NAHEEN HOON MAIN - ZARRAA

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kis kis azaab* se kaho guzraa naheeN hooN maiN
ab tak teree panaah meiN aayaa naheeN hooN maiN


apnee zubaaN se kya kahooN kyaa-kyaa naheeN hooN maiN
tujh ko n ho khabar to kaheeN kaa naheeN hooN maiN


chaltaa hooN le ke rakht*-e-safar toote waayde
manzil pe is liye kabhi pauNhchaa naheeN hooN maiN


yaaroN n phir saleeb se aaooNgaa laut kar
badlegaa bhi n kuchh ke maseehaa naheeN hooN maiN


aaeenaa dekh letaa jab aateeN ubaal par
aisaa naheeN ke nafrateiN rakhtaa naheeN hooN maiN


ambar hai teree zulf to mahtaab rukh teraa
jaane n kitni raat se soyaa naheeN hooN maiN


kehte haiN mujh ko ishq hai bas be-hayaaoN se
naadaaN hooN maiN ishaare samajhtaa naheeN hooN maiN


khaamoshiyaaN theeN baais*-e-tarq*-e-wafaa magar
shikwe bhi hoN n hoNth pe aisaa naheeN hooN maiN


thukraa diyaa wo jaam taras khaa ke jo diyaa
aur wo samajh rahe haiN ke tishnaa* naheeN hooN maiN


“zarraa” ghuroor-o-zid haiN tamaashaayee ban kharhe
kehte the kis gumaaN se tamsaashaa naheeN hooN maiN


- ZARRAA



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azaab = punishment
rakht = bag & baggage
baais = cause
tarq = relinquish
tishnaa = thirsty


jaisa ki ahl-e-sukhan samajh gaye hoNge, is ghazal ka radeef ghalib ki ghazal “daayam parhaa huwa tere dar par naheeN hooN maiN” par hai. ghalib ke is azeem qalaam se mutaasir ho kar, ye ek naaqaabil shikastah si koshish ki gayee hai.
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2013, 07:02:59 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause
bohut hi umda
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2013, 07:15:08 AM »
Zarra saheb , waah waah aur sirf waah .
Kya khubsurat ashaar diye hain . Classical
shairy ki jiti jagti misaal hai ye ghazal .
Ghalib ki zameen ke sath poora insaaf kiya hai .
Tah e dil se daad aur mubarakbaad .Hasan
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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2013, 08:04:57 AM »
aaeenaa dekh letaa jab aateeN ubaal par
aisaa naheeN ke nafrateiN rakhtaa naheeN hooN maiN

 Applause Applause Applause Applause


thukraa diyaa wo jaam taras khaa ke jo diyaa
aur wo samajh rahe haiN ke tishnaa* naheeN hooN maiN
 Applause Applause Applause
Waah zarraa saheb Bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2013, 08:17:38 AM »
kis kis azaab* se kaho guzraa naheeN hooN maiN
ab tak teree panaah meiN aayaa naheeN hooN maiN

aaeenaa dekh letaa jab aateeN ubaal par
aisaa naheeN ke nafrateiN rakhtaa naheeN hooN maiN

ambar hai teree zulf to mahtaab rukh teraa
jaane n kitni raat se soyaa naheeN hooN maiN

thukraa diyaa wo jaam taras khaa ke jo diyaa
aur wo samajh rahe haiN ke tishnaa* naheeN hooN maiN


- ZARRAA


waah waah zarra jee..beinteha umda ghazal rahi..
Sabhi aashar ek se badh kar ek par ye quoted aasahr bahut pasand aaye..
Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: November 15, 2013, 01:41:36 PM »
bahut khoob ek rau ke saath daad
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«Reply #6 on: November 15, 2013, 02:23:15 PM »
Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #7 on: November 15, 2013, 02:42:26 PM »
kis kis azaab* se kaho guzraa naheeN hooN maiN
ab tak teree panaah meiN aayaa naheeN hooN maiN


apnee zubaaN se kya kahooN kyaa-kyaa naheeN hooN maiN
tujh ko n ho khabar to kaheeN kaa naheeN hooN maiN


chaltaa hooN le ke rakht*-e-safar toote waayde
manzil pe is liye kabhi pauNhchaa naheeN hooN maiN


yaaroN n phir saleeb se aaooNgaa laut kar
badlegaa bhi n kuchh ke maseehaa naheeN hooN maiN


aaeenaa dekh letaa jab aateeN ubaal par
aisaa naheeN ke nafrateiN rakhtaa naheeN hooN maiN


ambar hai teree zulf to mahtaab rukh teraa
jaane n kitni raat se soyaa naheeN hooN maiN


kehte haiN mujh ko ishq hai bas be-hayaaoN se
naadaan hooN ishaare samajhtaa naheeN hooN maiN


khaamoshiyaaN theeN baais*-e-tarq*-e-wafaa magar
shikwe bhi hoN n hoNth pe aisaa naheeN hooN maiN


thukraa diyaa wo jaam taras khaa ke jo diyaa
aur wo samajh rahe haiN ke tishnaa* naheeN hooN maiN


“zarraa” ghuroor-o-zid haiN tamaashaayee ban kharhe
kehte the kis gumaaN se tamsaashaa naheeN hooN maiN


- ZARRAA



*
azaab = punishment
rakht = bag & baggage
baais = cause
tarq = relinquish
tishnaa = thirsty


jaisa ki ahl-e-sukhan samajh gaye hoNge, is ghazal ka radeef ghalib ki ghazal “daayam parhaa huwa tere dar par naheeN hooN maiN” par hai. ghalib ke is azeem qalaam se mutaasir ho kar, ye ek naaqaabil shikastah si koshish ki gayee hai.







Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: November 15, 2013, 05:18:19 PM »
Jabardast zarra ji, har ashar ek se badhkr ek. Saawan.
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«Reply #9 on: November 15, 2013, 06:05:49 PM »
बहुत खूब ज़र्रा जी...बहुत खूब.....

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«Reply #10 on: November 15, 2013, 09:22:20 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause  Applause
bohut hi umda

Aap ka bahaut bahaut shukriya Jeet ji ....
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«Reply #11 on: November 15, 2013, 11:56:43 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: November 16, 2013, 03:04:06 AM »
Zarra saheb , waah waah aur sirf waah .
Kya khubsurat ashaar diye hain . Classical
shairy ki jiti jagti misaal hai ye ghazal .
Ghalib ki zameen ke sath poora insaaf kiya hai .
Tah e dil se daad aur mubarakbaad .Hasan

Aap ki pur khuloos pur khirad daad se behad hauslafzaayee huwee aur iske liye aap ka yah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon
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«Reply #13 on: November 16, 2013, 05:39:51 AM »
aaeenaa dekh letaa jab aateeN ubaal par
aisaa naheeN ke nafrateiN rakhtaa naheeN hooN maiN

 Applause Applause Applause Applause

thukraa diyaa wo jaam taras khaa ke jo diyaa
aur wo samajh rahe haiN ke tishnaa* naheeN hooN maiN

 Applause Applause Applause
Waah zarraa saheb Bahut khoob


Saraswat sahab .... Bahaut bahaut shukriya is ghazal ko tawajjoh dene ka ... aap ki daad ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hooN ...
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«Reply #14 on: November 16, 2013, 05:43:27 AM »
Clapping Smiley ;clapping: Clapping Smiley

Mai kya kahuN Zarraa Jii... Just Awesome...
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