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superspawn10
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« on: May 03, 2009, 07:53:36 PM »
Dekh use har subah meri aankhon ko thandak milti thi,
Pehen ke naqaab wo jab bhi apni dost ke saath nikalti thi...

Kayi dino tak isi tarah Rab ne chalaya ye silsila,
Door se hi dekhta raha mein use,phir ek din uska ishara mila...

Wo na aayi kabhi mere paas,bus paighaam hi bhejti rahi,
Sahi waqt par uthega yeh pardaah mujhse har baar kehti rahi...

Isse pehle ke wo sahi waqt aata,ek alag sa anjaam aaya,
Tha jiska intezaar,wo to na aayi,khuda ka mujhko paighaam aaya...

Tadap raha tha mein uski ek jhalak ke liye,wo kehti rahi mujhse aur thoda intezaar kar,
Ek din aayi meri qabr par aur kaha,'Le Ruqsat-E-Naqaab hata diya jee bhar ke mera dedaar kar'...

Ye kaisa insaaf hai tera Aye mere Maula,pooch raha ye shabaab hai,
Aaj tune mujhe is pardeh mein rakha hai,aur wo benaqaab hai...

-->Shakeeb Ahmad<---

Shabaab = Youth (young man)
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« Reply #1 on: May 03, 2009, 07:57:38 PM »
bohot hi acha likha hai shakeeb ji.. very touching!!
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« Reply #2 on: May 03, 2009, 07:58:52 PM »
Lovely lines Ahmed ji...

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« Reply #3 on: May 03, 2009, 08:06:45 PM »
Quote from: sanya310 on May 03, 2009, 07:57:38 PM
bohot hi acha likha hai shakeeb ji.. very touching!!
Shukriya sanya ji...bohot shukriya...
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« Reply #4 on: May 03, 2009, 08:07:08 PM »
Quote from: {Angel} on May 03, 2009, 07:58:52 PM
Lovely lines Ahmed ji...

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Thank u angel ji...
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« Reply #5 on: May 03, 2009, 08:11:07 PM »
Khoobsurat andaaze-bayaan hai...
Nice Shakeeb...
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« Reply #6 on: May 03, 2009, 08:15:36 PM »
Quote from: syednaami on May 03, 2009, 08:11:07 PM
Khoobsurat andaaze-bayaan hai...
Nice Shakeeb...
shukriya syed ji..aap sab ki dua ki zaroorat hai...
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« Reply #7 on: May 03, 2009, 08:38:50 PM »
Bahaut khoob... Applause
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« Reply #8 on: May 03, 2009, 08:46:02 PM »
boht khoob likha hai ap ne Ahmed g..!!!
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« Reply #9 on: May 03, 2009, 08:48:55 PM »
Wah ustaad kya keh diya yaar seena cheer ke nikal gaya Makhta to Bohat khoob Shakeeb dil se dad kabool ho.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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« Reply #10 on: May 03, 2009, 09:06:41 PM »
Quote from: dead heart on May 03, 2009, 08:38:50 PM
Bahaut khoob... Applause
Quote from: Sadia Raja on May 03, 2009, 08:46:02 PM
boht khoob likha hai ap ne Ahmed g..!!!
shukriya aap sab ka...
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« Reply #11 on: May 03, 2009, 09:09:08 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 03, 2009, 08:48:55 PM
Wah ustaad kya keh diya yaar seena cheer ke nikal gaya Makhta to Bohat khoob Shakeeb dil se dad kabool ho.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Are sajid bhai...aap to mujhe sharminda kar rahein hain...ustaad to yahan aap sabh log hain...ye to hamari khushnaseebi hai jo hume aap sab ke saath likhna ka mauka mil raha hai...aur haan..aap sab se hi to mein inspire ho raha hoon...
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« Reply #12 on: May 04, 2009, 07:19:45 AM »
SP ji,great work,excellent,
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« Reply #13 on: May 04, 2009, 09:25:25 AM »
Bahut Khoooooooooob SHAKEEB Mere dost.. Kamaal Likha hai..!! Really A Great Poem.. Applause Applause


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« Reply #14 on: May 04, 2009, 10:44:39 AM »
Quote from: superspawn10 on May 03, 2009, 07:53:36 PM
Dekh use har subah meri aankhon ko thandak milti thi,
Pehen ke naqaab wo jab bhi apni dost ke saath nikalti thi...

Kayi dino tak isi tarah Rab ne chalaya ye silsila,
Door se hi dekhta raha mein use,phir ek din uska ishara mila...

Wo na aayi kabhi mere paas,bus paighaam hi bhejti rahi,
Sahi waqt par uthega yeh pardaah mujhse har baar kehti rahi...

Isse pehle ke wo sahi waqt aata,ek alag sa anjaam aaya,
Tha jiska intezaar,wo to na aayi,khuda ka mujhko paighaam aaya...

Tadap raha tha mein uski ek jhalak ke liye,wo kehti rahi mujhse aur thoda intezaar kar,
Ek din aayi meri qabr par aur kaha,'Le Ruqsat-E-Naqaab hata diya jee bhar ke mera dedaar kar'...

Ye kaisa insaaf hai tera Aye mere Maula,pooch raha ye shabaab hai,
Aaj tune mujhe is pardeh mein rakha hai,aur wo benaqaab hai...

-->Shakeeb Ahmad<---

Shabaab = Youth (young man)




waaah waah BAHAUT KHOOB   KYAAA LIKHAA HAI JANAB AAPNEY ....LAJAWAAB.. SS
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