Naaraz Hoon______ {Angel}

by angel4u on June 29, 2009, 05:04:02 PM
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Author  (Read 1394 times)
angel4u
Guest
Ye kch bahut purani poem repost kar rahi hoon, Ye meri yoindia pe pehli poem thi. par mere dilke aaj bhi utni hi qareeb. Aaj achanak mann kar raha hai ke isko yahan wapas rakhun. dard to us wakt bhi tha aur aaj bhi hia, par baat ye thi ke tab mere saath itne achhe dost nahi the jo aaj hia, jinhone mera har haal mein support kiya hai, chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye... Thank you all.

bas ye meri kuch ankahi udaasiyon ke naam...


Naraz Hoon...

Na Apni Taqdeer Se Naraz Hoon,
Na Us Khuda Se Naraaz Hoon,
Khich Di Jinse Khud Mene Apne Hathonki Lakeerein
Aaj Us KalaM Ki Siyahi Se Naaraz Hoon

Na Uski Bewafai Se Naraz Hoon
Na Uske Diye Hue Dard Se Naraz Hoon
Jo Dard Khud Maine Apne DaaMan Se Laga Liye
Aaj Wo DaaMan Ke Daagdaar Hone Se Naraz Hoon

Chal To Diya Tu Ek Hi Pal Me Mujhse Keh Kar Alvida
Na Socha Meri Zindagi Ka AnjaaM Kya Hoga Tere Bina
Na Tere Jaane Se Na Apne AnjaaM Se Naraz Hoon
Bas Apni Shikayat Na Karne Ki Fitrat Se Naraz Hoon

Mohabbat Meri Kabhi Hogi Nahi Puri Ye Pata Tha
Khwab Dekhe The Use Pane Ki Uske Kisi Gair Ke Hojane Ke Baad Bhi
Na Uske Adhurepan Se Na Un Hasin Khwabon Se Naraz Hoon
Bas Jo Dil Ne Kiya Saanso Se SaMjhauta Usi SaMjhaute Se Naraz Hoon

Mere Kaafile Ko Manzil Na Milna Mukarrar Tha
Tera Mujhse Berukhi Karna Tha Barkarar
Na Teri Manzilon Se Na Hi Berukhiyon Se Naraz Hoon
Jo Banayi Raastonke Khone Ke Bawajood Us Manzil Se Naraz Hoon

Yaadein Teri Har LaMha Ashqon Ka Toofan Liye Aati Hai
Teri Aahat Ki Chah Se Hi Rooh Meri Tadap Si Jaati Hai
Na Un Yaadon Se Na Un LaMho Se Na Un Ashkon Se Naraz Hoon
Jinhone SaMayi Teri Har Dhadkan UnMe Un Dhadkano Se Naraz Hoon

Khuda Ne Diya Har Mod Par Mujhe Teri Bewafai Ka IlM
Basaye Baithe The Phir Bhi Khwabonka Hasin TajMahal
Na Us Khuda Se Na Teri Bewafai Se Na Hi Un Khwabonse Naraz Hoon
Apna SaMjha Tha Tujhe Aur Sirf Tujhe Hi Jahan Me,
Aur Tune Hi Zaar Zaar Kiya Meri Rooh Ko
Isliye Main Aaj Khud Apne Aapse Hi Naraz Hoon...

Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
My Angel by captainyr in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Naaraz Kismat by angel4u in Shayri-E-Dard
i m sorry angel by salil2002 in Chit - Chat & General Discussion « 1 2  All »
^^Like An Angel^^ by honeyrose in English
You Are My Angel by sunilmsn in English
rahman22
Guest
«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2009, 05:08:47 PM »
shubhan-Allah....bahot khoob icon_salut
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2009, 05:09:33 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Rahman ji...
Logged
Alam Qazi
Guest
«Reply #3 on: June 29, 2009, 05:47:49 PM »

very very beutiful ..... Applause Applause Applause
specially mujhe 3rd paragraph bahot pasand aaya....

kyonki ye lines meri zindagi se wabasta hai....
once again ANGEL.... aapne bahot khubsurat likha hai...
isliye aapki ye lines tarif ki hakdar hain...
Logged
chitralsony
Guest
«Reply #4 on: June 29, 2009, 07:17:47 PM »
very nice really i love this
Logged
mistufer
Guest
«Reply #5 on: June 29, 2009, 09:02:59 PM »
angel u touched my heart
so many emotions and pain are seen in every line
god bless u
Logged
madhuwesh
Guest
«Reply #6 on: June 29, 2009, 09:11:27 PM »
Angel ji aankh bhar aayee ye poem padd ke,ye toh dil se nikli hui awaaz hai, :thumbup:very beautiful creation.excellent. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2009, 02:48:30 AM »
very very beutiful ..... Applause Applause Applause
specially mujhe 3rd paragraph bahot pasand aaya....

kyonki ye lines meri zindagi se wabasta hai....
once again ANGEL.... aapne bahot khubsurat likha hai...
isliye aapki ye lines tarif ki hakdar hain...

Shukriya Alam Ji....

Hmm ye poem bas meri zindagi ka aayina hai...

Shukriya pasand karne ke liye..
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #8 on: June 30, 2009, 02:48:49 AM »
very nice really i love this

Thanks a lot Chitralsony Usual Smile
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #9 on: June 30, 2009, 02:49:10 AM »
angel u touched my heart
so many emotions and pain are seen in every line
god bless u

Thank you so much Nira. Nice to see you here.
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #10 on: June 30, 2009, 02:49:43 AM »
Angel ji aankh bhar aayee ye poem padd ke,ye toh dil se nikli hui awaaz hai, :thumbup:very beautiful creation.excellent. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Thanks a lot Madhu... Glad that you liked it.
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #11 on: July 01, 2009, 02:34:19 PM »
Angel.... Bohot hi khoobsurat shayari hai.....Itna udaas na ho sweetie....Keep smiling & take care.... Love You.
Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #12 on: July 01, 2009, 02:41:16 PM »
Hmmm. Bahoot bahoot Khoob Huzena.. Bahoot hi Dard bhari peshkas..

Shona baby.. Don't worry be happy... Usual Smile
Logged
khwahish
WeCare
Khaas Shayar
**

Rau: 166
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
272 days, 5 hours and 50 minutes.

Posts: 11814
Member Since: Sep 2006


View Profile
«Reply #13 on: July 01, 2009, 03:11:48 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!!!

Bahut Dard Hai iss Nazm mein..Bahut Khoob!!

beautiful piece Of poetry Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
angel4u
Guest
«Reply #14 on: July 01, 2009, 03:50:14 PM »
Angel.... Bohot hi khoobsurat shayari hai.....Itna udaas na ho sweetie....Keep smiling & take care.... Love You.

Thank you Talat. udaas nahi bas kuch samajh hi nahi aa raha hai kya ho raha hai... aur KYON...
Logged
Pages: [1] 2  All
Print
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
April 24, 2024, 06:14:20 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[April 23, 2024, 09:54:09 AM]

by ASIF
[April 22, 2024, 01:50:33 PM]

[April 04, 2024, 04:49:28 PM]

[April 02, 2024, 12:27:12 PM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:34:54 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:30:44 AM]

by ASIF
[March 24, 2024, 04:26:39 AM]

by ASIF
[March 23, 2024, 08:50:46 AM]

[March 21, 2024, 07:59:38 PM]

[March 17, 2024, 02:01:29 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.119 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8498 Real Poets and poetry admirer