meri life mai .. kisi ko meri ye ghazal bahot pasand hai

by clicksahil on May 16, 2005, 10:58:25 AM
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Yaad karun mai tujhe magar bhulaya kab hai
Tu to har waqt mere saath hai bichda kab hai
Mai to har ruthne walon ko sadaa deta hoon
Meri awaaz pe lekin koi rukta kab hai
Phirta hoon mara mara teri rahon mei
Iss safar mei mujhe saye kii tamanna kab hai
Bas yahi soch kar ab nahi chaha tujhe
Jis ko mai chahta hoon wo mujhe milta kab hai
Haan wahi shakhs wahi phool se chehre wala
Dil ka kya haal hai logon ko batata kab hai
sirf teri baaton ko maine yahan!!!!!!
mehsoos kiya hai tujhe dekha kab hai
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2005, 11:18:35 AM »
Quote from: "clicksahil"
Yaad karun mai tujhe magar bhulaya kab hai
Tu to har waqt mere saath hai bichda kab hai
Mai to har ruthne walon ko sadaa deta hoon
Meri awaaz pe lekin koi rukta kab hai
Phirta hoon mara mara teri rahon mei
Iss safar mei mujhe saye kii tamanna kab hai
Bas yahi soch kar ab nahi chaha tujhe
Jis ko mai chahta hoon wo mujhe milta kab hai
Haan wahi shakhs wahi phool se chehre wala
Dil ka kya haal hai logon ko batata kab hai
sirf teri baaton ko maine yahan!!!!!!
mehsoos kiya hai tujhe dekha kab hai
wah sahil ji....apki ye ghazal mujhe bhi behad pasand aayi,aise hi likhte rahiyega Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2005, 11:31:25 AM »
ye gazal tuh sach main bahut achi hai aur isse sunke aisa laga jaise ye mera hi haal byan kar rahi ho ............

kaise kaise ye zindagi ke riwaaj hote hai
jise chahen hum pana aksar uski ko khote hai
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2005, 11:35:56 AM »
thnx nidhi....and thnx sandhaya....  

thnx for make me more enthusiastic towards verses... sandhaya ur verses is really worth for hats off....  

dil mein khushi ki shama sajata nahi koi
mere shaher mein ab to aata nahi koi
unka ek ek lavfz mujhe ab bhi yaad hai
mere khaton ko ab bhi jalata nahi koi
yaron hamare khun ka ajab he naseeb hai
isse mehndi hateli par sajata nahi koi
har shakhs apne khwab ki duniya mein hai magan
magar taabir kya hai khwaab ki batata nahi koi
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2005, 11:44:49 AM »
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ye gazal tuh sach main bahut achi hai aur isse sunke aisa laga jaise ye mera hi haal byan kar rahi ho ............

kaise kaise ye zindagi ke riwaaj hote hai
jise chahen hum pana aksar uski ko khote hai


behta hu kasti par dur hai kinara , hawa se pooshta hu kya haal hai tumara
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2005, 12:08:16 PM »
Laakh duri ho magar waada nibhate rehna
Jab bhi baarish ho mera sog manate rehna
Tum gaye ho to har shaam ye adat tehri
Bas kinare par khade haath hilate rehna
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«Reply #6 on: April 25, 2009, 12:44:34 PM »
Yaad karun mai tujhe magar bhulaya kab hai
Tu to har waqt mere saath hai bichda kab hai
Mai to har ruthne walon ko sadaa deta hoon
Meri awaaz pe lekin koi rukta kab hai
Phirta hoon mara mara teri rahon mei
Iss safar mei mujhe saye kii tamanna kab hai
Bas yahi soch kar ab nahi chaha tujhe
Jis ko mai chahta hoon wo mujhe milta kab hai
Haan wahi shakhs wahi phool se chehre wala
Dil ka kya haal hai logon ko batata kab hai
sirf teri baaton ko maine yahan!!!!!!
mehsoos kiya hai tujhe dekha kab hai

thnx nidhi....and thnx sandhaya.... 

