Meri bhi ticket katne wali hai

by mistufer on March 20, 2008, 02:55:30 PM
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Kuch kyalat apne hi buzurgon ke man mein chalte rahte hain, kabhi vo bol paate hain kabhi dil mein apne rakh lete hain. meri kavita kisi ke dilko dukhane ke hetu se nahi likhi hai. fir bhi kisi ko bura lage
iske liye main pahle se hi maafi mangti hoon, shukriya.

Meri bhi ticket katne wali hai.

Umr ke jis paRaav par khaRe haiN
Ek Dar saa har samai rahta hai dil meN
Jaane kis jagah mera naam likha hai
Khuda teri fahrist meN,

Aise nahi ki, koi tamanna baaqi hai
Koi kaam aaj bhi adhure haiN.
Par sabko chhoR ke jaanaa kitnii majboori hai
Baal bachchoN kaa sang bhi zaroori hai.

Kaii beemariyoN ne gher rakkha hai
Dil meN bhi toh gaRbaR hai kahiN
WahaaN bhi pace-maker laga rakkha hai
DaGha de jaaye kab Dar sa laga rahta hai

HaathoN meN chhaRi dedi hai
Kamar bhi aadhi jhuk gayi hai
Naati, naatoN ke qad baRe ho gaye haiN
Lagtaa hai meri ghaRi nazdeek khaRi hai.

Agar waqt aaye aisa, yaad rahe meri baateN
Sab kaamoN ko aise karna, mano maiN abhi bhi
HuN sabke beech, Radha ki shaadi agle maah hai
Ussi samai karna jis muhrat par tay ki gayi hai.

Meri sirf suurat badlegi. Beta banega dada.
Aadmi badal jayeNge, reet chalti rahegi
Ganga ji ke jal astiyan meri baheNgi
Mera astitwa tum sab meN jeevit hai

Nira
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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2008, 04:08:57 PM »
Bohot hi achcha likha hai....ek sachchai....majboori..kuch fikar ghere hue...aur haqeeqat ka saamna bhi karna hai...Bohot Khoob Nira Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 20, 2008, 04:36:08 PM »
huggssssssss niraaaaaa..good to be together again...humesha ki tarha ek sachi tasweer zindagi ki...bohot khoob likha hai
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«Reply #3 on: March 20, 2008, 07:28:41 PM »
bahoot khoob.. kaya topic chuna hai apne likhne ke liye... good creation Nira ji!!

Muddat se tha intzaar, yah ghardi aai hai
Dar raha hai magar ab dil, kitni pass aai hai

Kaha kitani baar utha le e khuda mujhe
Ajj socha to ginati bhi na yaad aai hai

Her farz nibhaya, aor dekha ek ek ko
Apne bacho ne hi, her baar, kabar ki yaad dilaai hai

Phir bhi bhatke monh unmain, na jaane kyun
MA-BAAP ki yah kaise takdeer banai hai

Chinta hai un farzo ki, ab jo mere nahi
Apne man mai na jaane kitani baar yah  baat dohraai hai

Chup dekhu main bhi tamsha kis kadar hai unko intzaar
Mere her ek saman per kis kis ki najar kaha thaher aai hai

Muddat se tha intzaar, yah ghardi aai hai
Dar raha hai magar ab dil, kitne pass aai hai!!
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Talat
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«Reply #4 on: March 20, 2008, 07:43:08 PM »
Wah waah.....bohot khoob Pooja Applause
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: March 20, 2008, 07:49:04 PM »
Shukaria Talat!!
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«Reply #6 on: March 20, 2008, 07:51:21 PM »
zindagi ki sachaio par bahut khoob likha hai nira and poojaji.. Applause Applause
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Rajbir
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«Reply #7 on: March 20, 2008, 08:33:21 PM »
Nira and Pooja

Kya sachai ka byaan kiya hai !

Superb ! Applause

Nira nice to have you amongst us !

Keep going !
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mistufer
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«Reply #8 on: March 21, 2008, 12:30:31 AM »
Quote from: Talat on March 20, 2008, 04:08:57 PM
Bohot hi achcha likha hai....ek sachchai....majboori..kuch fikar ghere hue...aur haqeeqat ka saamna bhi karna hai...Bohot Khoob Nira Applause Applause

talat ji
bahut ache lafazon se saraya hai aapne, bahut bahut shukriya.
nira
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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2008, 01:54:07 AM »
Quote from: aarzoomehek on March 20, 2008, 04:36:08 PM
huggssssssss niraaaaaa..good to be together again...humesha ki tarha ek sachi tasweer zindagi ki...bohot khoob likha hai

aarzoooooo thanks dost saath dene aur saath nibhane ka
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«Reply #10 on: March 21, 2008, 01:57:16 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on March 20, 2008, 07:28:41 PM
bahoot khoob.. kaya topic chuna hai apne likhne ke liye... good creation Nira ji!!

Muddat se tha intzaar, yah ghardi aai hai
Dar raha hai magar ab dil, kitni pass aai hai

Kaha kitani baar utha le e khuda mujhe
Ajj socha to ginati bhi na yaad aai hai

Her farz nibhaya, aor dekha ek ek ko
Apne bacho ne hi, her baar, kabar ki yaad dilaai hai

Phir bhi bhatke monh unmain, na jaane kyun
MA-BAAP ki yah kaise takdeer banai hai

Chinta hai un farzo ki, ab jo mere nahi
Apne man mai na jaane kitani baar yah  baat dohraai hai

Chup dekhu main bhi tamsha kis kadar hai unko intzaar
Mere her ek saman per kis kis ki najar kaha thaher aai hai

Muddat se tha intzaar, yah ghardi aai hai
Dar raha hai magar ab dil, kitne pass aai hai!!


pooja ji shukriya aapko ye topic acha laga.

aapke jawabi sher bahut dilke kareeb lage.
yunhi saath deti rahiyega muje acha lagega.

nira
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«Reply #11 on: March 21, 2008, 01:58:35 AM »
Quote from: khwaish on March 20, 2008, 07:51:21 PM
zindagi ki sachaio par bahut khoob likha hai nira and poojaji.. Applause Applause

khwaish ji
bahut bahut shukriya.
nira
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«Reply #12 on: March 21, 2008, 02:03:06 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on March 20, 2008, 08:33:21 PM
Nira and Pooja

Kya sachai ka byaan kiya hai !

Superb ! Applause

Nira nice to have you amongst us !

Keep going !

rajbir ji
aapko pasand aayi kavita, aapka dilse dhanyawaad karti hoon.
its my plearure to be amongs so many good writer.
thanks of the kind words.
nira
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«Reply #13 on: March 21, 2008, 03:55:18 AM »
waah ...kya khoob Jashn-e-mahoul hai...Nira and Pooja.....great....bahoot hi umda peshkash dono ki.....

Nira Ticket toh sabhi ki book hai...per abhi seat no nahiN maloom chala...hehehe...hamara toh yahi ek muddhha hai dost...

Be-wafa zindagi ne chhorh diya jab Tanha
Mout ko bhi pyaar se muskrahate hue mile


Harash
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