Na paasbaan, na humnawa.....!!

by Talat on January 18, 2008, 09:52:49 PM
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thycreator
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«Reply #15 on: January 20, 2008, 03:29:49 PM »
Quote from: Talat on January 20, 2008, 03:19:10 PM

Bohot hi khoob, Amit.....thanks dost....


Chehron pe muskurahat liye mila karte hain,
Dilon main ab mohabbatain mila karti nahin

Ghabra ke chal diye, par jaayenge bhi kahan
Yaadain jo hain naqsh, yoonhi mita karti nahin

Majbooriyaan unki, hum hi na samajh paaye
Tanhaiyaan meri koi gila karti nahin



Wah......

Dard mein tadapne se hum kyu gila karein,
Akele dil ko mere chalo koi kam toh mila...Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: January 20, 2008, 03:31:40 PM »
Quote from: Talat on January 20, 2008, 03:28:30 PM
Quote from: thycreator on January 20, 2008, 07:15:03 AM
Aur haan talat....mujhe pata hai aap kahin nahi jaogi yoindia se, pls yaar, aap kuch hi log ho jinke liye main aata hu yaha...pls aisa mat karo.

I m here.....and proud to have you as my friend ! Usual Smile

Mujhe pata tha ki tum aisa nahi karogi....thanks for not letting me down....Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: January 20, 2008, 03:38:30 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 20, 2008, 02:37:42 PM
BICHAD JAANE KE LIYE LOG MILTE NAHI
DARD JAB HAD SE BAD JAATA HAI
TO ZAKHM PHIR SILTE NAHI

JAANTA HOON, KUCH KHATA TO HOTI HAI HAR INSAAN SE
PAR CHOTI SI GALTI KE LIYE
ITNI BADI SAZAA MILT NAHI...

AAP SE GUZARISH HAI ZARA IS BAAT PE DYAAN DENA
EK BAAR JO SHAAM AA JAYE,PHIR AGLE PEHAR TAK
SUBAH KHILTI NAHI...

Bohot khoob Khwaish.....I m here !

Zakhmon ke nishaan aksar reh jaate hain
Umr bhar, haadson ki yaad wo dilate hain

Jinhee maana tha apna, dekha unhe jaate hue
Askhon ko pi kar hum ye ghum bhulate hain

Zindagi ko chorh kar koi jaaye bhi kahan,
Uth te hue qadam phir yoonhi laut aate hain !
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«Reply #18 on: January 20, 2008, 03:49:54 PM »
Quote from: Talat on January 20, 2008, 03:38:30 PM
Quote from: khwaish on January 20, 2008, 02:37:42 PM
BICHAD JAANE KE LIYE LOG MILTE NAHI
DARD JAB HAD SE BAD JAATA HAI
TO ZAKHM PHIR SILTE NAHI

JAANTA HOON, KUCH KHATA TO HOTI HAI HAR INSAAN SE
PAR CHOTI SI GALTI KE LIYE
ITNI BADI SAZAA MILT NAHI...

AAP SE GUZARISH HAI ZARA IS BAAT PE DYAAN DENA
EK BAAR JO SHAAM AA JAYE,PHIR AGLE PEHAR TAK
SUBAH KHILTI NAHI...

Bohot khoob Khwaish.....I m here !

Zakhmon ke nishaan aksar reh jaate hain
Umr bhar, haadson ki yaad wo dilate hain

Jinhee maana tha apna, dekha unhe jaate hue
Askhon ko pi kar hum ye ghum bhulate hain

Zindagi ko chorh kar koi jaaye bhi kahan,
Uth te hue qadam phir yoonhi laut aate hain !

BAHUT KHOOB TALAT...
THANX AAPNE HAMARI BAAT RAKHI.. Usual Smile
AUR PHIR JAANE KI BAAT NA KARNA Usual Smile
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honeyrose
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«Reply #19 on: January 20, 2008, 03:56:57 PM »
Talat ji bohat acha likha hai aapne


Umar bhar meray saath reh kar
Woh na samjha dil ki baat..

Zindagi ke har ruk mudkar na samjhe aap..
aaj kya hasil hogha tumhare siwa..

Bas ek uljan hai tumhare bina..
Zindagi ek kagaz ki pool ban gayee hai..

Jis mein phool ki mehek tumse hi suru hoti hai..
woh pyaar humare nazaron seh dur hue..
Maine apna zakhm chupaya apki mohabatt ke liye..
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M3gha
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«Reply #20 on: January 21, 2008, 01:51:43 PM »
Tu mera sach to hai, yakeen nahi

Kitne maasoom andhero me talasha tha tujhe

Kitne Sangeen ujalo mein tujhe paya hai

Kitna chaha tha koi rishta nibhau tujhse

Or ab ye jana kay tera Aks bhi paraya hai

Syahi Raton k kamjor,talakh lamho me

jab bhi teri yad ayi hai..

wo teri ankhen, teri khushboo or teri baatien...

