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kis manzil per le aaya tera pyaar mujhe
na din me chain hai na raat me karar mujhe

kahan per jaker tujhko main awaaz du
paththar na bana de tera intezaar mujhe

kitne armano se humsafar banaya tha
tum bhi dhoka de gaye pyaare yar mujhe

kabhi tera wajood jaagir tha baaho ka meri
aur ab mayasser nahi hai tera didar mujhe

dum ghutne laga hai ab is shaher me mera
zahar lagne lagi hai sawan ki bahar mujhe

mujhko teri wafa per bharosa tha, wado per yakeen
lout aa, na nilaam ker tu ser-e-bazaar mujhe


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na nilam ker tu ser-e-bazar mujhe

«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2007, 01:29:42 PM »

Wow... This is really very touching...
Very nicely compiled.. and very lovely words used...

Naa nilaam kar tu yun sar-e-bazaar mujhe,
Main teri muhabbat ka adhoora fasana hoon...
Tere Waqt ka ek hissa main bhi hoon, beshak
Tu kehta hai ki ek guzra hua zamaana hoon...


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na nilam ker tu ser-e-bazar mujhe

«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2007, 07:40:55 PM »

Beautiful words samnoj

Shikha, you also said very true !


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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2007, 08:34:03 PM »

Quote from: "samnoj"

samnoj ji bahut accha likha hai.


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na nilam ker tu ser-e-bazar mujhe

«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2007, 10:17:49 AM »

shukriya Shikha , ricky ji aur rajiv

Shikha aapne bhi bahut acha likha hai


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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2007, 05:08:58 PM »

bohot acha likha hai samnoj


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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2007, 06:32:10 PM »

Quote from: "samnoj"

kabhi tera wajood jaagir tha baaho ka meri
aur ab mayasser nahi hai tera didar mujhe

mujhko teri wafa per bharosa tha, wado per yakeen
lout aa, na nilaam ker tu ser-e-bazaar mujhe

Sam, her ek line bahoot hi achi likhi hai... magar yah lines to dil ko chu gai.. bahoot khoob!!

Kabhi barsta tha her waqat pyar mujh per
Ajj shabdo ke nashtar hi milte hai

Kal tak thi main tera sansaar
Ajj bazaru se shabd milte hai

Mita diya jiske liye wajood apna
Unke dil main, kisi aor ke armaan milte hai

Kaise ki neelam meri ek ek hasrat usne
Iske churche sar-e-bazar milte hai

Choor choor her ek umeend ho jaati hai
Jab bhi kabhi bhoole bhatke se hum unse milte hai

Kabhi barsta tha her waqat pyar mujh per
Ajj shabdo ke nashtar hi milte hai


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na nilam ker tu ser-e-bazar mujhe

«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2007, 06:37:50 PM »

Quote from: "Shikha12"

wah kaya baat hai Shikha.. apki shayri yaha bhi mujhko mera hi aina dikha rahi hai.. bahoot khoob!!!
LAST KI DO LINE KAMAAL!!


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«Reply #8 on: August 27, 2007, 10:36:36 AM »

thanx sanya, pooja ji

pooja ji aap to kamal likhti ho...


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na nilam ker tu ser-e-bazar mujhe

«Reply #9 on: August 27, 2007, 05:10:19 PM »

Bohot khoob Samnoj, Shikha and Pooja...very good work from all of you =D>


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na nilam ker tu ser-e-bazar mujhe

«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2007, 05:57:40 PM »

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thanx sanya, pooja ji

pooja ji aap to kamal likhti ho...

Apne acha likha to jawab main acha likh saki... sab apki likhi kavita ka kamal hai Sam ji!!!


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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2007, 11:31:47 AM »

Pooja ji kamal to aap me hai ....hum to bus koshish karte hai

thanx Talat


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na nilam ker tu ser-e-bazar mujhe

«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2007, 02:13:42 PM »

Apki agali koshish ka intzaar kar rahe hai hum Sam ji..

Chal kar neelam mere pyar ko
Yah manjar bhi ho jaane de
Her war tera yah dil seh gaya
khanja ab, dil-e-paar ho jaane de!!!


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