~Mohobat karna chahta tha~ by Rahim

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Ager apke paas koi hai, toh usse khone na dein..Ager dhoor hai, toh usse juda hone na dein..

Main toh bas mohobat karna chahta tha,
Usse dilon jaan se chahna chahta tha..

Jiski baahon main aa kar dil ki raftaar bad jati thi,
Main toh umr bhar unhi baahon main jeena chahta tha..

Jo tha sabab meri muskurahaton ka yaaron,
Main ussi kay sang har lamha bitana chahta tha..

Ki hai us’se iss qadar mohobat maine ae doston,
Uski bewaffai ka daag apne daman par lagana chahta tha..

Kal tak uske saath par likta tha, aj uski yaadein likhwati hai,
Pata nahin kya khata hogayi meri kay dhoor hogaya woh,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas usse apne dil main basana chahta tha..

Woh aj mujhe do pal kay saath ko tarsata hai,
Mohobat ka har nagma jiske liye main gungunana chahta tha..

Uss raah se bina parchayi kay guzre jis raah par uska ghaar ata hai,
Main usse apni tanhai ka ehsaas dilana chahta tha..

Aj dil bas yehi kehta hai us’se yaaron,
Kya khata thi meri sivae iske,
Kay maine tujse mohobat ki hai,
Tujhe apna banana chahta tha,
Tujse mohobat karna chahta tha..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: November 06, 2010, 10:38:45 AM »
Wah Rahim Bhai.. Aapki Yeh Chaahat Bhari Peshkash Dil Choo Gai.. Mohabbat Aur Dard Ko Ek Sath Bayan Kiya hai aapne.. Har ek Sher apne Aap Me Khubsoorati liye Hue Hai..  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Dil se Daad Kubool Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




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«Reply #2 on: November 06, 2010, 11:05:17 AM »
rahim .....kyun re ..aur kaise seh lete ho yedard itti si umar me.....
dil ko jhakjhor diya iss kalaam ne,,,,,,
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«Reply #3 on: November 06, 2010, 12:45:28 PM »
Janab Rahim Sahab Aadaab!

Achchi koshish hai.... Dard ke khayaaloN se labrez is koshish
per dil se daad kabool kijiye....

Likhate rahiye....
Khush O aabad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: November 06, 2010, 01:31:46 PM »
Waah behetareen rahiim ji bahut khoob...

Kal tak uske saath par likta tha, aj uski yaadein likhwati hai,
Pata nahin kya khata hogayi meri kay dhoor hogaya woh,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas usse apne dil main basana chahta tha..


Ye lines khaas dil ko chhu gyi...

Kal tak uske saath par likhti thi, aj uski yaadein likhwati hai,
Pata nahin kya khata ho gayi meri kay dhoor ho gaya woh,
GEET tou bas usse apne dil main basana chahti thi..
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2010, 07:20:38 PM »
Bahaut bahaut bahaut shukriya Vikas bhaijan, Parwaaz jee, Anamika di aur Geet di..!
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«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2010, 07:22:42 PM »
rahim .....kyun re ..aur kaise seh lete ho yedard itti si umar me.....
dil ko jhakjhor diya iss kalaam ne,,,,,,
Bas di, zindagi ne seekha diya hai..!
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«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2010, 07:25:13 PM »
Waah behetareen rahiim ji bahut khoob...

Kal tak uske saath par likta tha, aj uski yaadein likhwati hai,
Pata nahin kya khata hogayi meri kay dhoor hogaya woh,
‘Khamosh’ toh bas usse apne dil main basana chahta tha..


Ye lines khaas dil ko chhu gyi...

Kal tak uske saath par likhti thi, aj uski yaadein likhwati hai,
Pata nahin kya khata ho gayi meri kay dhoor ho gaya woh,
GEET tou bas usse apne dil main basana chahti thi..

Shukriya Geet di..
Acha laga kay lines apko pasand ayi..!
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