Na paasbaan, na humnawa.....!!

by Talat on January 18, 2008, 09:52:49 PM
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Dekha tha, jo tune, wo sapna tha, sach nahin
Chal ae dil, mehfil se, yahan apna koi nahin

Sunega kaun, ashkon se bheege, tere afsaane
Jhoote chehre waale log, humnawa koi nahin

Ghabra kar, tanhaayi se, deta hai jo tu awaaz
Khala main goonjti hai, ab sunta koi nahin

Na shaamil tu unmain, na hai tu saathi unka,
Magan apni dunya main, saath tere koi nahin

Muskura kar alwida keh, rok le tu ashkon ko
Rahen wo khush, chal ab tu, kar shikwa koi nahin !
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2008, 10:01:58 PM »
wah wah wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot hi khoobsurat likha hai Talat apne!! Good creation!!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2008, 11:50:47 PM »
Thanks...I m glad you ppl liked my last creation on Yoindia !
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«Reply #3 on: January 19, 2008, 01:24:48 AM »
BAHUT KHOOB TALATJI..BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA HAI PAR
PLZ DONT SAY THAT THIS IS YOUR LAST CREATION IN YOINDIA..
THIS IS FOR YOU...

KUCH ZAKHM AISE MILTE HAI KE
PHOOLON KE BISTAR MEIN BHI SOYA NAHI JAATA
DIL CHEEK UTH THA HAI DARD SE
PAR AANKHON SE BHI ROYA NAHI JAATA

KABHI MIL JAATE  HAI KUCH AISE BHI SHAKS ZINDAGI MEIN AAP JAISE
JINHE KABHI ZINDAGI KI BHEED MEIN KHOYA NAHI JAATA...
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«Reply #4 on: January 19, 2008, 07:44:00 AM »
Quote from: Talat on January 18, 2008, 09:52:49 PM
Dekha tha, jo tune, wo sapna tha, sach nahin
Chal ae dil, mehfil se, yahan apna koi nahin

Sunega kaun, ashkon se bheege, tere afsaane
Jhoote chehre waale log, humnawa koi nahin

Ghabra kar, tanhaayi se, deta hai jo tu awaaz
Khala main goonjti hai, ab sunta koi nahin

Na shaamil tu unmain, na hai tu saathi unka,
Magan apni dunya main, saath tere koi nahin

Muskura kar alwida keh, rok le tu ashkon ko
Rahen wo khush, chal ab tu, kar shikwa koi nahin !

wow dear bahut khoob. Last line dil chu gaya... keep smiling
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«Reply #5 on: January 19, 2008, 05:18:16 PM »
Thanks a lot Khwaish and Roja sis.

Khwaish, ab jaane ka to soch liya hai...zindagi isi ka naam hai, log ek mod par milte hain aur doosre mod par bichad jaate hain. Take care.
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«Reply #6 on: January 19, 2008, 05:25:41 PM »
Talat di bahot khoob likha ap ne...

aur hum sab ko chor k jaane ki baat mat karo na di...
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«Reply #7 on: January 19, 2008, 09:40:53 PM »
ek choti se koshish

Kar alwida aab koi nahi,
Akela tha koi saathi nahi,

Sapne to sirf sapne the,
Hakikat mai tera koi nahi,

Bulata reh jitna bhi un ko,
Behre hai sab sun ne wala koi nahi,

Is dunia mai pyar ki kimat kya hai,
Aaj talak ye koi jaana nahi.

Kar alwida aab koi nahi.............


Baadal
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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2008, 07:12:25 AM »
Quote from: Talat on January 18, 2008, 09:52:49 PM
Dekha tha, jo tune, wo sapna tha, sach nahin
Chal ae dil, mehfil se, yahan apna koi nahin

Sunega kaun, ashkon se bheege, tere afsaane
Jhoote chehre waale log, humnawa koi nahin

Ghabra kar, tanhaayi se, deta hai jo tu awaaz
Khala main goonjti hai, ab sunta koi nahin

Na shaamil tu unmain, na hai tu saathi unka,
Magan apni dunya main, saath tere koi nahin

Muskura kar alwida keh, rok le tu ashkon ko
Rahen wo khush, chal ab tu, kar shikwa koi nahin !





Brilliant.......bahut din hue talat.....tum soch nahi sakti ki aisa kuch padhe hue kitne din ho gaye.....aur ye aakhiri creation yo india pe.....aisa zulm kyu bhala....