thnx for make me more enthusiastic towards verses... sandhaya ur verses is really worth for hats off.... 

dil mein khushi ki shama sajata nahi koi
mere shaher mein ab to aata nahi koi
unka ek ek lavfz mujhe ab bhi yaad hai
mere khaton ko ab bhi jalata nahi koi
yaron hamare khun ka ajab he naseeb hai
isse mehndi hateli par sajata nahi koi
har shakhs apne khwab ki duniya mein hai magan
magar taabir kya hai khwaab ki batata nahi koi

ba
Laakh duri ho magar waada nibhate rehna
Jab bhi baarish ho mera sog manate rehna
Tum gaye ho to har shaam ye adat tehri
Bas kinare par khade haath hilate rehna

hut achche click sahil ji..............bahut hi badiya ghazal hai ..............yeh ghazal dil ko bahut chhu gayi
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«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2009, 10:52:09 PM »
Nice ones Click Sahil Ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2010, 10:23:59 PM »
BAHUT SHAANDAAR CLICKSAHILJI. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Yaad karun mai tujhe magar bhulaya kab hai
Tu to har waqt mere saath hai bichda kab hai
Mai to har ruthne walon ko sadaa deta hoon
Meri awaaz pe lekin koi rukta kab hai
Phirta hoon mara mara teri rahon mei
Iss safar mei mujhe saye kii tamanna kab hai
Bas yahi soch kar ab nahi chaha tujhe
Jis ko mai chahta hoon wo mujhe milta kab hai
Haan wahi shakhs wahi phool se chehre wala
Dil ka kya haal hai logon ko batata kab hai
sirf teri baaton ko maine yahan!!!!!!
mehsoos kiya hai tujhe dekha kab hai

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«Reply #9 on: March 21, 2010, 05:59:18 AM »
Wah C.Sahill ji,very beautiful gazal.lovely creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2011, 03:56:10 PM »
bht hi khoob ghazal…

sajakar mehfil yaha khamoshiyon ki
janaaje par apni muskurata kaun hai!!!
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«Reply #11 on: July 11, 2011, 10:57:00 PM »

sach mein bahot khubsurat likha hai....
aur mujhe bhi bahot pasand Aai....


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«Reply #12 on: July 18, 2011, 02:34:51 PM »
Yaad karun mai tujhe magar bhulaya kab hai
Tu to har waqt mere saath hai bichda kab hai
Mai to har ruthne walon ko sadaa deta hoon
Meri awaaz pe lekin koi rukta kab hai
Phirta hoon mara mara teri rahon mei
Iss safar mei mujhe saye kii tamanna kab hai
Bas yahi soch kar ab nahi chaha tujhe
Jis ko mai chahta hoon wo mujhe milta kab hai
Haan wahi shakhs wahi phool se chehre wala
Dil ka kya haal hai logon ko batata kab hai
sirf teri baaton ko maine yahan!!!!!!
mehsoos kiya hai tujhe dekha kab hai


@clicksahil  lajawaab !!!!
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«Reply #13 on: July 18, 2011, 02:36:30 PM »
Yaad karun mai tujhe magar bhulaya kab hai
Tu to har waqt mere saath hai bichda kab hai
Mai to har ruthne walon ko sadaa deta hoon
Meri awaaz pe lekin koi rukta kab hai
Phirta hoon mara mara teri rahon mei
Iss safar mei mujhe saye kii tamanna kab hai
Bas yahi soch kar ab nahi chaha tujhe
Jis ko mai chahta hoon wo mujhe milta kab hai
Haan wahi shakhs wahi phool se chehre wala
Dil ka kya haal hai logon ko batata kab hai
sirf teri baaton ko maine yahan!!!!!!
mehsoos kiya hai tujhe dekha kab hai



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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2012, 12:03:51 PM »
bohot khub clicksahil sir..
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