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by phoenix on April 29, 2011, 12:00:42 AM
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Puraani pehchaan ka naya visaal chahta hai

dafn hai mujhmein mujhise gum-gusaar chahta hai

ek baar kho ke mil kya liya main

vo baarahaa yehi kamaal chahta hai

 

Pehli baar jisse chhupke chale the paidal

is raat ye vo hi hilaal chahta ha

iy'un bhi maslaa samjhta kahaan dil

kab ye kisko muhaal chahta hai

 

4 ungliyo'n se do haatho'n ki tapakta

ek achaar ka tukda fir niwaal chahta hai

kandhe pe tere aadhaa latakke chalta,

Fir vo manzar bemisaal chahta hai

 

Parasti husn ki aur misaail hai

nahin fir milega gar tu dil-e-jamaal chahta hai

samet ke liye jaunga main to rishta lekin tu soch

kaun karega tera jo mujhsa khayaal chahta hai

 

Paagalpan naadaani ki sarhad pe panaptaa hai

hum isliye bichchhde k vo zindagi se karna sawaal chahta hai

Ek tarfaa tamaasha hai mijaaz mere yaar ka

Vo aadhe takiya se dena mehak nikaal chahta hai

 

Puraani pehchaan ka naya visaal chahta hai....
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2011, 12:26:55 AM »
superb superb poetry dear…………
dil se daad…


wo naadan,hakikat ko kar darkinaar
sirf ek haseen khuwab chahta hai……

hua hi nahi aaghaaz abhi, nazro ke milne ka
wo naadaan,jaise ek puranzaam chahta hai………
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«Reply #2 on: April 29, 2011, 10:31:39 AM »
Janab Aadaab !

Bahut khoob ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai aapne .. Usual Smile
Behad achchi kalaam kahi hai aapne Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye...
Aate rahiye,
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2011, 03:56:17 PM »
Very Nice Creation ....Phonix Ji !

very touching .... good expression ... dil se daad !!!!
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