Mujhe Aisi Duniya Nahi Chahiye....

by Aryaan on March 08, 2005, 12:45:24 AM
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Aryaan
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Tumhi ko mubarak rahe dosto
mujhe aisi duniya nahi chahiye
Pighalti nahi aansuon se kabhi
Yeh duniya woh pathar ki deewaar hai
Kisi ke ghamon se isey kaam kya
Yeh duniya khushi ki khareedar hai
Yeh duniya tau hai ek neelaam ghar
Yahan zindagi baich dete hain log
Kisi apna samjhein, kisi ajnabi
Yahan mohabbat baich dete hain log
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #1 on: March 08, 2005, 01:03:34 AM »
TUMHEIN HI MUBARAK HO HARJAI  YEH GHUMON KI DUNIYA
WERNA HUMIEN TU NAHIN AISI DUNIYA CHAHIYE HAI
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jalpari
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«Reply #2 on: March 08, 2005, 03:19:48 AM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Tumhi ko mubarak rahe dosto
mujhe aisi duniya nahi chahiye
Pighalti nahi aansuon se kabhi
Yeh duniya woh pathar ki deewaar hai
Kisi ke ghamon se isey kaam kya
Yeh duniya khushi ki khareedar hai
Yeh duniya tau hai ek neelaam ghar
Yahan zindagi baich dete hain log
Kisi apna samjhein, kisi ajnabi
Yahan mohabbat baich dete hain log

Lovely Aryaan, kahan se late ho itni achi shaeri..Beautiful!
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2005, 03:22:03 AM »
WOH FURQAT MEIN BHI TNHA ANHIN HOTA HAI
HUM MEHFIL MEIN BHI TNHA HOTEY HAIN
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2005, 03:34:28 PM »
very nice, naveed and aryan Usual Smile
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HumTum
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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2005, 03:35:27 PM »
Wah sab ne bahut acha likha ...:D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #6 on: March 08, 2005, 03:37:14 PM »
Thanx myheart_ursonly & HumTum....
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #7 on: March 08, 2005, 11:50:46 PM »

SHUKRIA :D  AMIT

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Meena
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«Reply #8 on: March 09, 2005, 04:37:23 PM »
Quote from: "Aryaan"
Tumhi ko mubarak rahe dosto
mujhe aisi duniya nahi chahiye
Pighalti nahi aansuon se kabhi
Yeh duniya woh pathar ki deewaar hai
Kisi ke ghamon se isey kaam kya
Yeh duniya khushi ki khareedar hai
Yeh duniya tau hai ek neelaam ghar
Yahan zindagi baich dete hain log
Kisi apna samjhein, kisi ajnabi
Yahan mohabbat baich dete hain log


no words to describe ur beautiful poem!!

 :D
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Aryaan
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«Reply #9 on: March 09, 2005, 06:30:34 PM »
Bohat bohat shukriya Meena... itni tareef ke laaiQ nahi hoon main.. baat tau parhne waale ke samajhne ki hai... aapko poem achi lagi, iss se zayada mere liye koi bari baat nahi....Thank you so much....Usual Smile
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Meena
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«Reply #10 on: March 09, 2005, 06:37:31 PM »
ur welcome ji!

 :D
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sanya310
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«Reply #11 on: March 09, 2005, 07:02:30 PM »
v. nice aryaan...nice words Usual Smile
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Aryaan
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«Reply #12 on: March 09, 2005, 07:39:25 PM »
Thanx Sanya....Usual Smile
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fakharenaveed
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«Reply #13 on: March 09, 2005, 09:25:03 PM »
YAAR SEND SOME PSTS DONT JUST CHAT HERE


AAB AYE HOT U KUCH MNORANJAN TU KROO
HUM HAIN YAAHN AAP K LIYE BETAAB
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Aryaan
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«Reply #14 on: March 12, 2005, 12:36:21 AM »
Bhuloon ga agar tujhe tau ji na paoon ga
yaad bhi rakhaa agar tau marr jaoon ga
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