PattharoN se Maara hai....!

by Sifarr on January 20, 2010, 05:21:54 PM
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सलाम,
दिल के जज़्बात है ज्यूँ के त्यूं रख रहा हूँ ... बाकी आपकी इनायत...

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बहर:- हजज़ मुसम्मन अश्तर (212 1222 212 1222)
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नज़रों पे हुआ रोशन अश्कों का सितारा है...
क्या हसीन मंज़र है, मौत का नज़ारा है ...

गर्द* अब हटा दो उस कब्र से मेरे यारों...
नाम जाने कब से जिस पर, लिखा हमारा है

हो गया यकीं, अपनी भी शिकस्त का मुझको ..
डूबती सी कश्ती, उजड़ा हुआ किनारा है..

है गुमाँ ये काज़िब* अपनी अदाओं पे तुम को...
खुद से लड़ते लड़ते कोई थका है हारा है...

तोड देती है दम ये कहते कहते मोहब्बत...
मुफलिसी* मे होता, मुशकिल बड़ा गुज़ारा है ..

क्यूँ तलाशते हो इन गजलों मे बहर जिद से ..
जब 'सिफर' ने कागज़ पे बस लहू उतारा है...

और ...!

था सोचा कि होगी इज्ज़त से रुखसती अपनी...
जाने क्यूँ हमे सबने पत्थरों से मारा है ...

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कुनाल (सिफर) - 20-01-2010
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*गर्द ----- मिटटी
*काज़िब --- झूठा
*मुफलिसी - ग़रीबी




In Roman:-


Salaam,… Dil ke jazbaat hai jyuN ke tyuN rakh raha huN,,,

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Behar :- Hazaj musamman Ashtar (212 1222 212 1222)
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NazroN pe hua roshan ashkoN ka sitaara hai..
Kya haseeN manzar hai maut kaa nazaara hai…

Gard*ab hata do us kabra se mere yaaroN..
Naam jaane kab se jis par likha humaara hai…


Ho gaya yakeeN apni bhi shikast ka mujhko,..
Doobti si kashti, ujda hua kinaara hai …

Hai gumaaN ye kaazib apni adaaoN pe tum ko...
Khud se ladte ladte koi thaka hai haara hai…

Tod deti hai dum ye kehte kehte mohabbat…
Muflisi* mai hota mushkil bada guzaara hai…

KyuN talaashte ho in ghazloN mai behr zid se..
haaN ‘sifar’ ne kaagaz pe bas lahu utaara hai..

Aur...!

Tha sochaa ki hogi izzat se rukhsati apni.,,
Jaane kyuN humeN sabne pattharoN se maara hai…

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Kunaal(Sifar) – 20-01-2010
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*Gard - Mitti, Dust
*Kaazib - Jhoota, False
*Muflisi - Ghareebi, Poor ness
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«Reply #1 on: January 20, 2010, 05:25:23 PM »
Nice Lines Siffar Ji & Welcome To Yo

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«Reply #2 on: January 20, 2010, 05:34:23 PM »
Wah wah Kunal Sahab, waqai behad khubsoorat, murassa, bamaani, adabi ghazal kahi hai aapne. Saath mein behr ka naam aur irkaan bhi bataye, ye bhi bahut achha kiya. Mujh se naye likhne walon ko behr ki kuchh jankari ho jayegi. Aap apni ghazals etc. post karte rahiye. Thanks.
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«Reply #3 on: January 20, 2010, 05:36:54 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: January 20, 2010, 07:12:58 PM »
Bahut Khub SIfarr Ji
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«Reply #5 on: January 20, 2010, 07:53:34 PM »
dil ko Qushi mili jo Aap aye  wah wah wah
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«Reply #6 on: January 20, 2010, 09:24:51 PM »
Bahut bahut bahut bahut khoooooooob Siffar ji....jitni taarif kare utni kam....
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yoindia mein swagat hai aapka........ wave hello2
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«Reply #7 on: January 20, 2010, 10:26:16 PM »
Nice Lines Siffar Ji & Welcome To Yo



Bohat jyada shukraguzaar huN aapka .. aapne mujhe pehla reply kiya hai yahan.. main aapko humesha yaad rakhunga ...

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«Reply #8 on: January 20, 2010, 10:28:41 PM »
Wah wah Kunal Sahab, waqai behad khubsoorat, murassa, bamaani, adabi ghazal kahi hai aapne. Saath mein behr ka naam aur irkaan bhi bataye, ye bhi bahut achha kiya. Mujh se naye likhne walon ko behr ki kuchh jankari ho jayegi. Aap apni ghazals etc. post karte rahiye. Thanks.

Shukriya saahab...

Darasal behr saaf karne ka maqsad yahi tha.. ki jo padh rahe hai kuch jaan sake .. waise mujha khaak main koi khaas ilm nahi hai .. par aapke nazar-e-inaayan ka shukriya

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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2010, 10:29:49 PM »
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SHukriya...

aapki har izzat afzaayi kaa

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«Reply #10 on: January 21, 2010, 01:09:56 AM »
Kha ke patthar lahu mera bola...
Wah! kya maara hai..............

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«Reply #11 on: January 21, 2010, 01:22:15 AM »
Wah Kunal ji very touching and beautiful gazal.great creation.welcome to yo.nice lines Pandey ji. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: January 21, 2010, 11:46:55 AM »
 Applause Dil chhoo lene wali rachna hai
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«Reply #13 on: February 04, 2010, 11:50:27 PM »
dil ko Qushi mili jo Aap aye  wah wah wah

shukriya saahab

aap aaye ..

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«Reply #14 on: February 04, 2010, 11:53:07 PM »
Bahut Khub SIfarr Ji

Shukriya sir ..

aane ke liye padhne ke liye...
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