mujhe to baharo'n se dar lagta hai .......rehan mubarak "tanhaa"

by haan on January 12, 2013, 01:37:08 PM
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apni  kachchi  deewaro'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !  
mujhe  aise   saharo'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !!  

dekhe  hai'n  aankho'n  mai'n larazte  aansu !
bahte  hue  aabsharo'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !!  

jab    se    dekha     hai  chaman ko  jalte !
mujhe  to  bahaaro'n    se  dar  lagta  hai  !!  

shahr  pe  chhaye  hai'n  dhhue'n  ke  badal !
jalte  hue  nazaro'n   se   dar  lagta  hai  !!

mayusi  na   bane    khudkushi   ka  sab'ab  !  
qismat  ke  sitaro'n    se  dar  lagta  hai  !!  

Rehan  Mubarak  "Tanhaa"
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«Reply #1 on: January 12, 2013, 02:21:49 PM »
Quote from: haan on January 12, 2013, 01:37:08 PM
apni  kachchi  deewaro'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  ! 
mujhe  aise  saayadaro'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !! 
dekhe  hai'n  aankho'n  mai'n larazte  aansu  !
bahte  hue  aabsharo'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !! 
jab  se  dekha  hai  chaman  ko  jalte  !
mujhe  in  bahaaro'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !!   
shahr  pe  chhaye  hai'n  dhhue'n  ke  badal  !
jalte  hue  nazaro'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !!
mayusi  banti  hai  khudkushi  ka  sab'ab  ! 
qismat  ke  maaro'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !! 
rehan  mubarak  "tanhaa"

Khoob janaab khoob
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«Reply #2 on: January 12, 2013, 03:16:52 PM »
Quote from: haan on January 12, 2013, 01:37:08 PM
apni  kachchi  deewaro'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  ! 
mujhe  aise   saharo'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !! 

dekhe  hai'n  aankho'n  mai'n larazte  aansu !
bahte  hue  aabsharo'n  se  dar  lagta  hai  !! 

jab    se    dekha     hai  chaman ko  jalte !
mujhe  to  bahaaro'n    se  dar  lagta  hai  !!   

shahr  pe  chhaye  hai'n  dhhue'n  ke  badal !
jalte  hue  nazaro'n   se   dar  lagta  hai  !!

mayusi  na   bane    khudkushi   ka  sab'ab  ! 
qismat  ke  maaro'n    se   dar  lagta  hai  !! 

Rehan  Mubarak  "Tanhaa"

rehan sb aapne bahut badiya gazhal likha hai... mai jawab mein kuch likhna chaha. but darr lagta hai... shandar peshkash. bahut sari daad
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2013, 03:35:02 PM »
boht khub rehaan ji waah
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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2013, 03:49:06 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on January 12, 2013, 03:16:52 PM
rehan sb aapne bahut badiya gazhal likha hai... mai jawab mein kuch likhna chaha. but darr lagta hai... shandar peshkash. bahut sari daad
NAMASKAR, SUMAN JI DAAD DENE KA YE ANDAZ PASAND AAYA ,YE APNE AAP ME GHAZAL KA MUKAMMAL JAWAB HAI, DAAD KE LIYE SHUKRIYA
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2013, 04:13:26 PM »
waah bohat khoob ,..........bohat c daad,......
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2013, 05:02:08 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2013, 02:20:18 AM »
bohut khoob rehaan sb kya baat hai umda ghazal hai sabhi ashaar lajwab rahe daaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2013, 02:58:24 AM »
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