Muje kafan bhej do papa.:Shayri-E-Dard

mistufer

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Muje kafan bhej do papa.
papa kafan bhej do....
papa kafan bhej do
Aapke bina kaise jiuin
Aapke bina duniya khali hai
munna ka bhi bhej jo
mera kafan bhej do
mujhe pencil bhi nahi chahiye
school ke dress bhi nahi chaiye
koi guriya bhi nahi chaiye

Aapki bahut yaad aati hai
Ungli pakad kar chalna sikhaya.
Raat jag kar muje sulaya.
Pahli baar jab padhna sikhaya.
Khelon mein bhi saath nibhaya.
Mera aab saath dedo papa

Mere kadam jab bhi dagamaye.
Siddi rah par aap hi laye.
Aaj fir vo gadi aayi hai.
Duniya meri dajmagayi hai.
Aapki hi parchayi nazaar aayi hai.

Jo muje aap taak pahunch de.
Aapki majboot bahon mein chuppa de
Ek baar fir woh sahara dedo papa
Mera kafan bhej do papa

Muje gumse bachalo
Apni god mein sulalo
Ek meetee neend sona chahti hoon
Apni ladli ko sulalo papa.
Muje mera kafan bhej do papa.
Muje mera kafan bhej do papa.

Nira


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harashmahajan

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #1 on: March 26, 2008, 02:48:21 AM »

Nira ji ....adaab.....aapne Ek bahoot hi Dil ko hila dene wala ye subject is our uchhala hai.......bahoot hi dard our peeRha liye hue ye tehreer un paloN ki yaad kerwati hai ke Graphically insaan usi douRrh se Guzar jata hai.....Hamari taraf se is dil kareeb tehreer par Daad-o-mubarakbaad kabool FarmmaayeiN.....Harash


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aarzoomehek

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #2 on: March 26, 2008, 03:56:46 AM »

Niraaaaa this is one of ur best written nazm very touchy nsensitive n it's one of my fav.huggssssssss for sharing with us..bless u.. Usual Smile


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baadal102

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #3 on: March 26, 2008, 04:49:58 AM »

nira ji bahut hi dil ko zanjhorne wali lines hai,
thanx a lot for sharing with us.

Baadal


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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #4 on: March 26, 2008, 05:27:35 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khooob Nira..bahut Jazbaati kavita pesh ki hai aapne..
bahut hi ache.. Applause


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honeyrose

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #5 on: March 26, 2008, 05:58:16 AM »

Nira bohat hi acha likha hai aankhon main aansu aaye mere


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mistufer

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #6 on: March 26, 2008, 06:02:59 AM »

Quote from: aarzoomehek on March 26, 2008, 03:56:46 AM

Niraaaaa this is one of ur best written nazm very touchy nsensitive n it's one of my fav.huggssssssss for sharing with us..bless u.. Usual Smile

harash ji
jab dard chan seema par paunch jata hai tih sahdyad sab ke dilse se yeh hi fariyaad nikalti.
aapka saath aor hausla afzaayi ka dilse dhanyawaad karti hoon.

nira


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Roja

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #7 on: March 26, 2008, 07:17:59 AM »

Nira sis, aapka ye kalam mujhe bahut emotional kardiya hai.
God Bless you dear.


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Shikha12

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #8 on: March 26, 2008, 07:28:53 AM »

Nira.. I am really Out of Words.. This is really very very touching. Very nicely written. Applause

I know, its painful to even think of this subject.. And You have done a Wonderful Job.. Applause

Ek baat jaroor kehna chahungi.. humare parents humein zindagi dete hai, usey jeena sikhaate hai aur chahte hai ki hum zindagi ko bharpoor jiyein.. agar unse hi kafan maanga jaaye to, unke dil par kya beetegi... Yeh to aapki haar mein unki haar ho gayi naa...

Please don't mind, but I wrote, what I felt.. Feared.

Sorry for this lecture, but I just could not stop myself from writing this...


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Rajbir

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #9 on: March 26, 2008, 07:51:33 AM »

Nira

Very nicely written ! Applause

@Shikha

Quote from: Shikha12 on March 26, 2008, 07:28:53 AM

Sorry for this lecture, but I just could not stop myself from writing this...

Lecture dena to tumhari poorani aadat hai Winking


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Shikha12

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #10 on: March 26, 2008, 07:55:10 AM »

Quote from: Rajbir on March 26, 2008, 07:51:33 AM

@Shikha

Quote from: Shikha12 on March 26, 2008, 07:28:53 AM

Sorry for this lecture, but I just could not stop myself from writing this...

