PATTHAR KI MURAT-----by ghansham das ahuja

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             PATTHAR KI MURAT

dil lagaaya bhi to humne ek patthar ki murat se
lagtaa nahi tha itni sangdil hein unki surat se

vo mumse mile hum unse mile do chaar hui najar
do kadam sath chalke beech mein hi chhoda safar
na jaane kyon mile hum us bevafai ki murat se....

khwaahish thi apni ki hum bhi ho jaayen kisee ke
hoga len-den dil ka aur fir karen pyaar unhin se
par unko shayad matlab tha bas apni mohabbat se....

jarroraten to hoti hein har insaan ki kai
gar ho jayen poori to ubhar aati hein nai
shayad hum hi nahin utre khare unki jaroorat pe...

dil lagaaya bhi to humne ek patthar ki murat se
lagtaa nahi tha itni sangdil hein unki surat se.

ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2012, 03:14:02 AM »
zabardast..........bht badhiya

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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2012, 03:48:24 AM »
nicely expressed--keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2012, 04:16:02 AM »
bahut khoob nazm hai leejiye ek eau
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2012, 05:05:30 AM »
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Bahut  khoooob  !
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2012, 07:39:00 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: May 07, 2012, 06:35:35 PM »
Aadaab Ghanshyaam Das Jee ... !


Achchi kalaam hai janab... ahsaas O khayaal khoob rahe...
Humari daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   
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«Reply #7 on: May 07, 2012, 06:56:13 PM »
saudagar ji thanks
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«Reply #8 on: May 07, 2012, 06:57:36 PM »
Quote from: killbill on May 07, 2012, 03:48:24 AM
nicely expressed--keep it up
killbill ji, tareef ke liye shukriya
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«Reply #9 on: May 07, 2012, 06:58:54 PM »
thank u saini sahab
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2012, 07:00:04 PM »
thank you siddiqui sahb apki bhi tali milee to mein dhanya ho gaya
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«Reply #11 on: May 07, 2012, 07:01:26 PM »
anahita ji aapki taliya mera utsah badati hain thanku-
ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #12 on: May 07, 2012, 07:03:32 PM »
parwaaz sahab aapko bhi mera kalam pasand aaya jankar khushi hui duaon ke liye aabhar prakat karta hoon thanks.--
ghansham das ahuja
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