Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!:Shayri-E-Dard

Talat

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Badal sa gaya kuch,na rahe ab wo hum
Kho gaye khyaal, toot gayi hai qalam

Chalte chalte liya waqt ne yoon mod
Ja rahe the kahin, chal diye kahin hum

Na kehne ko kuch, na sunne ki khwahish
Har jazbe se khaali jaise ab hue hum

Askhon ka samundar ufan raha hai dil main
Khusk hain lekin, nahin hain aankhen nam

Kho rahe hain purane, jud rahe naye rishte
Waqt de raha hai ek naye insaan ko janam !!


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deepika_divya

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2007, 11:29:46 AM »

Di kya khoob likha hai aapne.. seriously... jaise jaise zingai k safzr mein aage badte hai.. papne kal ko bhool hum hum hi reh jaatein hai.. na koi kwaish reh jati hai.. Well expressed Talat Di


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Pooja

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2007, 04:09:16 PM »

nice Talat!!


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Bharat

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #3 on: May 02, 2007, 04:11:47 PM »

Talat,

Bohot hi achcha likha hai !


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Talat

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2007, 09:34:40 AM »

Thank You Divs, Pooja and Bharat


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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2007, 01:07:05 PM »

bahut ache Talat....kafi sachai lagti hai


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Talat

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #6 on: June 13, 2007, 11:11:45 AM »

Thank You !


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Shikha12

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«Reply #7 on: June 29, 2007, 06:10:34 AM »

Its Really very Nice Talat.... =D> =D>

(But where are you these days, Really Missing you... sad5

and your writings..)


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sharmaarunkumar

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«Reply #8 on: July 10, 2007, 08:42:41 AM »

Waaaah!! Talat ji!!bahut achchhe!! Nicely written!!!!


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Talat

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2007, 02:00:39 PM »

Thanks Shikha.......bas ab aana nahin hota..aur ab likhna bhi bhool gaye hain.

Thanks a lot Arunji..bohot shukriya sarahne ka......


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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2007, 10:26:54 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Wah .....ye likhne ke liye to aap ko baar baar aana hoga


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Talat

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #11 on: July 14, 2007, 07:51:32 AM »

Bohot bohot shukriya Paani.....par ab alfaz nahin rahe ki aur likhen Usual Smile


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«Reply #12 on: July 16, 2007, 07:26:44 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Woowowowowow just felling short of words once again..i dont know how u do it most of d time,whatever i feel to write but i m not able to....all that i find in ur posts...and reading on with every line the excitement increases....lovely TalaT.

"Kabhi socha na tha yun waqt ke saath ham bhi badal jayenge,
jinke bina zindagi nahi thi,wo rishte apne aap choot jayenge,
dil ke ek kone me sab kuch khone ka gham to hai magar....,
waqt nahi ab mere paas un puraani raahon ko nihaarne ka."


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paani

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #13 on: July 16, 2007, 10:44:35 AM »

Quote from: "Talat"

Bohot bohot shukriya Paani.....par ab alfaz nahin rahe ki aur likhen Usual Smile

Talat ji .. Dard khatm ho to alfaz khatam ho...


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Talat

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Na ab wo raah hai.....na ab wo hum....!!

«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2007, 04:37:30 PM »

Paani....ab itna waqt hi nahin milta ki alfaaz ko joden ! Usual Smile

Thanks a lot Nidhi Usual Smile

....Its my pleasure that a great poetess relates herself to my poetry ! Nice one by you...


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