' Meri Kami Hoti Hogi Unko Bhi Mehsoos Dheere Dheere...!

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Nikla jaa raha hai umeedon ka juluus dheere dheere
Deed-e-yaar ke armaan houe maayus dheere dheere

Bhuule se bhi na bhoola jaata wo milna-julnaa unse
Meri kami hoti hogi unko bhi mehsus dheere dheere

Bharnaa tha wo khaa’i jo unki furqat ne chhod rakha
Houe dard-e-nagme hi apne makhsuus dheere dheere

Pehle Akhtar maana phir patthar samjha mujhe usne
Bhool chukii wo saare lafz-e-khuluus dheere dheere

Wo mujhse zaraa khafaa hai magar bewafaa to nahin
Roshni main aa jayegaa unka khaluus dheere dheere

Sataaya,rulaaya, kaun kaun sa zulm na dhayaa unpar
Sochne lagti hogi wo mujhe manhuus dheere dheere

Dil ki dawlat baanT diya tha baDii murawat ke saath
Kuch sabaq ke baad bana hun kanjuus dheere dheere

Banaa do ’Amanush’ ko khudaa dam bhar,Mere Rab!
Mumkin tab hi banega ek aam manuus dheere dheere

Waqt se pehle Mushkil hai accha koyi naam kamaana
Aasman ko chuegaa mera bhi takhallus dheere dheere


Makhsuus : Exclusive
Akhtar : A star
Lafz-e-khuluus : Sweet words
Khaluus : Sincerity
Murawat : Generosity


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«Reply #1 on: March 12, 2010, 12:40:54 PM »
WAAH WAAH.AMANUSH JI. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 12, 2010, 12:46:34 PM »
Bahut khoob Amanush Ji
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«Reply #3 on: March 12, 2010, 01:55:11 PM »
Wah wah Amanush ji dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.great creation. Hats off to you! Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 24, 2010, 08:47:11 PM »
Namaste, Suresh ji, Rajesh Ji aur Madhuvesh Ji...! Sorry for late reply...!

Shaayri ko pasand karne ke liye bahut shukriyaa...!

Apna apna khayaal rakheiN,ok...?

Duaaon ke saath


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«Reply #5 on: August 24, 2010, 10:16:55 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: August 25, 2010, 12:13:55 AM »
Amanush Jee Aadaab!

Behad pur asar tahreer rahi hai aapki....
Sabhi ashaar dil meiN samate gaye....

Ek umdaa tehreer per dil se daad kabool kijiye..
Ummid karte hai aage bhi aapko padhne ka mouka milta
rahega.......           



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