nazar se mujhe... (nam)

by poonamA on August 13, 2013, 12:50:33 PM
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Nazar se mujhe gira diya hai tumne
Par kya mujhe kabhi bhula sakoge tum
Yakin hai apne pyar par mujhe itna
Mere pyar ko kabhi mita na sakoge tum

Yaad hogi meri jidhar bhi jaaoge tum
Kabhi kushi ban ke kabhi ban ke gam
Kabhi ban ke hansi kabhi ban ke ansoo
Tadapta har taraf mujhe paaoge tum

Jalti shama hu mai tere pyar mein
Bujhana bhi chaho to bujha na sakoge tum
Naam jo aayega batoo me mera kabhi
Bechain ho dil ko thaam loge tum

Naino me cha jaiega gam ka andhera
Puchega jo yeh zamana tumse
Batana bhi chahoo to bata na sakoge tum
Mujhe kabhi bhula na sakoge tum
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«Reply #1 on: August 13, 2013, 01:11:59 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
hmmm bahut achcha likhe ho poonama ji. bahut dard hai. dheron daaad...
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«Reply #2 on: August 13, 2013, 01:14:22 PM »
nice ... koshish kareN ki feel bayan ho .. hole se..aaraam se..

khair agar mai apne andaaz me kehta to thoda dard kam kar sakta tha..

ab nigaahoN se apni ye keh do sanam
bewafaaii ye chhodeiN wafa bhi kareN~    Abhi Tamrakar
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«Reply #3 on: August 13, 2013, 01:51:32 PM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #4 on: August 13, 2013, 01:55:00 PM »
bahut khoob......... Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 13, 2013, 02:10:33 PM »
dard bhare khayaal..
accha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2013, 02:20:11 PM »
beautiful
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«Reply #7 on: August 13, 2013, 02:23:56 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: August 13, 2013, 02:55:49 PM »
bahut achhe
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2013, 06:12:54 PM »
bahot achey Applause Clapping Smiley Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 14, 2013, 04:06:11 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 17, 2013, 12:56:37 PM »
thx to all
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