Lecture dena to tumhari poorani aadat hai Winking

Yeah... I know.. sad7


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kaushikbhawna008

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #11 on: March 26, 2008, 08:44:23 AM »

nira ji bohut hi dard se bhari hui line likhi hai aapne..........aapne to hame rone par majbur hi kar diya


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harashmahajan

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #12 on: March 27, 2008, 03:00:56 AM »

Mahiya ji adaab.....pehle toh maiN aapse Gujaarish kerooNga ki meri iss Duvidha ko door kariN ki aap hi Shikha haiN kya? ....agar haiN toh ye do do id kyuiN ? just for infornmation ..hehehe.....iss yaaraane-bazm meiN aapki ye Guftgoo paRhi ourr yakeen maaniye bahoot hi achha laga ke yahaN bhi aise log haiN jo dil se paRrh ker hi apna review dete haiN Warna toh hameshaan yahi dekha gaya hai ke apne clicks badaane ke chakkerr maiN sabhi yahi likhte chale jaate haiN...'bahoot badiya' hai ....our Galti se unhe agarr yeh poochh liya jaaye ki jis perr unhone yeh likha hai.....usmeiN tha kya?...toh woh uska subject tak nahiN bata paayeNge ....Lekin aapke reviews maiN hamne alag baat dekhi hai...our aapse darkhwaast hai ki apnii pesh_kash ko isi tarah banaye RakheiN.

our aapki zehen se nikle apne waalden ke liye jazba bhi paRha....ourr kyuiN na ho...aapko bhi sabhi ki tarah apne waalden se utna hi pyaar hai....our waise bhi theek kaha aapne waalden ke liye uska bachha dil aziiz hota hi hai lekin Kavii ki soch ko aaj tak koi bhi aalam-fazal nahiN rok paya....our agar rokne jaisa socha jaye toh ek likhari (writer)apni us uRhaan ko ... jo uske dil se Guzar rahi hai..kabhi bhi kagaz per nahiiN utaar paayega..our yaraane-bazm woh plateforrm hai jahaN har insaan apne dil ke hazoom apnii nazm ke Zarie yahaaN pesh ker sakta hai..our wahii ker sakta hai jo kerne ka Hunar rakhta hai....Nira ji ne bhi apni nazm ke janib se kuchh isii tarah kahne kii koshish kii hai our nazm kii soorat kutchh iss tarah nikli ke woh har dil leel gayii.....
Humm sabhi log yahaN... ''Likhne waale ka'' likhne ka hunar dekheiN toh woh bharpoor jhalakta nazer aayega....jiske liye hum log yahaaN haiN....Subject chun.na hi toh likhne waale ki kala our uski soch ka namoona hai.....our itne dil ko chhoo lene waale andaaz se ye nazm pesh kii gayii hai ke isko padne ka dil baar baar kerta hai....woh insaan pata nahii kis DoRrh se Guzra ho shayad hum andaza na laga paayeiN hoN....Jo baat hamare Zehen se Guzar rahii hai ....Kya wahi baat...likhne waale ke Zehen se nahiN Guzri hogi?....Likhne wala Behtar jaanta hai....ki woh kya likh gaya...Meri taraf se phir se is pur-asar nazm ko Dil se salaam ...bahoot bahoot Shukriyaa^h.....Mahiyaa ji Is writing ka Credit bhi aap hi ko jata hai..aapka bhi bahoot bahoot Shukrriyaa^h......Harash

Quote from: Mahiya on March 26, 2008, 07:28:53 AM

Nira.. I am really Out of Words.. This is really very very touching. Very nicely written. Applause

I know, its painful to even think of this subject.. And You have done a Wonderful Job.. Applause

Sorry for this lecture, but I just could not stop myself from writing this...


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mistufer

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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #13 on: March 27, 2008, 03:22:50 PM »

Quote from: Mahiya on March 26, 2008, 07:28:53 AM

Nira.. I am really Out of Words.. This is really very very touching. Very nicely written. Applause

I know, its painful to even think of this subject.. And You have done a Wonderful Job.. Applause

Sorry for this lecture, but I just could not stop myself from writing this...

Mahiya ji
aapko yahan dekhar bahut khushi huyi, aapne nazm ko saraya dilse dhanyawaad deti hoon. aapne sahi kaha hai ki koi alaud jab yeh mangti hai toh unke dil par kya guzarti hongi. hum sab apne mata pita ko chahte, unki izzaat karte, unka saaya apne saath bana rahe uski kaamna rakhte hai. main bhi unmain se hi hoon.

par aap isse ek lekhakh ke nazar se dekhain, maine vo jazbaaton aapke samne layi hoon jo kabhi naa kabhi kisi ke dil se is awaaz ke roop mein nikalti ki khash muje bhi mere kafaan baijde taki main bhi unke paas chala jayoon, yeh ek haarne ki baat nahi hoti vo pyaar bhi hota maa papa ke prati, jab bacha akela ho jata hai.

plz muje aapka is aoer dhayan karana bikul bhi lucture nahi laga, in fact aacha laga ki aapne haq se muje is aor dhayan karaya.

apna khayal rakhna aor yunhi saath deti rahna.
nira


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Re: Muje kafan bhej do papa.

«Reply #14 on: March 27, 2008, 03:32:25 PM »

Quote from: mistufer on March 27, 2008, 03:22:50 PM

Quote from: Mahiya on March 26, 2008, 07:28:53 AM

Nira.. I am really Out of Words.. This is really very very touching. Very nicely written. Applause

I know, its painful to even think of this subject.. And You have done a Wonderful Job.. Applause

Sorry for this lecture, but I just could not stop myself from writing this...

niraji aapne bahut achi baat kahi, kabhi-kabhi zindagi ki iss daud mein,jab kabhi insaan apne aap ko tanha paata hai,jab koi apna humesha ke liye bichad jaata hai dil se yeh sada zaroor nikalti hai ke "mujhe bhi apne paas bulao"... mujhe aapki yeh kavita bahut pasand aayi,aur umeed karta hoon ke aap hamesha itni achi aur gehri kavitaye likhte rahenge..


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