<... Pal ...>

by Just_Hate_Love on November 18, 2005, 04:30:51 PM

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Just_Hate_Love

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Pal pal tarsa hoon is pal ke liye,
Ye pal aaya bhi to kuchh pal ke liye,
Socha ise zindagi ka ek haseen pal banalu,
Par ye pal thehra bhi to kuchh pal ke liye ...


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nirbhay

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«Reply #1 on: November 18, 2005, 04:47:25 PM »

Khoob!!!

Na intezar karna kabhie iss pal ke liye
Na aitbaar karna kabhie iss pal ke liye
ke ye pal aata hai do pal ki muskaan sath liye
chor jata taumra aansu, har pal tarapney ki liye!


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Delicate_Doll

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<... Pal ...>

«Reply #2 on: November 18, 2005, 04:59:24 PM »

nice one ..JHL ..N........Nirbhay


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nirbhay

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«Reply #3 on: November 18, 2005, 05:04:10 PM »

Thnx Salma!!

Na aajmaney mein............ na anjaney mein
Wo pal gaya sanam ki khusiyan jutaney mein
Na aaya wo pal gum ki pal bhulaney mein
Aarzu-o-tamana bhi beh gayi, usko pal ko bulane mein.


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2005, 06:00:53 PM »

Thanks a lot Salma and Nirbhay for appreciation ...

Dard dil ka hothon par sajaye rakhte hai,
Khudko khud se bachaye rakhte hai,
Koi sun na le aahon ko isliye,
Hansi ka pehra labo pe bithaye rakhte hai ...


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nirbhay

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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2005, 07:20:17 PM »

Madam jee Aapke bhaut saare thnx ho gae aaj

YOUR $ MOST $ WELLCOME


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Silence

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<... Pal ...>

«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2005, 12:15:33 AM »

sab ne bohot acha likha!

jhooti hasi labon pe ahon ko to dabati hai,
par ankhon ki udasi chupti nahin,
lak samjhaya man ko bhul ja us bewafa ko,
par dil se ukse liye fariyad koi rukhti nahin!


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isha_verma7

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<... Pal ...>

«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2005, 06:19:01 AM »

wah wah kya baat hai............sab na bahut achaa likha

good work !!!!!!!!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2005, 08:59:40 PM »

Thanks a lot Silence and Isha ...

This is for you both ...

Dooriyaan bahut hai par itna samjhlo,
Paas rehkar bhi koi rishta khaas nahi hota,
Tum dil ke itne karib ho ki,
Dooriyon ka dil ko ehsaas nahi hota ...


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Silence

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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2005, 10:11:47 PM »

bohot ache JHL ji...

kareeb hai tere par hume apne pas na samjho,
udas hai hum bas, hume nirash na samjho,
anjano ke beedh me teri aukat hi kya "Silence",
bas aam hai hum, hume koi kas na samjho!


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Aryaan

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<... Pal ...>

«Reply #10 on: December 06, 2005, 01:41:07 AM »

Wah, Bohat khoob JHL, Nirbhay & Silence...


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Ravi_Dave

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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2005, 02:38:40 AM »

Bhoolakar us pal ki baate is pal main jee,
bharsa kar anskhon se naa us zeher ko pee,
dastaan kabhi yeh humari thi, ke pal pal ki yaadein hain,
ab maut de gaye todh ke us pal ke waade,
zakhmo se chul-li karke, teer-e-nazar chala gaye,
woh is pal mein, har pal ke liye tamashai banagaye!

Bau Saras Bhaio!
Brilliant!


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nirbhay

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«Reply #12 on: December 08, 2005, 12:07:51 PM »

Quote from: "Silence"

bohot ache JHL ji...

kareeb hai tere par hume apne pas na samjho,
udas hai hum bas, hume nirash na samjho,
anjano ke beedh me teri aukat hi kya "Silence",
bas aam hai hum, hume koi kas na samjho!

Bahut bahut Khoob................awesome Silence!!


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Just_Hate_Love

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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2005, 04:14:43 PM »

Thanks all of you and Good job Silence and Ravi ...
Keep it up both ...

Har dhadkan mein raaz hota hai,
Baat ko batane ka ek andaaz hota hai,
Jab tak thokar na lage bewafaai ki,
Har kisiko apne pyaar pe naaz hota hai ...