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« on: April 04, 2005, 10:23:16 AM »

Jab tumko chaha hai to...
Mohabbat tumhe sikha hi denge...
Dard ka rishta jo hai...
Aaj tumko rula hi denge...

Ishq mein tumne seekha hi kya hai...
Katl karna...katl hona...
Ek lamha baar baar jeena...
Kuchh zindagi, kuchh maut..tumhe dikha hi denge...


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« Reply #1 on: April 04, 2005, 10:25:26 AM »

Quote from: "Radha"

wel come to yoindia..... for you ...

Teri khaatir sab kuch, bhulaana kubool hai,
Aaj tera phir se mujhe, rulaana kubool hai

Kuch baat baaki rahi, aaj keh lene de mujhe,
Mujhko teri har baat ka, sunaana kubool hai

Raakh ban gaya hoon mohabbat ki aag mein,
Magar yuhi tera mujhko, jalaana kubool hai

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erii raahon mein baarahaa ruk kar
ham ne apanaa hii intazaar kiiyaa
ab naa maangenge zindagii yaa rab!
ye gunaah ham ne ek baar kiiyaa

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« Reply #2 on: April 04, 2005, 10:27:10 AM »

Wow Radha ji.....very well written...........welcome to yoindia...hope that u stay n contribute many more like this.....


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Life is beautiful!!!

Patthar ke khuda,patthar ke sanam,patthar ke hi insaan paye hai,
Tum seher e muhabbat kehte ho,hum jan bacha kar aaye hai.

A request : Always give proper credits to the author if you are posting other's work

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« Reply #3 on: April 04, 2005, 10:47:54 AM »

Thanks Hum Tum & thycreator !

" Naye vaadon ki kasmen nahi kyaya karte..
Mohabbat baaton se nahi jataya karte.. "


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« Reply #4 on: April 04, 2005, 01:01:16 PM »

Quote from: "Radha"

its such a lovely poem radha ji!! and welcome to yoindia!!

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at pado hal-e-dil mere chehre pe aye dost,
Ansowon ke lafz hai, behe jayenge....

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« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2005, 04:22:22 PM »

Quote from: "Radha"

Bohat khoob Radha..... aur yoindia mein aapka khair maQdam hai.. Usual Smile


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« Reply #6 on: April 06, 2005, 08:26:51 AM »

Very nice

Ishq mein tumne seekha hi kya hai...
Katl karna...katl hona...
Ek lamha baar baar jeena...

Welcome Radha
Yo india group main aapka a swagat hai

HAME TAU SIRF ARZ KARNE KA MAUUKA MILTA HAI
SHIKAYAT KARNE KA HAQ TO USNE KISI AUR KO DE RAAKHA HAI


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« Reply #7 on: April 06, 2005, 10:13:35 AM »

Welcome to yoindia Radhaji ...
And really it is a lovely poem ...
Hope to see more nice posts from you ...

Khushboo pyaar ki har aur bikhar jati hai,
Tumhare muskrane se hamari duniya bhi muskrati hai,
Jab bhi dekhti ho tum pyaar se hamari aur,
Saare zamane ki khushiya hamare daman mein chali aati hai......


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Have No Yesterday,
Time Took It Away,
Tomorrow May Not Be,
But I Have Today.
So just think about present
Kya Pata
"Kal Ho Naa Ho"

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« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2005, 01:34:25 AM »

hi radha

good going. nice write

can u send me more ur thought to me


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« Reply #9 on: April 18, 2005, 01:41:16 AM »

Quote from: "Radha"

Good one Radha!! and good ones ..all!!!


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« Reply #10 on: April 19, 2005, 06:27:36 AM »

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very nice Radha and welcome to yoindia

dil tumhara hai
aaj tumhe bata hi denge
khusian tujhse hai
hum ye jata hi denge
tune choda tuh barbaad ho jayege
hum tujhe khudko mitake dikha hi denge


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« Reply #11 on: April 19, 2005, 12:22:39 PM »

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Quote from: "Radha"

wah!!!!!!!!!!! very nice radha.............hum tum..........sandhaya.....just hate....& all............. ur welcome to "Yoindia"


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jiski aankhen mujhe ander se padhsakti ho
koi chehra to mere shaher mein aisa laa de
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Humein Talash Hai Duniya Mein Aise Logon Ki
Jo Doosharon K Liye Khud Ko Bhool Jaate Hain.
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1. It is good idea to give full credit

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« Reply #12 on: April 20, 2005, 12:11:57 AM »

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Quote from: "HumTum"

Quote from: "Radha"

wah!!!!!!!!!!! very nice radha.............hum tum..........sandhaya.....just hate....& all............. ur welcome to "Yoindia"

sukhriya waheed ji,,................


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« Reply #13 on: April 24, 2005, 08:49:51 AM »

Thanks Bhai and thanx a lot Sandhaya ......

Sadiyon se hothon pe pyaas thi,
Aaj samundar dekha to pii gaye,
Paida hote hi marne ki tamanna thi,
Par tujhe dekha to jii gaye ......(nm)


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Have No Yesterday,
Time Took It Away,
Tomorrow May Not Be,
But I Have Today.
So just think about present
Kya Pata
"Kal Ho Naa Ho"

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« Reply #14 on: April 25, 2005, 01:07:11 AM »

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Thanks Bhai and thanx a lot Sandhaya ......

Sadiyon se hothon pe pyaas thi,
Aaj samundar dekha to pii gaye,
Paida hote hi marne ki tamanna thi,
Par tujhe dekha to jii gaye ......(nm)

ur welcome JHL

hum tuh vo hai jo mout se bhi pehle marna chahte the
jab je dakha hai tujhe jeene ko jee chahta hai
tujhse hi hai abh tuh khushi har ek maeri zindagi ki
tere liye apni har ek saan tak lutane ko jee chahta hai


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