Naqaam na jaye

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"Sar se mahobbat ka ilzaam na jaye,
Haathon se tera naam na jaye,
Gam ki har roz shaam na jaye,
E khuda, pyaar me koi naqaam na jaye."
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2015, 06:02:49 PM »
पूजा जी ,मन के भाव अति सुंदर अगर हाथो की जगह होठो लिखा जाए और अच्छा लगेगा
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2015, 06:13:46 PM »
bahut khoob waah waah
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2015, 07:28:50 PM »
waah waah bohat khubbbb
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2015, 12:20:29 AM »
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 Applause :clap:very good
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Umda.
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2015, 03:32:59 AM »
bahut khoobsurat waah.
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2015, 05:45:23 AM »
Quote from: Ram Krishan Rastogi on May 24, 2015, 06:02:49 PM
पूजा जी ,मन के भाव अति सुंदर अगर हाथो की जगह होठो लिखा जाए टौर अच्छा लगेगा
Thank you Rastogi ji.
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2015, 05:48:08 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on May 24, 2015, 06:13:46 PM
bahut khoob waah waah
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2015, 05:48:54 AM »
Quote from: jeet jainam on May 24, 2015, 07:28:50 PM
waah waah bohat khubbbb
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«Reply #11 on: May 25, 2015, 05:49:29 AM »
Quote from: ~Hriday~ on May 25, 2015, 12:20:29 AM
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on May 25, 2015, 01:05:07 AM
Umda.
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2015, 05:54:41 AM »
Quote from: surindarn on May 25, 2015, 03:32:59 AM
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