Na Hote gar Wo

by raahgir on April 24, 2009, 05:55:56 AM
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raahgir
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Na hote gar wo  zindagi me to ye baat nahi hoti
Meri aankho ki ashkoon se mulakat nahi hoti

Har shakhsh se milte ajanabi banker
Yu charcha hamari sare baajar nahi hoti

Aaj ek hi ghar me rahte hain beganoon ki tarah
Yu maa, baap se rishtoo me takraar nahi hoti

Yu karta na koi faisla hamari kismet ka
Yu jindagi hamari gunahgaar nahi hoti
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #1 on: April 24, 2009, 06:34:41 AM »
Hmmmmm..... Kafi kuch kehta hain yeh kalaam Raahgir... Good work....
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Talat
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«Reply #2 on: April 24, 2009, 07:25:29 AM »
Nice work, Raahgir Ji
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raahgir
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«Reply #3 on: April 24, 2009, 07:34:14 AM »
Hmmmmm..... Kafi kuch kehta hain yeh kalaam Raahgir... Good work....

main samjha nahi aap kehna kya chahte hain
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raahgir
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«Reply #4 on: April 24, 2009, 07:36:28 AM »
Nice work, Raahgir Ji

Thank you celmira ji
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #5 on: April 24, 2009, 07:45:19 AM »
main samjha nahi aap kehna kya chahte hain

Sirf itna ke tumne ek bohat khoobsurat kalam likha hai.....aur mujhe yeh mehsoos hua ke yeh ek shau_her ke nazariye se likha gaya hain shayed....Waise dobara dad kabool ho  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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salma786
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«Reply #6 on: April 24, 2009, 08:21:48 AM »
Nice work Raahgir ji Applause Applause
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TruefrienD
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«Reply #7 on: April 24, 2009, 08:26:06 AM »
Dard bhare pyar ki talash kab tak,
Wo na aaye to uska intzar kab tak,
Ab khud ek yakin pe shaq hone laga he,
Aakhir jhoothi aas par eitbar kab tak?


Not Mine
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raahgir
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«Reply #8 on: April 24, 2009, 08:30:38 AM »
Sirf itna ke tumne ek bohat khoobsurat kalam likha hai.....aur mujhe yeh mehsoos hua ke yeh ek shau_her ke nazariye se likha gaya hain shayed....Waise dobara dad kabool ho  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

sajid ji hum to kunware hain to sauhar ka najariya kahan se layenge per haan aap gehrayi ka pata laga hi lete hain
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diya786
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«Reply #9 on: April 24, 2009, 10:45:21 AM »
bahut khoob Piyush ji Applause Applause
keep writing
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raahgir
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«Reply #10 on: April 24, 2009, 12:17:24 PM »
bahut khoob Piyush ji Applause Applause
keep writing


thank you kashish ji
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #11 on: April 24, 2009, 12:23:38 PM »
Raahgir Bhai.. Kamaal Likha Hai Dost.. Aur Last Jumla to Waqai Dil tak utar gaya.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob..!! Daad Kubool karen is Dost ki.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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raahgir
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«Reply #12 on: April 25, 2009, 06:16:32 AM »
Raahgir Bhai.. Kamaal Likha Hai Dost.. Aur Last Jumla to Waqai Dil tak utar gaya.. Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob..!! Daad Kubool karen is Dost ki.. Applause Applause

Dear Maan

Hum ise apni khusnasibi samjhate hain ki aapko hamari rachana itni pasand aayi . Is rachana me humne apni jindagi ke kuchh sachchayiyon ko darsaya tha . shayad aaj wahi dard khushi de raha hai. ek baar fir se aap ke is comment ke liye shukriya ada karna chahunga

thank you


**~** Mann **~**
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nirala
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«Reply #13 on: March 31, 2011, 03:59:06 PM »
kamaal ki post hai rahgir ji.
khafa khafa kuch sarkaar nazar aate hain
dil ko gahre tak jhanjhana de aapke inn khayalon me
wo taar nazar aate hain
””
hazaaro daad hai ji
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