Nahi ye tu nahi teri parchayi hai...

Kabhi khwabo mein ,Tasavoor me kabhi..

Kitna chaha tha chalu haath tham kar tera..

Falak kay paar, kahi dur, bahut dur kanhi..

NEEND SE JAAG GAYI HU OR YE PAYA HAI...

MERE PAIRON TALE ZAMEEN NAHI..TU MERA SACH TO HAI, YAKEEN NAHI...
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: January 21, 2008, 03:44:11 PM »
Very nice...Welcome to Yoindia !

Quote from: M3gha on January 21, 2008, 01:51:43 PM
Tu mera sach to hai, yakeen nahi

Kitne maasoom andhero me talasha tha tujhe

Kitne Sangeen ujalo mein tujhe paya hai

Kitna chaha tha koi rishta nibhau tujhse

Or ab ye jana kay tera Aks bhi paraya hai

Syahi Raton k kamjor,talakh lamho me

jab bhi teri yad ayi hai..

wo teri ankhen, teri khushboo or teri baatien...

Nahi ye tu nahi teri parchayi hai...

Kabhi khwabo mein ,Tasavoor me kabhi..

Kitna chaha tha chalu haath tham kar tera..

Falak kay paar, kahi dur, bahut dur kanhi..

NEEND SE JAAG GAYI HU OR YE PAYA HAI...

MERE PAIRON TALE ZAMEEN NAHI..TU MERA SACH TO HAI, YAKEEN NAHI...
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Talat
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«Reply #22 on: January 21, 2008, 03:44:41 PM »
Thanks a lot Honey...You have also written very nice....!!

Quote from: honeyrose on January 20, 2008, 03:56:57 PM
Talat ji bohat acha likha hai aapne


Umar bhar meray saath reh kar
Woh na samjha dil ki baat..

Zindagi ke har ruk mudkar na samjhe aap..
aaj kya hasil hogha tumhare siwa..

Bas ek uljan hai tumhare bina..
Zindagi ek kagaz ki pool ban gayee hai..

Jis mein phool ki mehek tumse hi suru hoti hai..
woh pyaar humare nazaron seh dur hue..
Maine apna zakhm chupaya apki mohabatt ke liye..
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Talat
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«Reply #23 on: January 21, 2008, 03:45:36 PM »
Quote from: khwaish on January 20, 2008, 03:49:54 PM
BAHUT KHOOB TALAT...
THANX AAPNE HAMARI BAAT RAKHI.. Usual Smile
AUR PHIR JAANE KI BAAT NA KARNA Usual Smile

Shukriya Khwaish...Nahin karenge ab ye baat Usual Smile
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: January 21, 2008, 03:49:24 PM »
Quote from: thycreator on January 20, 2008, 03:31:40 PM
Mujhe pata tha ki tum aisa nahi karogi....thanks for not letting me down....Usual Smile

Usual Smile

Quote from: thycreator on January 20, 2008, 03:29:49 PM
Wah......

Dard mein tadapne se hum kyu gila karein,
Akele dil ko mere chalo koi kam toh mila...Usual Smile

Dushmano ke vaar se hum na ghabraaye kabhi,
Qayamat ho gayi jab dost ne raqabat ki humse !
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HumTum is back
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«Reply #25 on: January 21, 2008, 04:08:19 PM »
waah Talat ji ...


Na khushi ki khushi na gum ka malal koi
Na kissi se hai ranjish, na sawaal koi

Dafan kar leta hoon usko dil ke tehkane mein
Kabhi bhule se aa bhi jaye agar, khyaal koi

Mein kis tarah se uss ko pehchanu Ya Rab ?
Dushmani pe pehnta hai, dosti ki khaal koi !!  
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Talat
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«Reply #26 on: January 21, 2008, 04:41:58 PM »
Kya baat hai Humtum, bohot khoob !!

Saaye ko bhi humne tan se juda dekha hai,
Dair-o-haram se bahar humne Khuda dekha hai

Kyun bhala sar-sabz ab hogi yeh zameen,
Har shaakh-e-gul pe ek khanjar chupa dekha hai !
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Shikha12
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«Reply #27 on: January 21, 2008, 05:25:43 PM »
Too Good, as ever...  Talat... (Even Title is very, very Perfect)

Wonderful replies, Khawaish, Baadal, Amit, HoneyRose, Megha and HumTum...

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baadal102
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«Reply #28 on: January 21, 2008, 05:39:55 PM »
thanx shikha ji

Baadal
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Talat
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«Reply #29 on: January 21, 2008, 10:27:50 PM »
Thanks a lot Shikha...your comments are always appreciated Usual Smile
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