pilaate rahe

by salil2002 on January 23, 2009, 04:54:22 AM
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mehfil mein jamm se jaam takraate rahe
har khanak kii awaaz se kuch toot kar bikhar jaate rahe
sheesho ko sajaya bade salike se tha maine
saaki kii nazar se woh behak jaate rahe
karli tauba kii ab haath na lagayenge jaam ko
woh apni nigahon se oos shaam pilaate rahe
seene kii aag har pal bhadakti rahi
hum saari raat oose Maye se bujhaate rahe
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2009, 05:22:59 AM »
wah SALIL, bahut khoob

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k.shael
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2009, 05:48:06 AM »
mehfil mein jamm se jaam takraate rahe
har khanak kii awaaz se kuch toot kar bikhar jaate rahe
sheesho ko sajaya bade salike se tha maine
saaki kii nazar se woh behak jaate rahe
karli tauba kii ab haath na lagayenge jaam ko
woh apni nigahon se oos shaam pilaate rahe
seene kii aag har pal bhadakti rahi
hum saari raat oose Maye se bujhaate rahe



Bahut khoob, bahut hi pyara likha hai Salil,

Wo saari raat mehfil me mulaqat-e-yaar batate rahe,
Ham lekar jaam haathon me dil ke dard ko dabaate rahe,

Kon jaane ki wo apni baaton se hame jalate rahe,
Sun Sun ke unki mastiyaan ham tadaf jaate rahe,

Jiski chaah me ham aksar khud ko bhulate rahe,
Wahi aaj hame gairo se bhi gair nazar aate rahe.

Shally.
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2009, 05:56:12 AM »

Bahut khoob, bahut hi pyara likha hai Salil,

Wo saari raat mehfil me mulaqat-e-yaar batate rahe,
Ham lekar jaam haathon me dil ke dard ko dabaate rahe,

Kon jaane ki wo apni baaton se hame jalate rahe,
Sun Sun ke unki mastiyaan ham tadaf jaate rahe,

Jiski chaah me ham aksar khud ko bhulate rahe,
Wahi aaj hame gairo se bhi gair nazar aate rahe.

Shally.

very nice shally

jasbir singh
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2009, 05:58:31 AM »
Nice one Salil Ji
N Shally Ji
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cara
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2009, 06:03:51 AM »
kya baat hai ..salil ji.......

mehfil mein jaam se jaam takrate rahe,
ham pite rahe, aur "wo" pilaate rahe.

dil mein aag hamaare bharadhak ti rahi,
aur "wo", aur aag lagate rahe.

itni chad gayi thi hum ko, pata na chala ki hum kya kar rahe,
dil ki aag "wo"s ke badle,ooes maye se bhujaate rahe.


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salil2002
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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2009, 10:30:57 AM »
thanks jasbir and rajesh bhai
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salil2002
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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2009, 10:34:45 AM »

Bahut khoob, bahut hi pyara likha hai Salil,

Wo saari raat mehfil me mulaqat-e-yaar batate rahe,
Ham lekar jaam haathon me dil ke dard ko dabaate rahe,

Kon jaane ki wo apni baaton se hame jalate rahe,
Sun Sun ke unki mastiyaan ham tadaf jaate rahe,

Jiski chaah me ham aksar khud ko bhulate rahe,
Wahi aaj hame gairo se bhi gair nazar aate rahe.

Shally.
nice one shally

har zakhm ko seete rahe
har gham ko bhulaate rahe
tere ghar kii sadak kaanton se bhari thi
phir bhi teri taraf kadam badaate rahe
tere darwaaze pe dum tod diya deewaane ne
aur tum gairon ka dil behlaate rahe
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salil2002
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2009, 10:38:19 AM »
kya baat hai ..salil ji.......

mehfil mein jaam se jaam takrate rahe,
ham pite rahe, aur "wo" pilaate rahe.

dil mein aag hamaare bharadhak ti rahi,
aur "wo", aur aag lagate rahe.

itni chad gayi thi hum ko, pata na chala ki hum kya kar rahe,
dil ki aag "wo"s ke badle,ooes maye se bhujaate rahe.



nice one cara

kii woh aur honge jo bhool gaye teri bewafaai ko
humse kissa koi bhoola nahin jaata
woh aur honge jo behak jaate hain ek nazar se
yahan maikhana bhi hai kam pad jaata
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2009, 10:41:11 AM »
Nice One salil Bhai,.
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salil2002
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2009, 10:49:12 AM »
Nice One salil Bhai,.

thnks azeem yaar kuch likha nahin

nasha bad na jaaye jara sambhal kar jaam banana
kii aaj saaki bhi mujhe sambhalne nahin aayega
jo behak jaun mein toh oonki tasveer dikha dena
dard se suroor kuch ootar jaayega.....
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