na raas aaya

by suman59 on August 27, 2012, 03:36:07 PM
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Na raas aaya kabhi taishuda safar mujhko
Hawa ke rukh ne udaya edhar udhar mujhko

Ye silvatein mere bistar ki hai gawah meri
Kisi ke gam ne jagaya hai raat ber mujhko

Yeh aur baat mai apni talash mein gum thi
Kisi ki yaad ne dhoonda hai umr bhar mujhko

Begair aapke zindagi lage hai veerana
Hai aap saath to lagta hai ghar ye ghar mujhko

Hai meri raaton se mansoob din tamaam uske
Sukoon milta hai yeh sochkar mujhko
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2012, 07:22:36 PM »
bohat oomda ghazal ...bohat c daad....
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2012, 07:32:43 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on August 27, 2012, 03:36:07 PM
Na raas aaya kabhi taishuda safar mujhko
Hawa ke rukh ne udaya edhar udhar mujhko

Ye silvatein mere bistar ki hai gawah meri
Kisi ke gam ne jagaya hai raat ber mujhko

Yeh aur baat mai apni talash mein gum thi
Kisi ki yaad ne dhoonda hai umr bhar mujhko

Begair aapke zindagi lage hai veerana
Hai aap saath to lagta hai ghar ye ghar mujhko

Hai meri raaton se mansoob din tamaam uske
Sukoon milta hai yeh sochkar mujhko





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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2012, 07:37:07 PM »
Quote from: suman59 on August 27, 2012, 03:36:07 PM
Na raas aaya kabhi taishuda safar mujhko
Hawa ke rukh ne udaya edhar udhar mujhko
mera bhi yahi haal rahaa . per khud ko sambhala hua hai abhi tak.ALLAH KHAIR KARE Applause Applause Applause
Ye silvatein mere bistar ki hai gawah meri
Kisi ke gam ne jagaya hai raat ber mujhko
bahut khoob......! Applause Applause Applause
Yeh aur baat mai apni talash mein gum thi
Kisi ki yaad ne dhoonda hai umr bhar mujhko
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Begair aapke zindagi lage hai veerana
Hai aap saath to lagta hai ghar ye ghar mujhko
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Hai meri raaton se mansoob din tamaam uske
Sukoon milta hai yeh sochkar mujhko
kyaa khoob. Applause Applause Applause





bahut khoob kalaam hai......!
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«Reply #4 on: August 27, 2012, 11:46:31 PM »
Behtareen Ghazal, Good One
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«Reply #5 on: August 28, 2012, 02:41:34 AM »
bahut umda suman ji, dhero dad
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«Reply #6 on: August 28, 2012, 03:56:54 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2012, 05:02:44 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob, bahut sundar peshkash,... bahut achcha likha hai aapne Suman ji... ek dum massstttt....!!!

in hawaaon ko chhooke ke maine mehsoos kiyaa tumko
lagaa kahin duur nahi, mere kareeb tum kahin ho

mehek udte dhool ki jab aati hai har subah
mehsoos kiya tumko, lagaa tum yahin kahin ho

ugte suraj ke saath, khilte phoolon ke saath
jahaan dekhun, jidhar dekhun, tum har kahin ho

khuli aankhon se tumhe dhundta hoon, dikhte nahi
aankhen band kar lu to lagaa tum yahin kahin ho

ho mere paas kahin, mere kareeb, meri saanson me
dhadkano ki tezi ne batayaa tum dhadkano me kahin ho

ho yahin paas mere, is baat ka ehsaas hai mujhe
aajaao mere saamne na chhipo, tum jahaaan kahin ho...

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«Reply #8 on: August 28, 2012, 11:35:33 AM »
Bahut badhiya
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2012, 02:43:13 AM »
BAhut Khub Bahut BAdiya Peshkash Suman Ji Bahut Khub
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«Reply #10 on: August 29, 2012, 03:49:45 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on August 27, 2012, 03:36:07 PM
Na raas aaya kabhi taishuda safar mujhko
Hawa ke rukh ne udaya edhar udhar mujhko

Ye silvatein mere bistar ki hai gawah meri
Kisi ke gam ne jagaya hai raat ber mujhko

Yeh aur baat mai apni talash mein gum thi
Kisi ki yaad ne dhoonda hai umr bhar mujhko

Begair aapke zindagi lage hai veerana
Hai aap saath to lagta hai ghar ye ghar mujhko

Hai meri raaton se mansoob din tamaam uske
Sukoon milta hai yeh sochkar mujhko





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«Reply #11 on: August 29, 2012, 06:29:59 AM »
Quote from: laaiba on August 27, 2012, 07:22:36 PM
bohat oomda ghazal ...bohat c daad....

shukriya laaiba
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«Reply #12 on: August 29, 2012, 06:30:51 AM »
Quote from: qalb on August 27, 2012, 07:32:43 PM
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shukriya  qalab jee
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«Reply #13 on: August 29, 2012, 06:31:21 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on August 27, 2012, 11:46:31 PM
Behtareen Ghazal, Good One

shukriya
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«Reply #14 on: August 29, 2012, 06:31:51 AM »
Quote from: nandbahu on August 28, 2012, 02:41:34 AM
bahut umda suman ji, dhero dad

tks nandbahu jee
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