need some help

by ashik on November 29, 2004, 03:07:23 AM
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it'l be three months since my gf became my ex...and i need some help writing from u guys

Aaj theen mahine baad main sochta hu
aisa toh nahi ki tumse haseen hoi dekha nahi,
phir sabse hasin lagti ho kyon;
aisa toh nahi ki tumse acha koi mila nahi,
pher sabse achi lagti ho kyon;
aisa bhi nahi ki tumhe hamari jaan ki parvaah hai,
pher jaan se pyaari lagti ho kyon;
Aaj theen mahine baad main sochta hu

I need some help from you guys..i need about 2-3 more stanzas, like ^^ this oen is about her and other gurls..maybe one about how she treated me..how i treated her,  one about how shes HAPPY and im all ALONE..One about how she will never care fo me..how i will always LOVE, CARE fo her all her life..

BUT im out of words..i jus cant write as u guys can guess..can anyone help!!!!! and i dono if this is the write thing to ask..but let e knw if i shudnt..
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