naa jaane kyu

by kaushikbhawna008 on June 20, 2008, 01:00:45 PM
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na jaane kyu aaj badle hue se haalaat hain
kalam bhi na nibha rahi aaj mera saath hai

ek ajeeb se kash-m-kash mei uljhe hain ham
na koi hai mere paas na ham kisi k saath hain

na jaane kyu aaj badle hue se haalaat hain
kalam bhi na nibha rahi mera saath hai

dil mei hain kai baatein par zubaan deti saath nahi
socha k likh kar hi ham hale-e-dil bayan kar dein
par kalam ko koi lafz bhi milta nahi

na jaane kyu aaj badle hue se haalaat hain
kalam bhi na nibha rahi mera saath hai

hai kaisi ye bechaini aur na jaane kyu hai berukhi
jab ki na hai dil mei ab koi na kisi ki aas hai

na jaane kyu aaj badle hue se haalaat hain
kalam bhi na nibha rahi mera saath hai

wo tha hawa ka jhoka koi jo ehsaas unka kara gaya
beetei lamho k saaye se fir hamko mila gaya

na jaane kyu aaj badle hue se haalaat hain
kalam bhi na nibha rahi mera saath hai

aks b jinka mita chuke the ham
kyu ab b aati unhi ki yaad hai

na jaane kyu aaj badle hue se haalaat hain
kalam bhi na nibha rahi mera saath hai

beete lamho mei hi kyu jeeti hamari har saans hai
tham jaaye ab ye silsila dil yahi karta  ab fariyaad hai

na jaane kyu aaj badle hue se haalaat hain
kalam bhi na nibha rahi mera saath hai
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Rajbir
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2008, 01:15:20 PM »
Bhawna,

Very nice !

Keep it up Thumbs UP
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k.shael
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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2008, 01:17:31 PM »
VERY NICE.... Applause Applause
KAUSHIK JI...
BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI....
BY. K.SHAEL


NA JANE KAISE YE HALAT HAI,
JO CHAHTE THE KABHI HAME JAAN SE JYADA
AAJ WAHI KHADE HAMARE KHILAAF HAI,
NAJANE KAISE YE HALAT HAI,
JO BASTE THE ROOH MEIN MERI AAJ UN BEDARDO
KI YAAD TAK AANE SE MUJHE AITRAJ HAI,
NA JANE KAISE YE HALAT HAI,
JINHE KABHI AANKHON MEIN BASAYE GHOOMTE
THE, AAJ UNKE NAZAR AA JANE BHAR SE HAME
SEENE MEIN HO JATA DARD HAI....
NA JANE KAISE YE HALAT HAI....
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2008, 01:19:27 PM »
Shally,

Good reply !

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kaushikbhawna008
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2008, 04:28:51 PM »
shukriya shally and rajbir ji

ham dono hi waqt k aage sir jhukate rahe
aur  ham waham mei the ki ham ek duje ko aajmate rahe
hua dil ko tha ye waham ki wo ajnabi nahi apna hai
par waqt ne hi hame kareeb lakar yu juda karwaya hai
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2008, 05:05:49 PM »
Very nice Bhawna.....Applause ..... Your poem reminded me of my own poem, which I wrote long back.....

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/miscellaneous-shayri/na-ab-wo-raah-haina-ab-wo-hum-t23730.0.html;#quickreply

Quote from: Celmira on May 02, 2007, 04:05:21 PM
Badal sa gaya kuch,na rahe ab wo hum
Kho gaye khyaal, toot gayi hai qalam

Chalte chalte liya waqt ne yoon mod
Ja rahe the kahin, chal diye kahin hum

Na kehne ko kuch, na sunne ki khwahish
Har jazbe se khaali jaise ab hue hum

Askhon ka samundar ufan raha hai dil main
Khusk hain lekin, nahin hain aankhen nam

Kho rahe hain purane, jud rahe naye rishte
Waqt de raha hai ek naye insaan ko janam !!
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2008, 06:21:02 PM »
bahoot khoob bhawna ji....
shael ji nice reply
aur talat ji ki ye wali poetry maine pahli baar padhi bahoot hi achchi likhi hai.....
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2008, 08:29:02 PM »
bahoot khoob bhawna!!!
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baadal102
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2008, 10:34:38 AM »
veery nice bhawana ji
keep it up

      N
nice too shael ji

thanx



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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2008, 11:16:28 AM »
shukriya bekarar ji, baadal ji, pooja ji and celmira ji
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