Patthar ham ho jaye..... manjum

by manjum on February 28, 2011, 02:36:35 PM
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Patthar ham ho jayen to ab achchha hai.
Dard na ho hamko to ab achchha hai.

Kitni raten gham ki baate guzarin thin,
Bhulen kisi tarah to ab achchha hai.

Apni halat machhli jaisi lagti hai,
Chare main ho kanta to ab achchha hai.

Yun lagta hai koi mushkil aane wali hai,
Sans bhi na aaye to ab achchha hai.

Ab to umr gujarenge us duniyan main,
Koi na apna ho to ab achchha hai.

manjum "mann"
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«Reply #1 on: February 28, 2011, 02:47:46 PM »
apni halat--
bahut khub dard bayan kiya aapne.
nothng to say bout this post.
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«Reply #2 on: February 28, 2011, 02:49:26 PM »
bahut shukriya.........

han jaise machhali chara samjh kar khane jati aur mar jati hai kante main fans kar.....
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«Reply #3 on: February 28, 2011, 02:54:32 PM »
ye galat hai--
apne ko itna bebas mat darsao.
haan post ke lihaaz se bahut umda hai.
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«Reply #4 on: February 28, 2011, 02:56:17 PM »
sorryji....  khyal rakhenge....
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«Reply #5 on: February 28, 2011, 03:05:53 PM »
sorry nahi--
daad lijiye ji lajawaab post ka
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«Reply #6 on: February 28, 2011, 03:06:47 PM »
sorry nahi--
daad lijiye ji lajawaab post ka
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«Reply #7 on: February 28, 2011, 03:09:18 PM »
shukriya ji.....
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«Reply #8 on: February 28, 2011, 10:44:04 PM »
Patthar ham ho jayen to ab achchha hai.
Dard na ho hamko to ab achchha hai.

Kitni raten gham ki baate guzarin thin,
Bhulen kisi tarah to ab achchha hai.

Apni halat machhli jaisi lagti hai,
Chare main ho kanta to ab achchha hai.

Yun lagta hai koi mushkil aane wali hai,
Sans bhi na aaye to ab achchha hai.

Ab to umr gujarenge us duniyan main,
Koi na apna ho to ab achchha hai.

manjum "mann"

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«Reply #9 on: March 01, 2011, 08:51:29 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya BBLji.....
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«Reply #10 on: March 01, 2011, 06:22:36 PM »
BAhut Khub Manjum JI
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«Reply #11 on: March 03, 2011, 08:52:47 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya rishiji......
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2011, 10:52:41 AM »
very good manjumji...... very nice...

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«Reply #13 on: March 03, 2011, 11:20:30 AM »
shukriya tamnnaji....

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«Reply #14 on: March 03, 2011, 04:33:46 PM »
shukriya shihabji... sath rahiye....
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