***naye saal par***beete saal ka dard

by tabassum shakeel on December 31, 2006, 01:57:07 PM
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           NAYE SAAL PAR



hazaaron yaaden samet kar khud me
anginat lamhe aansu me doobe
anginat lamhe khilkhilate hue
chand hasin lamhe soch me doobe
chand lahme the tanha tanha se
chand lamhe the bilaunvaan
sirf ahsaas the likhun kaise

ek samander hai motiyon se bhara
beeta saal aur usame doobe hue
yaad ki vaadi me base lamhe

aaj is saal ko bida karte
sab bade khush se nazar aate hain
par mujhe yaad aarahen hain  phir
is hasin saal ke hasin lamhe

isane jo gham diye sar aankhon par
anginat khushiyan bhi to di isane
jsane di mujhko  ye sabhi soughat
main vida kar dun aaj khali haath?

aaj december ki shaam hai aakhir
isaki  saansen bhi doobane ko chalin
nabz bhi isaki jamati jati hai
sui baarah ki aur badhti hai
jaate hue saal ki  ki aakhiri  raat
bheegi  palkon me ek ummeed liye
rok kar apne badhte qadamo ko
tham kar apna sanvla aanchal
sabko hasrat ke saath takti hai

sab khade hain patakhe le le kar
ek andekhe saal ki raah me
aur ik apna aaj bichada hai
dekhta uaski aur koi  nahi?

sirf maine khamosh aankhon se
usaki udasiyon ko  dekha hai
chaand ki aankh me bhi  aansoo the
 aur sitaaron ki  nazaren neechi thin

maine badh ke kaha ae pyare baras
tune hamko bahut si khushiyan din
aaj tu  door hamse jaata hai
alvida alvida ae pyare baras

usake chehare par ek  khushi  ubhari
shayed usko isi ka tha isaraar
aur phir badh chala vo  laane  ko
apne jaisa ek aur naya saal

ab tasalli hai ek  mujhko bhi
ki naye ko  bhi  main mana loongi
gar ise alvida nahi kahti
ik kasak dil ki dil me hi rahti..........


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«Reply #1 on: January 01, 2007, 05:06:38 PM »
Di bilkul sahi likha hai..
Ek ek word aisa lagta hai jaise mere bhi dil ka haal keh diya aapne..
bahut khoob di..
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and Happy new year!!
ghar jaa ke aapko call karti hu main ok..abhi kanpur mei hoon!!
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«Reply #2 on: January 02, 2007, 09:11:16 PM »
Quote from: "pinky"
Di bilkul sahi likha hai..
Ek ek word aisa lagta hai jaise mere bhi dil ka haal keh diya aapne..
bahut khoob di..
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and Happy new year!!
ghar jaa ke aapko call karti hu main ok..abhi kanpur mei hoon!!


aisa kya pinku ?tumko pasand aaya  likhna poora hua ..thanx dear  and same to you .....really missing you .........
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«Reply #3 on: January 02, 2007, 09:12:12 PM »
thanx a lot majid.............
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«Reply #4 on: January 02, 2007, 09:26:16 PM »
its late  to  post this one bcz year is over now but still it is  relavent  to  this topic so  i post it ...............


kanpate hue lamho par thirkate hue
vo dekho ki ik saal phir jaa raha hai
jo rokoge isko  rukega nahi ye
pukaroge isko sunega nahi ye

chhupae hue khud me yaadon ke tohafe
kuchh achchi si yaaden
vo bhari se lamhe
jo ik ik baras se bhi bhari the dil pe
unhe bhi  samete hai gathari me apne.......

jo khologe gathari to kya kya milega
jise hai  bhulaya bamushkil se ae dil
usika zikr hai ,hai  naam uska isame
ki padhte hi jisko  phir nam hongi aankhen
phir nikalega vo waqt bhi  to isise
jise roz bhoolane ka nam lekar
kiya yaad tumane

faqat ik baras ka tha mehaman hamara
kai nematon se hame tha navaza

ye jaata baras hai na hai koi mousam
palat ke jo  aajae phir se dobara

saja kar baharen kisike jahaan me
to lekar ke khushiyan kisise jahaan ki
chala ja raha hai  baras ka musafir
uthaae hai gadhri vo yadon ki bhari

kisi ki hain khushiyan to aansu kisi ke
na aayega ab ye palat ke dobara  
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«Reply #5 on: November 11, 2008, 11:52:57 AM »
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm    Applause Applause


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