Mohabbat Se Ab Nikaal Mujhe,,. {Aarzu},.

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Saans Lena Hua Muhaal Mujhee,.
Is Mohabbat Se Ab Nikaal Mujhe,.

Ab Main Teri Hi Zimmedaari Hoon,.
Kho Na Jaaoon Kaheen Sambhaal Mujhe,.

Ab Behelta Nahi Main Lafzon Se,.
Ab Na Dena Koi Misaal Mujhe,.

Sab Ke Baare Mein Sochta Hoon Magar,.
Apna Rehta Nahi Khayaal Mujhe,.

Jaate Jaate Woh Kis Liye Palti,.
Ab Sataayega Ye Sawaal Mujhe,.

Saaf Keh Do Tumhaare Dil Mein Jo Hai,.
Inn Bahaano Se Ab Na Taal Mujhe,.

Yaad Rakhna Na Bhool Paaya Hoon,.
Hai Isi Baat Ka Malaal Mujhey,.
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2012, 07:47:29 PM »
Merheba Merheba Azeem saheb. Bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz mei.n likhi aapne ye ghazal. Bahut hi khoob.

Lekin ek sawaal bhi, matle ke she'r se ye matlab nikal raha hai k aap mohabbat mein phanse hain aur isse nikalne ki ilteja ker rahe hai.n, yaani ki aap mohabbat se munh mode rahe hai.n, aap hausla haar rahe hai.n. Mohabbat se haarna to bhai saraasar ghalat hai. Main neeche ek-aadh she'r likhta hu.n aapke liye:

Aasaa.n nahi hai ishq ye jaan lijiye
Ye aag ka dariya hai aur dub k jaana hai

Ye kissne keh diya tumse k baazi haar baithe hum
Mohabbat mei.n lutaane ko abhi ye jaan baaqi hai
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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2012, 07:50:03 PM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on May 07, 2012, 07:47:29 PM
Merheba Merheba Azeem saheb. Bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz mei.n likhi aapne ye ghazal. Bahut hi khoob.

Lekin ek sawaal bhi, matle ke she'r se ye matlab nikal raha hai k aap mohabbat mein phanse hain aur isse nikalne ki ilteja ker rahe hai.n, yaani ki aap mohabbat se munh mode rahe hai.n, aap hausla haar rahe hai.n. Mohabbat se haarna to bhai saraasar ghalat hai. Main neeche ek-aadh she'r likhta hu.n aapke liye:

Aasaa.n nahi hai ishq ye jaan lijiye
Ye aag ka dariya hai aur dub k jaana hai

Ye kissne keh diya tumse k baazi haar baithe hum
Mohabbat mei.n lutaane ko abhi ye jaan baaqi hai

Shukriya Bhai,.

Ye Bas Ek Tanz Hain, Ke Saans Lena Hua Muhaal Mujhe, Ab Mohabbat Se Nikaal Mujhe,.

Waise Mohabbat Karne Ke Baad Mohabbat Se Peeche Kaun Hataa Hai,.
Saansein Khatam Hoti Hai, Maut Zindagi Ko Aati Hai Mohabbat Ko Nahi,.
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2012, 07:53:07 PM »
Aure Ye Line Kuch Aapne Line Par,.

Doobe Mohabbat Ke Samander Mein, Par Pyaase Nikle,.
Zara Si Thandak Ke Liye, Chain Saara Gawaa Diya,.

Yun To Karni Thi Hukumat Hume Zamaane Par,.
Mohabbat Ne Is "Azeem Ko, Ghulaam Banaa Diya,.
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2012, 08:15:35 PM »
Phir sahi hai.
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«Reply #5 on: May 08, 2012, 03:48:25 AM »
waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2012, 08:22:22 AM »
baht khoob Azeem ji
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2012, 08:29:35 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on May 08, 2012, 03:48:25 AM
waah waah

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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2012, 12:03:32 PM »
BAHUT KHOOBSOORAT GHAZAL.
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2012, 12:13:52 PM »
Azeem sahab, ghazal Achchi lagi. Mubarakbad aur daad pesh hai!

Lekin tasveer badi disturbing hai!
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2012, 01:51:04 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Azeem ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 07, 2012, 02:27:22 PM »
waah kya baat hai.
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«Reply #13 on: July 07, 2012, 04:25:53 PM »
AZEEN JI APNE BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI. main kuchh arz kar raha hoon

MOHABAT MEN KOI KISIKO DUBOTA NAHIN
JAB KOI DUBOTA NAHIN TO KOI NIKALEGA NAHIN

KHUD HI DOOBTE HAIN DRYA-E-MOHABAT MEN
JO DOOB JATE HAIN NIKALNA CHAHTE NAHIN
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«Reply #14 on: July 09, 2012, 10:03:18 AM »
Quote from: killbill on May 08, 2012, 08:22:22 AM
baht khoob Azeem ji

Shukriya Kill Bill Ji,.
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