tohmatein lagaya karo
Yu bevajah dil na hamara dukhaya karo
Kaise keh de ho kitne tum humko aziz
Gam jo bhi sataye humko de jaya karo.....
SG
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«Reply #4 on: September 15, 2010, 12:36:24 PM » |
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Hmmmmmmm.........Aapne dil se likha hai, hum bhi dil se jawab dege.
Apne aap par na itni tohmatein lagaya karo
Yu bevajah dil na hamara dukhaya karo
Kaise keh de ho kitne tum humko aziz
Gam jo bhi sataye humko de jaya karo.....
SG
shukriya ghayal ji...bht apne pan se likha hai aapne...dil se dhanyawad aapka.....
khush rahen ap yunhi muskutrate rahen
na aaye koi gum bas yunhi jagmagatein rahen
bane roshni har jawaan mehfil ki aap
log aapke kalaamon ko sabko gaa gaa k sunaya karen... |
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«Reply #5 on: September 15, 2010, 12:45:50 PM » |
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shukriya ghayal ji...bht apne pan se likha hai aapne...dil se dhanyawad aapka.....
khush rahen ap yunhi muskutrate rahen
na aaye koi gum bas yunhi jagmagatein rahen
bane roshni har jawaan mehfil ki aap
log aapke kalaamon ko sabko gaa gaa k sunaya karen...
Main jugnu tum raat ho
Main sookha tum barsaat ho
Main phool tum khushboo ho
Main aaina tum rubaroo ho
Main kashti tum kinara ho
Main majboor tum sahara ho
Main paav tum payel ho
Main Kasak tum Ghayel ho
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2010, 12:52:58 PM » |
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bhagvan sunta to sab ki hai par karata apani marji ke mutabik hi hai issliye zindagi ko usake hal pe chhod ke jeena hi sahi mayne me jeena hota hai..
thnx rancho ji for these lines..aapne is dar ko mehsus kiya to dua kijiye k bhagwanji hamari sun lein..
kuch rishte zindagi bhar tutte nahin
paas na hone se wo dil se dur hote nahin
unke sath ruuh se ruuh ka bndhan hota hai
unke dard se aap aachchute rehte nahin
unki tadap aapko har pal tadpati hai
bhale hi aap unse kuch bhi kehte nahin
ye rishte zindagi jine ki wajah hote hain
bhale hi zindagi aap unke sath bitaate nahin........
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«Reply #7 on: September 15, 2010, 12:54:24 PM » |
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Aapki duao aur dosti ke kabil to nahi, isiliye Allah ka skhur ada karta hu jo aapne mujhe apna dost samjha..........aapke khoobsurat jawab me jagmagatein lafz se ek khayaal dimag me dauda chala aaya..........aapki tarah khoobsurat nahi likh pata ha aapke sath likhna bohat khushi deta hai.......aap bohat imandari se likhti hai. Aapke lafzo ki masumiyat mujhe bohat pasand hai....
Main jugnu tum raat ho
Main sookha tum barsaat ho
Main phool tum khushboo ho
Main aaina tum rubaroo ho
Main kashti tum kinara ho
Main majboor tum sahara ho
Main paav tum payel ho
Main Kasak tum Ghayel ho
bht bht bht pyara likha hai sajid ji aapne.....kitne khubsurat andaaz me naam ka use kiya hai aapne.....behtareen ji.......
maza aagaya padhke...
aur aap jitna achcha jis din main likhne lagungi.. gr8 ban jaungi....
main Kasak tum Ghayel ho
sach me ekdum pagal ho
log kehte hain bhanwra tumhe
par tum chanchal badal ho....!!! |
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«Reply #8 on: September 15, 2010, 12:54:56 PM » |
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bhagvan sunta to sab ki hai par karata apani marji ke mutabik hi hai issliye zindagi ko usake hal pe chhod ke jeena hi sahi mayne me jeena hota hai..
hmmmmm ...rancho ji sahi kehte ho aap |
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«Reply #9 on: September 15, 2010, 12:58:46 PM » |
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Kasak Jee aadaab!
Bade shikwe shikayateN ki hai aapne khud ki hi...
Aapki kalam ke khayaal aur ahsaas behad gehre hai daad Jee....
Rancho jee and Ghayal Sahab aap dono ne bhi behad khoob reply kiye hai..... Daad Janab....
Hum bhi kuch likh deN... 
Kisse bhi humare the dastaaN bhi humari thi
Sunne wale bhi hum the zubaaN bhi humari thi
Kuch fark hi na pada unhe humari barbadi ka
Maal e zar humara tha dukaaN bhi humari thi
Hote raheN "ParwaaZ" Jis hathiyaar se zakhami
Teer bhi humare the woh kamaaN bhi humari thi
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«Reply #11 on: September 15, 2010, 01:03:26 PM » |
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«Reply #12 on: September 15, 2010, 01:11:55 PM » |
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bht bht bht pyara likha hai sajid ji aapne.....kitne khubsurat andaaz me naam ka use kiya hai aapne.....behtareen ji.......
maza aagaya padhke...
aur aap jitna achcha jis din main likhne lagungi.. gr8 ban jaungi....
main Kasak tum Ghayel ho
sach me ekdum pagal ho
log kehte hain bhanwra tumhe
par tum chanchal badal ho....!!!
Jo khata main karu, bano bhool tum
Jo kaata banu, bano chubhan tum
Jo badal banu, bano Gagan tum
Jo Kasak banu, bano sanam tum
Jo Ghayel banu, bano marham tum...
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