Mujhe bataya hota bas itna.....

by nidhi_yadein on December 20, 2004, 05:23:51 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 25, 2004, 08:16:15 AM »
very nice..Nidhi...
Aai thi meri zindagi mein bhi bahaar.. wah wah... bohat khoob
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«Reply #16 on: December 25, 2004, 09:29:53 AM »
Quote from: "Meena"
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Ik muddat se is dil ko karar ki talash hai,
   zindagi ko is tanha safar mein ik hamsafar ki talash hai,
   yun to roz is duniya me dikhai dete hain chehre hazaron,
   in chehron ke beech hame ik chehre ki talash hai,
   baad muddaton ke mili thi,woh zindagi bichad gayi hamse,
   aaj tak us bichadi hui,zindagi ki hame talash hai"


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!


wowowowwowo   nidhi...............very touching word.............superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb b

Sansoon k  silsilay ko na do zindagi ka naam
kuch log jeene k bawajood mar gaye..................   (nm)
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«Reply #17 on: December 25, 2004, 05:04:22 PM »
Thanx a lot meena g Usual Smile for ur kindness everytime.
u really make me happy.
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«Reply #18 on: December 25, 2004, 06:18:45 PM »
lol aarreeeeeeeeeee aap likhit bohot acha hai kya karon tareef to karni parti hai phir, dil ko jo baat chu jaye tareef e kabil hoti hai!

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«Reply #19 on: December 28, 2004, 10:42:30 AM »
Thanx a lot. Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: December 28, 2004, 01:37:55 PM »
very very nice Nidhi ...gr8 work
keep sending such good work.
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«Reply #21 on: December 29, 2004, 09:15:18 AM »
THANX NIKKI AND WAHEED!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: December 29, 2004, 09:25:24 AM »
wow nidhi ...so sweet Usual Smile very nice
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«Reply #23 on: December 29, 2004, 09:28:27 AM »
THANK U NISHITA!!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: December 29, 2004, 10:06:48 AM »
"DEKH KE BHI ANDEKHA KARTE HO,
 JAAN KE BHI ANJAAN BANTE HO,
 JAB MAIN NAZREIN MILATI HUN TUMSE,
 KYUN NAZREIN FERNE KI NAKAAM KOSHISH KARTE HO..."
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«Reply #25 on: December 29, 2004, 10:44:33 AM »
VERY NICE NIDHI, SUPER POEM. U R EXCELLENT.
MAIN BHI KUCH KAHNA CHAHTA HOO---

MOHABBAT KYA HAI YE KISNE JANA HAI,
ISKE ASTITWA KO KISNE MANA HAI,
YE WO CHINGARI HAI JO,
FOOK DE SARA CHAMAN ASHIYANA HAI,
JIS TARAH BEGANO MAIN FOOL KHILTA HAI KABHI-2,
USI TARAH KISI KISI DIL MAIN ISKA THIKANA HAI,
BAHUT KATHIN KAAM HAI MOHABBAT,
BAS ITNA SAMAJH LO,
FARJ HAMARA YE SABKO SAMJHANA HAI,
AUR KAHNE WALO NE BHI KYA KHOOB KAHA HAI,
ISHQ EK AAG KA DARIYA HAI AUR DOOB KAR JANA HAI.
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«Reply #26 on: December 29, 2004, 11:34:37 AM »
thank u! Usual Smile
kapil ji bohat accha likha apne.excellent!
keep writing.
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«Reply #27 on: December 29, 2004, 04:50:53 PM »
Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"DEKH KE BHI ANDEKHA KARTE HO,
 JAAN KE BHI ANJAAN BANTE HO,
 JAB MAIN NAZREIN MILATI HUN TUMSE,
 KYUN NAZREIN FERNE KI NAKAAM KOSHISH KARTE HO..."


very nice nidhi,............mrkapli..........bahot khoob........keep writing.....

hum bade door se aaye hain tumhary khatir
dil k arman bhee laye hain tumhary khatir................
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«Reply #28 on: December 30, 2004, 08:29:41 AM »
thank u waheed,very nice.
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«Reply #29 on: December 30, 2004, 08:53:34 AM »
Wowwww.........
Very nicely written everything.
Keep going.
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