Naam

by Bambi on October 27, 2009, 06:41:01 PM
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Uska Naam…
Arzoo Ahmad Shah.

“Arzoo”
Jaise zarrrrr sey zari
Kissi solla saal ki ladki key
Nangey haathon sey phisal key
Kale farsh par girke
Ek sitara ban gaya ho.

“Ahmad”
Baba ne yeh gale ko hithkithaya “Aham”
Aur ussi solla saal ki ladki
ki aakhen hjhuk giyi,
Sharam sey nahi,
Darr sey nahi,
Bus izat sey.

“Shah”
Ussey naam ka gayab hota hua aakhri “h”
Waise hi ussi ladki ki aakhon sey gayab hota hua
bachpana.

Unka…Naam
Kabir,
Kabir Shah.
“Kabir”
Unki boli,
Bilkul uss kavi ki tarah – Sadahran.
Par unki baatein,
Uss kavi ki tarah – Asadharan.

“Shah”
Vahi gayab hota hua “h”
Bus yahan par unki baatein sunthe hi
Raath ka andhera gayab hota
Aur subah ke aftab gun gunate.

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Mera Naam ?
Mera … naam

shakuntala!
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«Reply #1 on: October 28, 2009, 04:23:08 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Shakuntla ji,very beautiful creation,excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: October 28, 2009, 01:28:10 PM »
thank you madhu weshji!

Shakuntala ... sirf character ka naam hai. Usual Smile

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«Reply #3 on: October 28, 2009, 02:21:33 PM »
Wow!

Quite Creative .. Nice Work Dear!
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«Reply #4 on: October 28, 2009, 08:07:21 PM »
Nice Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2009, 01:18:03 PM »
thank you rishiji , thank you jhuki palkein ! Usual Smile
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