:: Pehchaan liya karte hain ::

by myheart_ursonly on February 02, 2006, 06:02:24 PM
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This poem is not written by me. I liked it and i thought why not share with all you people...

Author : Rajiv Namdev

hum to har baat ko yun hi maan liya karte hain,
tum kaho ya na kaho ye hum jaan liya karte hain.

hum to sochte rahe dilo jaan hai humari,
na jaane wo kya jaan liya karte hain.

tere har sitam pe khamosh reh gaye hum,
jakhm jo tune diye pehchaan liya karte hain.

tumhari jaan jo bakshi to kya yahi kam hai,
karke julm hum par hi ahesaan liya karte hain.

ye dil tod diya usne ab ye keh kar,
nahin puraana wo samaan liya karte hain!
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2006, 06:08:47 PM »
Wow lovely,last two lines to ekdam amazing type ki hain :thumb: .
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2006, 06:43:48 PM »
Amit

Good work by Rajiv Namdev

Thanks for sharing with us...

Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2006, 07:27:04 PM »
Bohat khoob Amit....
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«Reply #4 on: February 03, 2006, 05:45:11 PM »
gud one hearty bhai!!

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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2006, 11:08:23 AM »
wah.............amazing   yaar..........bahot acchi  poem  hai....... nixe  post Amit...........
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2006, 01:48:06 PM »
gud one amit, thnx fr sharing Usual Smile
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