Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann:Shayri-E-Dard

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Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Tumne yun hi kaha tha aayoge,
Apne wade sabhi nibhaoge,
Kab se mahfil saja ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Usko ye aas hai tum aaoge,
Aake apna use banaoge,
Apni palke bichha ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nain.
Jism aur jan luta ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.

Wo na jeeta hai aur na parta hai
Yaad kar kar ke aah bharta hai
Jane kya kya ganwa ke baitha hai
Tumhe khabar hi nahin.
Patanga par jala ke baitha hai,
Tumhe khabr hi nahin.

Mann.mann


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #1 on: August 28, 2011, 04:58:20 PM »

Mann jee Aadab!

Wel come to YOINDIA

Behad khoob ahsaasoN ko aapne achche lafzoN meiN dhala hai
Sabhi warse behad khoob rahe... aapka naya andaaz khoob raha..

Aise hi umda khayaaloN ke saath aate rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #2 on: August 28, 2011, 10:07:14 PM »

shama se puchha aik roz oh neer-e-mehfil,kya khuda ne tujhe baksha nahi ulfat bhara dil,jo gale tujh se mile usko jala deti hai chahne wale ki hasti hi mita deti hai,shama ne aag rakhi sar pe kasam khane ko bakhuda mai ne jalaya nahin parwane ko


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2011, 04:04:31 AM »

thanks parwazji...

thanks


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2011, 04:05:31 AM »

thanks fdesiji....


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #5 on: November 16, 2011, 11:48:29 AM »

Quote from: mann.mann on August 27, 2011, 04:19:07 AM

Bahut khoob mann ji
Likhte rahiye..khush rahiye..


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #6 on: November 16, 2011, 12:01:14 PM »

Quote from: mann.mann on August 27, 2011, 04:19:07 AM

vary good maan ji


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #7 on: November 16, 2011, 12:17:12 PM »

Quote from: mann.mann on August 27, 2011, 04:19:07 AM

Bahut Bahut Khooob Mannji


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #8 on: November 17, 2011, 03:18:45 AM »

bahtu bahut dhanyawad mkvji


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #9 on: November 17, 2011, 03:20:31 AM »

bahut bahut dhanyawad sunilji


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Re: Patanga Par Jala ke Baitha hai.....mann

«Reply #10 on: November 17, 2011, 03:21:51 AM »

bahut bahut dhanyawad khwaishji... wakai dhanya hue aapki daad pa kar


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