qabr mein aa ke yoon laga mujh ko

by mazHur on February 01, 2011, 08:16:10 PM
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zindagi tujh se dar gaya tha mein
marne se pehe mar gaya tha mein

mujh ko buzdil na tum samajh laina
jo bhi karna tha kar gaya tha mein!

qabr mein aa ke yoon laga mujh ko
jaise apnay hee ghar gaya tha mein

Ghum Naseebi mera muqaddar thee
zinda  kab tha ke mar gaya tha mein

kuch nahi is jahaan mein dukh ke siwa
gul kee tarah bikhar gaya tha mein

Zulm sehnay kee bhi koi hadd thee
Sher ban kar biphar gaya tha mein!

Sohbat-e-gul mein khaar ho jaisay
rung-o-kushboo se bhar  gaya tha mein

Un ko waada  reha na yaad  apna
per ye kehna mukar gaya tha mein!

Pur farishtoan ke  jal hee jayein jahan
un se milne udhar gaya tha mein
 
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«Reply #1 on: February 01, 2011, 08:21:11 PM »
bahoooooot khoooob janab
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«Reply #2 on: February 01, 2011, 11:23:13 PM »
Bahut hi badiya Mazhur ji.wonderful n excellent creation,hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: February 01, 2011, 11:54:24 PM »
AAp sub dostoan ka shukria!!:)

Tum salamat raho hazaar barus
her barus ke hoan din pachaas hazaar!
(Ghalib)
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2011, 05:05:12 AM »
zindagi tujh se dar gaya tha mein
marne se pehe mar gaya tha mein

mujh ko buzdil na tum samajh laina
jo bhi karna tha kar gaya tha mein!

qabr mein aa ke yoon laga mujh ko
jaise apnay hee ghar gaya tha mein

Ghum Naseebi mera muqaddar thee
zinda  kab tha ke mar gaya tha mein

kuch nahi is jahaan mein dukh ke siwa
gul kee tarah bikhar gaya tha mein

Zulm sehnay kee bhi koi hadd thee
Sher ban kar biphar gaya tha mein!

Sohbat-e-gul mein khaar ho jaisay
rung-o-kushboo se bhar  gaya tha mein

Un ko waada  reha na yaad  apna
per ye kehna mukar gaya tha mein!

Pur farishtoan ke  jal hee jayein jahan
un se milne udhar gaya tha mein
 

Bahut Umdaa Soch ke saath likha hai aapne ... mazHur !

sabhi ashaar bahut khoob lage hume ... dil se daad !
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«Reply #5 on: February 02, 2011, 05:11:23 AM »
kya baat hai mazharji... bahut khub dil se daad aapko.....
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Matrix Guy
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«Reply #6 on: February 02, 2011, 05:12:36 AM »
bahot khoob majhur ji ........bahot hi umda likha he.....bahot bahot badhaiya apko.....
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nirala
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2011, 11:40:20 AM »
kamaal ki poetry.
lajawaab jhakashhh
behtareen soch
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2011, 01:59:21 PM »
Bahut Khub Mazhur JI
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