PEHLE

by heena i.s on July 28, 2012, 04:41:17 PM
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pehle tere pyar ne jine nhi diya
ab teri yade tadpati hai

pehle tujhse nazdikiyo ne jine nhi diya
ab tujhse duri satati hai

jaan nhi hai meri jism me
ab to sirf ye saanse chalti hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 28, 2012, 04:43:55 PM »
bahut khub heena ji bahut hi lajawab likha hai aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 28, 2012, 04:44:32 PM »
pehle tere pyar ne jine nhi diya
ab teri yade tadpati hai

pehle tujhse nazdikiyo ne jine nhi diya
ab tujhse duri satati hai

jaan nhi hai meri jism me
ab to sirf ye saanse chalti hai
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«Reply #3 on: July 28, 2012, 04:58:26 PM »
bahut sunder
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«Reply #4 on: July 28, 2012, 11:15:20 PM »
acha hai ---
very gud
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2012, 12:11:53 AM »
bahut khoob  Applause Applause
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masoom shahjada
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2012, 02:29:15 AM »
Heena jee aadab
aapne bahoot khoobsoorat kalam likha hai.
Par yaha mai kuch kahne kee izazat chahunga.
Aapne last line me chaltee hai likha hai . Agar aap usko badal kar chalaatee hai kar de aour khoobsurat lagegaa.
Ye meree jaatee rai hai pasand aaye to es par amal karna aour agar pasand naa aaye to es par gaur hee naa dena.
.........masoom.......
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2012, 02:56:45 AM »
Heena jee aadab
aapne bahoot khoobsoorat kalam likha hai.
Par yaha mai kuch kahne kee izazat chahunga.
Aapne last line me chaltee hai likha hai . Agar aap usko badal kar chalaatee hai kar de aour khoobsurat lagegaa.
Ye meree jaatee rai hai pasand aaye to es par amal karna aour agar pasand naa aaye to es par gaur hee naa dena.
.........masoom.......

Masoom ji hum to ab ye saasen chalate bhi nhi hai.
agar hamare bas me hota to inko kab ka rok dete.
par bas ye saasen chalti hai.

isliye chalti hai likh diya...


vaise aap sab ka shukriya daad dene ka
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2012, 05:54:10 AM »
ApplauseApplauseApplause bahut khub hina ji .. keep writing..
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