<>*Meri zindagi zindagi na ban saki*<>

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<>*Meri zindagi zindagi na ban saki*<>

Teri chahat ki pyaasi rahi
Yun khud hi khud me jalti rahi
Ye raat jo kal chaand bani
Fir amawas ko tarasti rahi

Main jal chuki iss dum talak
K raakh bhi na ban saki
Ek   tez kahin lehar chali
Mujhko sang udaa k le gai

Main bikhar gai na bach saki
Har simt bas pighalti rahi
Na aag bani na barf bani.
Meri zindagi zindagi na ban saki..!!





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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2010, 10:41:08 AM »
Main jal chuki iss dum talak
K raakh bhi na ban saki
Ek   tez kahin lehar chali
Mujhko sang udaa k le gai

Too good Kasak Jee.......aapke lafzo bohat dard hai bohat sach_chaiee hai.
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«Reply #2 on: October 25, 2010, 11:00:13 AM »
aapka bht bht shukriya sajid ji ise pasand karne aur sarahne ka..ye meri fav poem me se hai...aapne pasand ki value badh gai..thnx alot ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2010, 11:17:42 AM »
Beautiful lines brother keep it up ,
very beautiful creation
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«Reply #4 on: October 25, 2010, 12:29:13 PM »
bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kasak ji.. bahut hi khoob...!!!

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«Reply #5 on: October 25, 2010, 10:54:10 PM »
kasak ji... thats y i like your creation... beautiful yaar...
bahut khubsuruti se dard ko likha hai aapne, bahut badhiya... yun hi bas phir intezar rahega... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #6 on: October 25, 2010, 11:13:09 PM »
uffffffff......thnx re.....aisi tareef sunke to likhte jane ka man karta h....thnx a lot for appreciating intezar ji
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«Reply #7 on: October 25, 2010, 11:16:48 PM »
hum bhi to yahi kehte hain bas yunhi likhte jaayie har baar kasak ji...

Intezar !
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2010, 03:05:23 PM »
<>*Meri zindagi zindagi na ban saki*<>

Teri chahat ki pyaasi rahi
Yun khud hi khud me jalti rahi
Ye raat jo kal chaand bani
Fir amawas ko tarasti rahi

Main jal chuki iss dum talak
K raakh bhi na ban saki
Ek   tez kahin lehar chali
Mujhko sang udaa k le gai

Main bikhar gai na bach saki
Har simt bas pighalti rahi
Na aag bani na barf bani.
Meri zindagi zindagi na ban saki..!!






Gehri batein liye hui Aapki yeh kavita bahutttttttt pasand Ayi hai Mujhe..har lafz,har Ek line Apni Chaap Chodta Hua..

Bahut Ache Anu Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: October 26, 2010, 03:15:08 PM »
Aankh Se Jo Utre,Ashko ka ek dariyan hoon Main
waqt-Bewaqt Inn Aankhon Se Behta Hoon Main!!!!

Main Woh kashti Hoon Jo Tufaano Se Hardum Darti rahi!!!
Ghar Ke Ek band kamre mein Aksar Rehta Hoon Main!!!!!

Meri Khokli Si Muskaan Par Naa Jaa!!!
Dil Ke Andar Bahut Se Gham Sehta Hoon Main!!!!

Dekhkar Mere Halaat ko, Ab Nazdeek Aata Hai kaun!!!
Bura Waqt Bhi Tal jaayega Yeh Aksar Khud Se Kehta Hoon Main!!!!

Meri Zindagi Kabhi Zindagi Naa Ban Saki!!!!
Par Phir Bhi Mujhe Koi Afsos Nahi!!!!
Dil Ko Khush Rakhne Ke Liye Aksar Yeh Kehta Hoon Main
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«Reply #10 on: October 26, 2010, 03:21:08 PM »
chalo ...

haan to shuru karee..

badhiya likha he ..aapne bahut..hamesha ki tarah..kuchh ashar to sachmuch bahut achhe rahe...daad dher sari aapke liyee...yunhi likhti rahiye .....huhuhuhhahaha
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«Reply #11 on: October 26, 2010, 03:39:08 PM »
Aankh Se Jo Utre,Ashko ka ek dariyan hoon Main
waqt-Bewaqt Inn Aankhon Se Behta Hoon Main!!!!

Main Woh kashti Hoon Jo Tufaano Se Hardum Darti rahi!!!
Ghar Ke Ek band kamre mein Aksar Rehta Hoon Main!!!!!

Meri Khokli Si Muskaan Par Naa Jaa!!!
Dil Ke Andar Bahut Se Gham Sehta Hoon Main!!!!

Dekhkar Mere Halaat ko, Ab Nazdeek Aata Hai kaun!!!
Bura Waqt Bhi Tal jaayega Yeh Aksar Khud Se Kehta Hoon Main!!!!

Meri Zindagi Kabhi Zindagi Naa Ban Saki!!!!
Par Phir Bhi Mujhe Koi Afsos Nahi!!!!
Dil Ko Khush Rakhne Ke Liye Aksar Yeh Kehta Hoon Main


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«Reply #12 on: October 26, 2010, 03:40:04 PM »
chalo ...

haan to shuru karee..

badhiya likha he ..aapne bahut..hamesha ki tarah..kuchh ashar to sachmuch bahut achhe rahe...daad dher sari aapke liyee...yunhi likhti rahiye .....huhuhuhhahaha


hehe huhu hahaha hiiiihahahahahahha tongue3
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«Reply #13 on: October 26, 2010, 03:47:52 PM »
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Yeh Kya Hai madamji..

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«Reply #14 on: October 26, 2010, 03:57:56 PM »
kabhi kabhi khamoshiya keh deti hain itna
jinko lafz bayaan kar nahin pate hain

wahi sachcha dost hai jo khamoshiyon ko samjhe
keh ke to dushmano ko samjhaya jata hai....

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