- Mohabbat Hoti Hai Shartoon Me -

by Meena on June 17, 2005, 10:11:52 AM
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Meena
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«Reply #15 on: June 20, 2005, 11:17:14 AM »
kya baat kahi hai nidhi sis!!

akhele to nahin chal rahe gum ke raston par,
mere saath aur bhi bohot musafir hai,
tanhai ne deeware banaiy hai is kadar,
lagta hai roothe sabKhuda se, yaha sab kafir hai!
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«Reply #16 on: June 20, 2005, 11:19:44 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Ham sunaate hain dard-e-dil ki daastan,
  log uspe bhi wah-wah keh dete hain,
  kehne ko jab kuch bhi nahi hota hai,
  dard bhari ek aur nazm likh dte hain."


waah ji waah .......   glasses2

lafzoo mein piroo detey hai dil-e-ashq apney
likh detey hai dard-e-dil ki dastaaN
mujhko ab samjhaney aaya hai woh waffa ke maney
jab toot gaye hai iss dil ke sab armaaN !!
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HumTum
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«Reply #17 on: June 20, 2005, 11:21:47 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah kuddiya wah...kush kar ditta! :D

ched deta hai jab koi gumon ka saaz,
kul jata hai sab ke dil ka raaz,
bohot samjhate hai khud ko na dubo phir se,
par yeh dil hai, jo aata nahin kabhi baaz!  :wink:


isslyie gumon ka silsila chalta retha hai na!  :wink:


 oke  :wink:

ghumooN ko hum anpney dil mein bsa ke rakhtey hai
ashq anhooN mein apni sazza ke rakhtey hai
khi toot na jaye mere dilnbahar ka bharaam
uss se apney dard ki dastaaN chupa ke rakhtey hai !!
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«Reply #18 on: June 20, 2005, 11:32:08 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
Quote from: "Meena"
wah kuddiya wah...kush kar ditta! :D

ched deta hai jab koi gumon ka saaz,
kul jata hai sab ke dil ka raaz,
bohot samjhate hai khud ko na dubo phir se,
par yeh dil hai, jo aata nahin kabhi baaz!  :wink:


isslyie gumon ka silsila chalta retha hai na!  :wink:
wah wah,bilkul sahi :lol:

"Kahin na kahin har kisi ki zindagani milti hai,
  isiliye khulte hain raaz,jab dil ki rawani milti hai,
  phir lagta hai aur bhi hain ham jaise duniya me,
  jinhe mohabbat is kadar tadpaati,tarsaati hai."


hummmm  shi hai boss !!   tongue3

muhoobat mein tadpna to aam hota hai
honthoon pe hmesha dilbhar ka naam hota hai
chuta hai jab hawaa ka koi bhi jonka
to dil ko mehsuus  mehboob ka paigaam hota hai !!  :wink:
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«Reply #19 on: June 20, 2005, 11:35:17 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
kya baat kahi hai nidhi sis!!

akhele to nahin chal rahe gum ke raston par,
mere saath aur bhi bohot musafir hai,
tanhai ne deeware banaiy hai is kadar,
lagta hai roothe sabKhuda se, yaha sab kafir hai!


waaah buddy .... kamal hi ker diya !!

ghum to ban ke perchaai chaktey hai sath mere
inhi gumooN se apna jeevan bhar ka nata hai
ik aur maar de kangar mere seeney mein "Meena"
khali dil dahdkana mujhey nhi aata hai !!
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Meena
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«Reply #20 on: June 20, 2005, 04:11:44 PM »
wah ji wah humtum janab...sab ko achi reply di hai!!!  :D
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HumTum
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«Reply #21 on: June 20, 2005, 04:12:46 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
wah ji wah humtum janab...sab ko achi reply di hai!!!  :D


aapney aggey kuch likhney ki koi koshish hi nhi ki hai Puzzled !
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Meena
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«Reply #22 on: June 20, 2005, 04:18:59 PM »
hmmmm...

kyu silsila jari rakhe yaha dard o gum ka,
aise hi log dene ka wada karenge marham ka,
aise dokhon se hi to luti hai zindagi humari,
aab nahin saath chahiye hume kisi aur bharam ka!
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«Reply #23 on: June 20, 2005, 04:31:54 PM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Kuch zindagi ki sachayi pesh karni ki koshish hai yeh poem meri...

Nahin jante te hum ke mohabbat bhi hoti hai sharton me,
Shayad duniya dari hai yeh, hum na pade kabhi in baaton me,

Tune bhi dikha diya sachayi ka aina hume,
Is zakhm ko aab zindagi bhar padega sehna hume,

Jan gaye aaj ke tum bhi karte ho yaha pyar ka vyapar,
Mere bhi dil ko bana diya tune jazbaato ka bazar,

Tune hi kabhi jaghaya tha jeene ka arman dil me,
Aaj tu hi basa raha hai marne ka saman dil me,

Socha tha meri kushi me jeene wala mil gaya mujhe woh saathi,
Galti humari hi hai, hum hi kyu bane itne jazbaati,

Par shukar guzar hai tere, nikala jo hume jhoote sapno se,
Talab nahin jeene ki aab, tang aa gaye hai zindagi ke aise jatko se!



bohot hi touching lafz hain meena...bohot hi achhe... sabne bohot achha likha hai..!
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«Reply #24 on: June 20, 2005, 04:32:12 PM »
thanx meena and humtum and very nice work by both of u.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Meena
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«Reply #25 on: June 20, 2005, 04:41:59 PM »
thank u sanya sis....and thanx nidhi kuddiyeeee!!!!!!!

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«Reply #26 on: June 20, 2005, 06:11:07 PM »
very nice meena.............................bahot  khoob.......
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«Reply #27 on: June 21, 2005, 08:03:18 AM »
Meena ji....

bahut khoob likhi hai aapne ye nazm.....

aapka apna......
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«Reply #28 on: June 21, 2005, 09:06:26 AM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
thanx meena and humtum and very nice work by both of you.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Shukriya Nidhi ji .... aur haan usko samj aa gyi uskey liye bhi shukriya :D
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«Reply #29 on: June 21, 2005, 09:11:20 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
hmmmm...

kyu silsila jari rakhe yaha dard o gum ka,
aise hi log dene ka wada karenge marham ka,
aise dokhon se hi to luti hai zindagi humari,
aab nahin saath chahiye hume kisi aur bharam ka!


hummmm Meena ji hummmmm

zindgi hi khud mein ik bharam hai dost
kya pta kaun hai kafir aur kaun raqeeb yha
kissi ko milti hai khishiya to ruswaiyaa kissi ko
duniya mein sab ka apna apan hai naseeb yha !!
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