meri jan youn na udass ho

by faiiz_76 on January 06, 2008, 04:25:27 PM
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meri jan youn na udass ho
keh woh chand lamhon ki ankahi
teray pairahan ki rafu gari
mere bas main ab na rahi to kiya

keh main shabd shabd teray pass hon
teray sookhay honton ki piyas hon
hann udass hon

woh waeed jo tujhse khas thay
meri bekasi ka libas thay
ussi dast e jor o sitam nay phir
kisi talkh lamhay ki aanch main
hain jalla diye
ya bujha diye

meray pass abb bhi sarab hain
naye khwab hain
chalo aoo tifl e umeed e nau
zara khail lain
inhain jhail lain !!!!

faiiz
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sangdil_mehbooba
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2008, 07:34:49 PM »
Very nice Faiiz bhyyia.
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prmchawla
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«Reply #2 on: January 07, 2008, 03:39:54 AM »
nice faiiz,

e dost kayo jita hai tu in udaasi ke lamho mai,
jab khuda nai likhi hai tere kismat zindagi ke sunhere pano mai,


prem
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Shikha12
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«Reply #3 on: January 07, 2008, 09:10:09 AM »
Bahut hi achha likha hai Faiiz Ji...
Yeh aisa kalaam hai, jisey koi bhi baar baar padhna chahega..

Yun hi likhte rahiyega.. Usual Smile
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faiiz_76
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«Reply #4 on: January 07, 2008, 12:59:51 PM »
thank u all ....app kay alfaz se sachi khushi hui jo yakeenan ajkal mushkil se milnay lagi hai...again thanks
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