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<>*Nisaar deti hun main*<> Dekha hai aksar tumhe akele me
Chhupke palkein ponchte hue
Mujhe dekh aate achanak
Muuh apna fer lete hue
Jab zid karti main tumse
Nazrein milane ki mujhse
Jhat kisi aur baat pe
Mera dhayn khinchte hue…
Tum kya samjhte ho Janu
Kya main janti nahin
Tumhari aankhon ki bhasha
Kya main padh paati nahin
Guzar rahe ho kis daur se tum
Wo kya samjh paati nahin
Nahin jaan aisa nahin hai kuch bhi
Jaanti hun samjhti hun tumhe
Isily uss pal khamoshi se
Tumhe seene se laga leti hun main
Bina kuch kahe sune hi
Tere dil ki uljhan jaan leti hun main
Kamzor se uss pal me jab tum
Sath mera chhate ho nai taakat pane ko
Apne aap ko bhulkar
Tumhe thaam leti hun main
Ye aansu teri palkon ke
Keh dete hain sab kuch
Aur inpe apna sab kuch
Nisaar deti hun main…!!!!
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nirala
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«Reply #1 on: January 22, 2011, 03:24:17 PM » |
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aapke har sher ka jawaab dega nirala aaj hi.
just wait dear
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«Reply #2 on: January 22, 2011, 04:02:01 PM » |
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waiting for ur reply nirala mastana ji...
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nirala
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«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2011, 04:53:06 PM » |
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haan mai chup kar tujhse
palken apni bhigota hun
kya gujregi tujpar jab tu dekhegi mujhe yun ashq chalkate hue
soch kar yahi muh fer leta hun mai
tu bhi paggi pagal hai deewani hai
mere har kahani kahan tujhse anjaani hai
rota hun kabhi to jehan me khayal sa aata hai
jo tu hoti paas to toot jaata anchal me tere
baanho me tere kho jata uss pal
jahan ke dukh dard bhula deta mai
tu bhi puchti nahi kuch
bas ankhe nam kar,deti h sahas
ashq chalkte hain tere bhi
nhi tu mujhse bhi anjani hai
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«Reply #5 on: January 22, 2011, 05:04:29 PM » |
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh nirala ji wahhhhhhhhhhh
bada hi khubsurat jawab diya hai aapne........mastam ji.....
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«Reply #6 on: January 22, 2011, 05:06:10 PM » |
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parwaz ji main aapke dil ko chhu pai feelings touch kar pai isse badi baat aur kya hogi mere liye....
shukriya ji yunhi sath rahiye hamesha.........
khush rahiye swasth rahiye....
haste rahiye hasate rahiye..
aur aapko pata hai ......
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2011, 05:16:46 PM » |
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aaj mai kahta hun ek baat--
mere paas jada words nahi hote. coz i m a mobile user.
kuch bhi likhta hu limitation hota hai--poora likh hi nahi pata mai.
kam shabdon me kuch baato ko xpress nhi ho paata u knw.
wese aapka thanx jo aapne meri on the spot reply ko thoda pasand kiya.
aap yun hi likhti rahe ji.
ab se ham sirf padhenge bas.
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thanx
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«Reply #8 on: January 22, 2011, 05:53:53 PM » |
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Bahut Hi Sunder Feelings Hai Aapki Kasak Ji Padhkar Hume Accha Laga U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Humesha Khush Rahiye
Nice Reply Nirala JI
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«Reply #9 on: January 22, 2011, 05:57:16 PM » |
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kyun nirala ji aisa kyun keh rahe ho aap.........
hum sabko aapki shayri bht pasand h aap nahin likhenge to hume achcha nahin lagega ji......plzzzzzzzzz
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 05:58:36 PM » |
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KDK ji,
kya likhun samajh nahi paa raha...dil ki bhasha padhne me agar bharat ratn ka purskaar dena mere haath me hota to nishchit hi aapko hi de deta mai...
bahoot hi khoob.........
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«Reply #11 on: January 22, 2011, 06:12:51 PM » |
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arrree ---likh dunga na elizz pilizzz ki kya jarurat. "" na jayenge duur kabhi kahte the woh--- dekho kaise ab sitaaron me kahin GUUM hain wo  "" thanx "" |
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«Reply #12 on: January 22, 2011, 06:28:16 PM » |
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Bahut Hi Sunder Feelings Hai Aapki Kasak Ji Padhkar Hume Accha Laga U Hi Likhte Rahiye Aur Humesha Khush Rahiye
Nice Reply Nirala JI
Rishi
shukriya rishi ji..... |
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«Reply #13 on: January 22, 2011, 06:29:57 PM » |
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KDK ji,
kya likhun samajh nahi paa raha...dil ki bhasha padhne me agar bharat ratn ka purskaar dena mere haath me hota to nishchit hi aapko hi de deta mai...
bahoot hi khoob.........
aapne pasand kiya saraha to apne aap hi puruskar mil gaya humko bekaraar ji.......bas yunhi aap likhte rahiye ..hum bhi sikhte rahenge aapko padh padh k....... |
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