Na Jaanu Main ....!!!

by Talat on April 02, 2007, 04:43:32 PM
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Talat
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Jaane kya hai dil ke andar jo chupke se toot raha hai
Ek meherbaan ka haath jaise hathon se chooth raha hai

Lamha lamha guzar ke dafan ho raha hai seene main
Seh kar ye dard kuch ajab maza aane laga hai jeene main

Jaane kis rehguzar pe humne qadam badhaaye hain
Jaana tha kis manzil par, kis aor nikal hum aaye hain

Ek khalish hai dil ko ghere, ek ajab khaamoshi chaayi hai
In chubhti tanhaaiyon main aaj yaad teri bohot aayi hai !!
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«Reply #1 on: April 02, 2007, 05:10:23 PM »
Bohat khoob TalaT....excellent Usual Smile .

"Na jaane ye kis raah main jaa rahi hoon......,
     kehna chahti hun kuch,keh nahi pa rahi hun..,
     zuban khamosh hai,akelapan sa hai zindgi me,
     tanhaaiyon me aaj fir tujhe pukaar rahi hun..."
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«Reply #2 on: April 02, 2007, 05:12:00 PM »
bahut hi acche talat jiiiiiii tongue3

ur too is good nidhi.

na jannu mai kyun wo mujhse door ho raha hai
ki iss dil me to uske lie pyar aur badh raha hai

bahut koshishe karta hun usko manane ko
pur wo to lagta hai than chuka hai mujhse ruth jaane ko

aise to bahut bedard log hai iss zamane me
na janu mai  kyu use bhi maja ata hai mujhe rulane me.
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«Reply #3 on: April 02, 2007, 05:27:28 PM »
shukriya ji...aapne bhi bohat acha likha.
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«Reply #4 on: April 02, 2007, 06:11:19 PM »
Talat... Very nicely expressed... Too good... =D>

Nidhi... Kum shabdon mey bahut kuch keh diya tumne... Very nice... =D>

Ankur... Very good Reply.. Very expressive... =D>
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2007, 04:03:13 AM »
Wow Talat Di mindblowing... niddhi & Ankur Bahoot bahoot khoob likha hai....

Na janu main kyun main
sagar ki tarah beh chali hun...

Manzil ka tho pata nahi ,
bus ak kinaare pe aa kadi hui hun....

Mujhe tho tere saath ki umeed thi
par najane kiske saath mein aaj kadi hun

Tamanan thi tere sang jiye main yea Zindagi
na jaanu main ki ab bi kiski raah dekh rahi hun.
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2007, 08:38:06 AM »
very nice Talat n all....
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Talat
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2007, 04:44:47 PM »
Nidhi, Ankur, Shikha, Divs and Jeet.....thanks a lot friends....!!

Very nice Nidhi, Ankur and Divs.....Jaldi hi jawab dene ki koshish karungi....! Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 03, 2007, 05:06:28 PM »
Bahut achhe talat ji and all...

Na jaanu main dil ke zakhm kyon aaj roye hia,
na jaane kitne dard tanhaiyon ki chadar mein soye hai,
chaha tha banayenge aashiyana chandni tale,
aaj gam ke andheron mein bikharke khoye hia...
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«Reply #9 on: April 03, 2007, 05:07:35 PM »
ek se badkar ek umda shayari hai aap logo ki..................gud job talat ji ,ankur ji,nidhi ji,deepika_divya ji .....& jeet bhai aur sikha ji .....nice 2 sse u...akhirkaar honsla afhaayi ka bhi apna hi maza hai......keep goin guys
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2007, 12:03:14 AM »
Bohat khoob Talat...

Nice Replies Nidhi, Ankur, Deepika & Angel..
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2007, 04:34:00 PM »
thanx shikha, deepika,nidhi, jeet, talat jeeee tongue3,angel, aryan, purani jeens......


good job deepika, angel
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«Reply #12 on: April 05, 2007, 11:28:34 AM »
Thanks a lot Angel, Aryaan, Fahi and Ankur Usual Smile Very nice Angel Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 05, 2007, 12:05:31 PM »
Thank u all.... Good one angel
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Talat
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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2007, 06:40:38 PM »
Na jaanu main kyun yaadain bhoolti nahin
Zanjeerain dil ko jakde hain, toot ti nahin

Ya Ilaahi, bohot dard deti hain ye yaadain
Jaise bail mohabbat ki dil main sookhti nahin
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