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by brokenbyluv on October 18, 2009, 02:49:09 AM
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Yad aata hai vo bachapn ka zamana..
yogi k sath pedh pe baithke shehtut khana,

vo sidhi pe baith k gana bajana,

ghanto sath baate karte ghumna ghumana,

jab laya gaya merri dost k bejan sharir ko..
tou ankhe num thi hoth chup the aur dil keh raha tha...

mat le jao merre yaar ko mujhse door...
abhi tou sath milke hamein hai apne sapno ko sajana...... tearyeyed
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«Reply #1 on: October 18, 2009, 03:40:57 AM »
Nice and excellent Geet Ji Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 18, 2009, 04:39:13 AM »
Bahut hi dard hai aapke kavita mein Geet ji,really touched.marvelous creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: October 18, 2009, 10:31:57 AM »
really touching words Bbl ji....khuch bhi kehna mushkil hai tearyeyed
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«Reply #4 on: October 18, 2009, 12:49:05 PM »
Bahhoot Bahoot Khoob Geet.. May God Bless U !!
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«Reply #5 on: October 19, 2009, 12:19:56 AM »
Bahut Dard Bhari kavita Hai Yeh geet Ji..

iss Kavita Ke Aakhir Mein Zindagi Ke  Kisi Haadse Ka Zikr Bhi kiya Hai Aapne??

Agar Ho sake To share Zaroor Kijiyega Hum Sab se...

Bahut bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 
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«Reply #6 on: October 19, 2009, 12:34:44 AM »
Thnx alot rishiji,madhuji,poojaji,sophiji n khuaish ji...aap sabhi ne merri kavita padhi aur sraahi uske liye main apki abhari hu... notworthy notworthy

Ye kavita maine apni bachpan ki dost k naam likhi hai..uska naam yogita tha..aaj vo iss duniya mein nhi hai pichle saal ek accident mein maine apni sabse pyari dost ko  kho diya...main uske liye aur tou kuch nhi kar sakti but uski yad mein kuch panktiya likhi hain jo aap sab k beech share ki hai...... sad11
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«Reply #7 on: October 30, 2009, 03:57:52 AM »

thnx alot shihab ji...
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«Reply #8 on: November 02, 2009, 01:36:03 AM »
Geet ek advise hai tumhare liye.....
Zindgi ne aapko buhut rulaya,bahut kuch shikhaya,aage bhi buhut kuch dikhayegi,bahut kuch shikhayegi, bus prepaire raho her gum ko sahne k liye



 
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«Reply #9 on: November 02, 2009, 01:46:41 AM »
Ji sager itna kuch khone k baad bhi mujhe paane ki ummeed hai but ab khone pe dard nhi hota...maine apne darr aur dard mein jina sikh liya hai..isliye kehti hu aap bhi bhula do apna gum aur ek naye sire se life start karo..apka kal apko kuch nhi dega...apka aaj aur apka aane wala kal hi apko khushiya de sakta hai...
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«Reply #10 on: November 02, 2009, 01:54:35 AM »
God blessed u geet

tum or bhi koshish karo gum se bahar aane k liye,
even i ll try
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«Reply #11 on: November 02, 2009, 02:02:34 AM »


ji sager ji aap koshish karenge tou mujhe bahut khushi hogi.
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«Reply #12 on: November 02, 2009, 02:30:55 AM »
Chalo issi baat pe bear piyo,rum mitae gum
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«Reply #13 on: November 02, 2009, 03:38:41 AM »
Nice touching creation Geet
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«Reply #14 on: November 02, 2009, 08:10:35 PM »
Very touching Broken ji
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