nangae paun....

by bulbul on January 20, 2008, 08:14:48 AM
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Kab tak sahraoon main firti rahoon
Kab tak tapti dhup main pighalti rahoon
Kab tak main raetoon main pani talashti rahoon
Kab tak uun hi.....nangae paun chalti rahoon

Kantoon pae main chalti rahoon
zakhmoon ko main chupati rahoon
nar-e-gam main jhulasti rahoon
kab tak unn hi....nangae paun chalti rahoon

kab tak main shab-e-intezar main jeeti rahoon
kab tak mere khab ka main qatal karti rahoon
kab tak main khud par zulm karti rahoon
akhir kab tak.........
kab tak unn hi.....nangae paun chalti rahoon
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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2008, 08:26:43 AM »
bahut khoob bulbul ji...
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2008, 04:51:14 AM »
jo maja intzaar me hai wo visal-e - yaar me kahan,
but jab ye intzaar kuch jyada hi lamba ho jaye to wo aour baat hai,u wrote nice bulbulji tnx for this
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2008, 07:12:10 AM »
jab tak hai jaan itezar karti raho
jab tak hai dum yaadon me marti raho
hoga aana use laut kar tere pass
tab tak tu yuhi likhti raho...

bahut accha hai....its realy nice
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M3gha
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2008, 08:19:32 AM »
shama pe paday oss to bhi law numm nahi hoti ...

tanha bhi rahenge to sans chalti rahegi..

bahar hal jindagi jidagi hi rehti hai tere anay tere jane se jahanum nahi hoti..

teri wafa se rahe durr iska gum karu kaise..

khuda ne samjhaya k har Arzoo mukamal nahi hoti..
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bulbul
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2008, 04:50:06 AM »
thanx alot all of u for ur apriciation
m3gha ji, sahood ji,sugar_0777ji bahoot achi reply hai thanx alot
ek famous writer ki lines hain
"There is no magic way for achiving your dreams my friend, always move towards it and discard all those thing that come in the way of achiving it and if you dont expect too much too quickly then one day you will achive your dream"
 intezar ki shab ko to guzarna hi hai to guzar jaega.....
thank u all once again
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honeyrose
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2008, 05:19:02 AM »
Nice one bulbul.. Usual Smile

Aab tanha kar gayee hai appki yaadien
Iss tanha dil ko sambhal na hogha..
Dekhi hai meine appke aankhon mein pyaar..
Kasam Deekar apne se dhoor kar diya hai..
Zindagi appke saath nahi toh kya hua..
Appke saaye mein hi guzar leghe..
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