Akelepan mein rehte hai, mehfil kabki humse chooti,
Jisse jiya humne dil se, zindagi wo hi humse ruthi,

Sameta hum kiye ashkon ko apne palkon se lekin,
Muskurane ki meri ab toh aakhiri aas bhi tooti..

Kahan jaye, thame ab haath hum kis shaks ka yahan,
Sach ek sapna sa hua, saari dunia lagti jhooti..

Chal tanhayian meri, tera hi saath jeewan bhar,
Jiyenge yaad mein uski, jisne dunia meri looti..
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2008, 07:15:03 AM »
Aur haan talat....mujhe pata hai aap kahin nahi jaogi yoindia se, pls yaar, aap kuch hi log ho jinke liye main aata hu yaha...pls aisa mat karo.
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«Reply #10 on: January 20, 2008, 02:37:42 PM »


Khwaish, ab jaane ka to soch liya hai...zindagi isi ka naam hai, log ek mod par milte hain aur doosre mod par bichad jaate hain. Take care.
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BICHAD JAANE KE LIYE LOG MILTE NAHI
DARD JAB HAD SE BAD JAATA HAI
TO ZAKHM PHIR SILTE NAHI

JAANTA HOON, KUCH KHATA TO HOTI HAI HAR INSAAN SE
PAR CHOTI SI GALTI KE LIYE
ITNI BADI SAZAA MILT NAHI...

AAP SE GUZARISH HAI ZARA IS BAAT PE DYAAN DENA
EK BAAR JO SHAAM AA JAYE,PHIR AGLE PEHAR TAK
SUBAH KHILTI NAHI...
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«Reply #11 on: January 20, 2008, 03:08:15 PM »
Quote from: punam on January 19, 2008, 05:25:41 PM
Talat di bahot khoob likha ap ne...

aur hum sab ko chor k jaane ki baat mat karo na di...
Chalo nahin karte Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: January 20, 2008, 03:25:00 PM »
Quote from: baadal102 on January 19, 2008, 09:40:53 PM
ek choti se koshish

Kar alwida aab koi nahi,
Akela tha koi saathi nahi,

Sapne to sirf sapne the,
Hakikat mai tera koi nahi,

Bulata reh jitna bhi un ko,
Behre hai sab sun ne wala koi nahi,

Is dunia mai pyar ki kimat kya hai,
Aaj talak ye koi jaana nahi.

Kar alwida aab koi nahi.............


Baadal



Aapne bohot achcha likha Baadal, behtareen koshish...

Kar alwida bhi,  jaayenge hum kahan
Apni saanson main dosti chupa rakhi hai
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«Reply #13 on: January 20, 2008, 03:28:30 PM »
Quote from: thycreator on January 20, 2008, 07:15:03 AM
Aur haan talat....mujhe pata hai aap kahin nahi jaogi yoindia se, pls yaar, aap kuch hi log ho jinke liye main aata hu yaha...pls aisa mat karo.

I m here.....and proud to have you as my friend ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: January 20, 2008, 03:28:52 PM »
Quote from: thycreator on January 20, 2008, 07:12:25 AM
Brilliant.......bahut din hue talat.....tum soch nahi sakti ki aisa kuch padhe hue kitne din ho gaye.....aur ye aakhiri creation yo india pe.....aisa zulm kyu bhala....

Akelepan mein rehte hai, mehfil kabki humse chooti,
Jisse jiya humne dil se, zindagi wo hi humse ruthi,

Sameta hum kiye ashkon ko apne palkon se lekin,
Muskurane ki meri ab toh aakhiri aas bhi tooti..

Kahan jaye, thame ab haath hum kis shaks ka yahan,
Sach ek sapna sa hua, saari dunia lagti jhooti..

Chal tanhayian meri, tera hi saath jeewan bhar,
Jiyenge yaad mein uski, jisne dunia meri looti..



Bohot hi khoob Amit....Thanks dost...

Chehron pe muskurahat liye mila karte hain,
Dilon main ab mohabbatain mila karti nahin

Ghabra ke chal diye, par jaayenge bhi kahan
Yaadain jo hain naqsh, yoonhi mita karti nahin

Majbooriyaan unki, hum hi na samajh paaye
Tanhaiyaan meri koi gila karti nahin !!
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